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Example Question #1461 : Improving Sentences
Most men feel very uncomfortable reveal their feelings to loved ones.
reveal they're feelings
revealed their feelings
reveal there feelings
reveal their feelings
revealing their feelings
revealing their feelings
The use of the present tense verb "reveal" is confusing in the sentence, as it essentially would act as a second verb in the sentence. The verb needs to be changed to a form that can function as a non-verb. The only answer choice that does this is "revealing their feelings," which uses the gerundive form.
Example Question #1462 : Improving Sentences
Politicians having grown increasingly aware of the proper way to deal with the media in recent years.
Politicians have grown increasingly aware
Politicians having grown increasing aware
Politicians having grown increasingly aware
Politicians growing increasingly aware
Politicians having grown increased aware
Politicians have grown increasingly aware
The use of "having grown" in the sentence actually makes the sentence not have a verb, because the use of that verb creates a verbal phrase. The sentence needs the phrase "having grown" to be turned into an actual verb. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Politicians have grown increasingly aware."
Example Question #1462 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The new law was specifically targeted people making over one million dollars each year.
specific targeting of people
specifically targeted of people
specifically targeting people
specific targeted people
specifically targeted people
specifically targeting people
Whlie one might say that something "was targeted," one cannot say that something "was targeted" something else and be grammatically correct. As only "targeted" is underlined, and not "was," it needs to be changed. Of all the answer choices, only "specifically targeting people" corrects the sentence's error without introducing new errors or extraneous words.
Example Question #1463 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The soldiers keeping watch through the whole night as ordered.
The soldiers keeping watching
The soldier's keeping watch
The soldiers keep watch
The soldiers keeping watch
The soldiers keeping watch
The soldiers keep watch
The use of "keeping" in the sentence is incorrect, as "keeping" needs some version of the verb "to be" to form a functioning verb. (In the phrase "the soldiers keeping watch," "keeping" is a participle.) The verb must be changed to a form that can work in the sentence. The only choice that does this and keeps the intended meaning is "The soldiers keep watch."
Example Question #603 : Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The tiny force holding down the fort until help came three days later.
The tiny force that holding down the fort
The tiny force holding down the fort
The tiny force held down the fort
The tiny force, holding down the fort,
The tiny force holds down the fort
The tiny force held down the fort
The use of the participle "holding" means that there is no actual verb in the sentence. Not only does the form have to change, but the use of "came" later in the sentence means the verb form needs to be the past tense. "The tiny force held down the fort" is the only answer choice that uses the correct tense.
Example Question #604 : Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The athlete obsessing over his team's loss for the entire offseason.
The athlete obsessed over
The athlete being obsessing over
The athlete to obsess over
The athlete obsessing over
The athlete obsessing around
The athlete obsessed over
The use of the participle "obsessing" actually makes the sentence have no verb, as a participle cannot stand as a verb without some form of the verb "to be." "Obsessing" needs to be changed to an appropriate verb form to make the sentence complete. The only answer choice that uses a correct verb form is "The athlete obsessed over."
Example Question #141 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The child considering the model truck his favorite toy as soon as he played with it.
The child considering of the model truck
The child considering that model truck
The child's considering the model truck
The child considering the model truck
The child considered the model truck
The child considered the model truck
The use of the participle form "considering" in the sentence actually causes the sentence to not have a verb. A participle needs some form of the verb "to be" to make a complete verb phrase. "The child considered the model truck," which uses a simple past tense verb, is the only answer choice that corrects this issue.
Example Question #141 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The old woman keeping mementos throughout her entire life.
The old woman kept
The old woman is keeping
The old woman keeping
The old woman keeps
The old woman keep
The old woman kept
The use of "keeping" as the only verb in the sentence is wrong, as "keeping" is a present participle, and a present participle always needs some form of the verb "to be" to precede it to create a verbal phrase. Additionally, the sentence needs to employ a past tense verb because its action takes place in the past. As such, the only answer choice that fulfills these requirements is "The old woman kept."
Example Question #242 : Verb Formation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The new CEO was astonishing at the state of the company's finances.
The new CEO was astonishing
The new CEO was astonished
The new CEO is astonishing
The new CEO astonishing
The new CEO were astonishing
The new CEO was astonished
The verbal phrase "was astonishing" is structured as though the CEO is astonishing the company's finances. The only answer choice that fixes this issue is "The new CEO was astonished."
Example Question #142 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The woman hoarding animals in unsafe conditions, which got her charged by the animal control services.
The woman hoarding animals in unsafe condition,
The woman hoarding animals in the unsafe conditions,
The woman was hoarding animals in unsafe conditions,
The woman hoarding animals in unsafe conditions,
The woman hoard animals in unsafe conditions,
The woman was hoarding animals in unsafe conditions,
The use of "hoarding" makes the sentence contain no actual verb, as the present participle "hoarding" needs to be preceded by some form of the verb "to be" to make a complete verb phrase. "The woman was hoarding animals in unsafe conditions," is the only answer choice that inserts the appropriate word.
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