SAT Writing : Improving Sentences
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Example Question #141 : Correcting Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Many psychologists now argue that vacations being one of the best ways for people to reduce their stress.
are one of the best ways
being one of the best ways
being one of the best way
being one the best ways
being one for the best ways
are one of the best ways
The use of "being" makes the sentence actually not have a verb, as "being" is a gerund, or a verb form that is used as a noun. The sentence needs to be changed so that it contains a verb. The only answer choice that corrects the issue is "are one of the best ways."
Example Question #144 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The young boy holding onto his teddy bear throughout the stressful trip.
The young boy holding onto his' teddy bear
The young boy holding to his teddy bear
The young boy holding on his teddy bear
The young boy held onto his teddy bear
The young boy holding onto his teddy bear
The young boy held onto his teddy bear
The use of the participle form "holding" makes the sentence actually have no practical verb, as a participle needs some form of the verb "to be" in order to function as the verb in the sentence. Either a version of "to be" needs to be put in the sentence, or "holding" should be changed to a proper verb form. "The young boy held onto his teddy bear" is the only answer choice that does either.
Example Question #143 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The storm creating havoc from the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The storm creating havoc from the moments it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The storm creating havoc at the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The storm creating havoc from the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The storm created havoc from the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The storm creating havoc from the moment it made landfall near a coastal resort.
The storm created havoc from the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort.
The use of the participle "creating" in the sentence makes the sentence not have a verb, as a participle needs some form of the verb "to be" to create a full verb for a sentence. Either the verb needs to be changed or have a form of "to be" added in. The only answer choice that does either is "The storm created havoc from the moment it made landfall near the coastal resort."
Example Question #611 : Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
It is widely believed that working for the government usually requires the employee willing to take a substantial pay cut.
usually requires the employee willing to take
usually requires the employee to be willing to take
usually required the employee willing to take
usually requires the employee willing taking
usual requires the employee willing to take
usually requires the employee to be willing to take
The sentence actually has no verb as written, as the word that is trying to function as a verb, "willing," is a participle that cannot stand alone as a verb. Instead, it needs a form of the verb "to be" attached to it to fully function as the verb in the sentence. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "usually requires the employee to be willing to take," as it is the only one that employs such a usage.
Example Question #144 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Their mother keeping her promises, and each child picked out a new toy.
Their mother kept her promises
Their mother keeping up her promises
Their mother keeping her promises
Their mother keeps her promises
Their mother in keeping her promises
Their mother kept her promises
The underlined portion of the sentence is one part of a compound sentence, and can therefore function as a complete sentence structurally. However, the participle "keeping" cannot stand alone as a verb, and the proper verb needs to match the past tense "picked" in the second clause of the sentence. "Their mother kept her promises" is the only answer choice that features the correct verb form.
Example Question #544 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Working out of a former garage, the business growing rapidly into a multinational corporation.
the business growing rapid
the business growing more rapidly
that business growing rapidly
the business grew rapidly
the business growing rapidly
the business grew rapidly
The use of the participle "growing" makes the sentence actually not have a verb, as a participle needs some form of the verb "to be" to make a complete verbal phrase. "Growing" needs to be changed to a verb that can work on its own as the main verb of the sentence. The only answer choice to do so is "the business grew rapidly."
Example Question #31 : Correcting Other Verb Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The team working toward a common goal.
The team's working toward a common goal.
The team worked toward a common goal.
The team working toward a commoner goal.
The team working toward a common goal.
The team working toward the common goal.
The team worked toward a common goal.
The use of the participle "working" as the verb in the sentence is incorrect, as a participle needs some form of the verb "to be" with it to complete a full verbal phrase. The verb "working" needs to be changed to a proper verb form. The only answer choice that uses a correct verb form is "The team worked toward a common goal."
Example Question #546 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
The old woman keeping pets in unsafe conditions that were against the law.
The old woman keeping pets around unsafe conditions
The old woman keeping pets in unsafer conditions
The old woman keeping pets in unsafe conditions
The old woman keeping pets in unsafe condition
The old woman kept pets in unsafe conditions
The old woman kept pets in unsafe conditions
The use of the participle "keeping" as the verb in the sentence means the sentence actually does not have a verb, as a participle needs a version of the verb "to be" to make a usable verbal phrase. The only answer choice that appropriately takes care of this problem by changing the verb form is "The old woman kept pets in unsafe conditions."
Example Question #32 : Correcting Other Verb Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The reclusive man never keeping up with any of his old friends.
The reclusive man not keeping up with any of his old friends.
The reclusive man not ever keeping up with any of his old friends.
The reclusive man never kept up with any of his old friends.
The reclusive man never keeping up with any of his old friends.
The reclusive man never keeping up among any of his old friends.
The reclusive man never kept up with any of his old friends.
The use of the participle "keeping" makes the sentence have no actual verb, as a participle needs some form of the verb "to be" in order to stand as the main verb of a sentence. The verb form should be changed to one that can actually function as a verb in the sentence. "The reclusive man never kept up with any of his old friends," which uses the past tense verb "kept," is the only answer choice that uses a correct verb form.
Example Question #841 : Psat Writing Skills
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The project's construction workers had never seeing a building like the new concert hall.
had never seeing the building
had not ever seeing a building
have never seeing the building
had never seeing a building
had never seen a building
had never seen a building
"Seeing" is an incorrect verb form, as it is a present participle, used with a past tense verb, "had." The verb form needs to be changed to make it the past participle form. The only answer choice that uses the correct verb form is "had never seen a building."
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