ACT English : Correcting Grammatical Errors

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Example Question #881 : Act English

“Democracy—Always a Good Thing?”

In the contemporary world, we tend to think that democracy is always the best form of government.  We are enchanted by the idea of self-governance for it seems to affirm the maturity of the citizens of a nation.  Instead of being ruled by benign-monarchs or the landed-aristocracy, the citizens of a democracy are people who exercise self-mastery in a fully human manner.  Well, at least this is what we tend to think of the matter.

Really, however, democracy is an ambiguous affair.  Often, we use such single terms to name two different types of social arrangements.  Such an equivocation is understandable.  Whenever all (or at least most) of the people take part in political life, it seems like we have a kind of democracy.  However, it is important to make a clearer distinction.

On the one hand, there can be a community that aims at the common good.  In such a group, the people come together to have a political community that aims to fulfill human goals that could not be done by isolated individuals.  Such a group will come together to establish educational institutions to preserve culture, regulate commerce in order to help normalize economic interactions, pass many laws that regulate our social interactions, and undertake many other affairs.  Although all of these things benefit the individuals in the given society, such a group of self-governing people do not aim merely at the private satisfaction of the people.  This kind of “democracy” works together, for common political goals.

On the other hand, there can be a community that merely aims at the private goods of the citizens.  The Greek philosopher Aristotle remarked in his text, the Politics,  that democracy was a government by the numerous poor people for the sake of those same people’s private goods.  Clearly, he was using “democracy” in this sense.  If the people of a nation only come together in order to assure their own private freedom and to receive benefits for themselves, a given society is this kind of so-called democracy.

Of course, it is difficult to say what is the state of any particular nation today.  Often, elements of each of these kinds of governance is found in a given country at a particular time.  Still, it is important to be aware that such an “equivocation” is possible.  Otherwise, we will end up saying rather foolish things like, “Democracy is always a good form of government,” or, “democracy is a horrible form of government.”

Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded and underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

of self-governance, for it

NO CHANGE

of self-governance, for, it

of self governance for it

Correct answer:

of self-governance, for it

Explanation:

In this sentence, note that there is a change of subjects after the preposition "for." In the first clause, it is "We." In the second, the subject is "it" (namely, "the idea of self-governance"). This means that you need to place a comma before "for." This indicates in an explicit manner with punctuation this change of subjects.

Example Question #882 : Act English

“Democracy—Always a Good Thing?”

In the contemporary world, we tend to think that democracy is always the best form of government.  We are enchanted by the idea of self-governance for it seems to affirm the maturity of the citizens of a nation.  Instead of being ruled by benign-monarchs or the landed-aristocracy, the citizens of a democracy are people who exercise self-mastery in a fully human manner.  Well, at least this is what we tend to think of the matter.

Really, however, democracy is an ambiguous affair.  Often, we use such single terms to name two different types of social arrangements.  Such an equivocation is understandable.  Whenever all (or at least most) of the people take part in political life, it seems like we have a kind of democracy.  However, it is important to make a clearer distinction.

On the one hand, there can be a community that aims at the common good.  In such a group, the people come together to have a political community that aims to fulfill human goals that could not be done by isolated individuals.  Such a group will come together to establish educational institutions to preserve culture, regulate commerce in order to help normalize economic interactions, pass many laws that regulate our social interactions, and undertake many other affairs.  Although all of these things benefit the individuals in the given society, such a group of self-governing people do not aim merely at the private satisfaction of the people.  This kind of “democracy” works together, for common political goals.

On the other hand, there can be a community that merely aims at the private goods of the citizens.  The Greek philosopher Aristotle remarked in his text, the Politics,  that democracy was a government by the numerous poor people for the sake of those same people’s private goods.  Clearly, he was using “democracy” in this sense.  If the people of a nation only come together in order to assure their own private freedom and to receive benefits for themselves, a given society is this kind of so-called democracy.

Of course, it is difficult to say what is the state of any particular nation today.  Often, elements of each of these kinds of governance is found in a given country at a particular time.  Still, it is important to be aware that such an “equivocation” is possible.  Otherwise, we will end up saying rather foolish things like, “Democracy is always a good form of government,” or, “democracy is a horrible form of government.”

Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded and underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

works together, for, common political goals

NO CHANGE

works together for common political goals

works together, for common-political goals

Correct answer:

works together for common political goals

Explanation:

In addition to being a conjunction, the word "for" can be used as a preposition as well. It is in this sense that it is being used in this sentence. We could read the selection as stating, "Works together for the sake of common political goals." Because it is being used in this manner, there is no need for a comma before it.

Example Question #883 : Act English

“Democracy—Always a Good Thing?”

In the contemporary world, we tend to think that democracy is always the best form of government.  We are enchanted by the idea of self-governance for it seems to affirm the maturity of the citizens of a nation.  Instead of being ruled by benign-monarchs or the landed-aristocracy, the citizens of a democracy are people who exercise self-mastery in a fully human manner.  Well, at least this is what we tend to think of the matter.

Really, however, democracy is an ambiguous affair.  Often, we use such single terms to name two different types of social arrangements.  Such an equivocation is understandable.  Whenever all (or at least most) of the people take part in political life, it seems like we have a kind of democracy.  However, it is important to make a clearer distinction.

On the one hand, there can be a community that aims at the common good.  In such a group, the people come together to have a political community that aims to fulfill human goals that could not be done by isolated individuals.  Such a group will come together to establish educational institutions to preserve culture, regulate commerce in order to help normalize economic interactions, pass many laws that regulate our social interactions, and undertake many other affairs.  Although all of these things benefit the individuals in the given society, such a group of self-governing people do not aim merely at the private satisfaction of the people.  This kind of “democracy” works together, for common political goals.

On the other hand, there can be a community that merely aims at the private goods of the citizens.  The Greek philosopher Aristotle remarked in his text, the Politics,  that democracy was a government by the numerous poor people for the sake of those same people’s private goods.  Clearly, he was using “democracy” in this sense.  If the people of a nation only come together in order to assure their own private freedom and to receive benefits for themselves, a given society is this kind of so-called democracy.

Of course, it is difficult to say what is the state of any particular nation today.  Often, elements of each of these kinds of governance is found in a given country at a particular time.  Still, it is important to be aware that such an “equivocation” is possible.  Otherwise, we will end up saying rather foolish things like, “Democracy is always a good form of government,” or, “democracy is a horrible form of government.”

Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded and underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

The Greek philosopher, Aristotle, remarked in his text the Politics

The Greek philosopher, Aristotle, remarked in his text, the Politics,

The Greek philosopher Aristotle remarked in his text, the Politics,

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

The Greek philosopher Aristotle remarked in his text, the Politics,

Explanation:

Although it might be permissible to remove the comma surrounding "the Politics," it is advisable to keep them for clarity. In any case, the actual issue with this sentence is the fact that "Politics" indicates the name of Aristotle's text. Even if you did not know this, you could tell by looking at all the options that we must be looking at a proper name of the book (thanks to the capitalization). Such a text must be italicized to indicate that we are referring to such a work. (When being hand-written, it would be underlined.)

Example Question #511 : Punctuation Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Molly despaired both leaving home, and making new friends.

Possible Answers:

Molly despaired both leaving home, and, making new friends.

Molly despaired both leaving home, but making new friends.

NO CHANGE

Molly despaired both leaving home and making new friends.

Correct answer:

Molly despaired both leaving home and making new friends.

Explanation:

This is a compound predicate with two verbs "leaving" and "making." Commas are not needed to separate verbs in a compound predicate, so this comma is unnecessary. A comma should only precede "and" if being used as a coordinating conjunction to connect two independent clauses.

Example Question #541 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Suddenly the dog ran into the cafe to steal a piece of bread.

Possible Answers:

Suddenly the dog ran, into the cafe, to steal a piece of bread.

NO CHANGE

Suddenly, the dog ran into the cafe, to steal a piece of bread.

Suddenly, the dog ran into the cafe to steal a piece of bread.

Correct answer:

Suddenly, the dog ran into the cafe to steal a piece of bread.

Explanation:

"Suddenly" is an introductory word in this sentence. Commas are used after an introductory word to separate it from the independent clause. No other commas are needed, or even possibly correct, in this sentence.

Example Question #402 : Comma Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

My daughter was born on Monday, May 13, 1989.

Possible Answers:

My daughter was born on Monday May 13 1989. 

NO CHANGE

My daughter was born on Monday May 13, 1989. 

My daughter was born on Monday, May 13 1989. 

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

Use a comma to separate a day of the week from the month ("Sunday, August 4th") and the date from the year ("August 4th, 2009") when writing a date. 

Example Question #887 : Act English

“Mathematics and Learning”

What subject should be learned first?  The question rightly troubles anyone who’s interest is in education.  Of course, young children often must learn in a very basic and rote fashion, applying their apt memorization skills to simple tasks that will serve them very well in later years when they go one to apply such knowledge to more complex topics.  However, when the time comes to designing curricula, an important question must be answered for older students, namely “What is most important first topic in these students’s education?”

An argument can be made for the use of mathematics as a tool for teaching students how to reason more clearly.  This is not because mathematics is the basis of all knowledge.  Indeed not.  There are many important subjects including not only the humanities like poetry and history but sciences like biology and physiology too.   These topics are not strictly speaking mathematical in nature, even though mathematics can be used in it in many ways.

Our minds are best geared for learning things that we can sense, things that are visible and tangible.  Although mathematics is abstract, it can begin with this kind of sense derived experience.  Beginning with simple everyday examples, children can be taught the more abstract and difficult skills that must be learned for the sake of the development of mathematical skills.  In the process of learning these topics, the children will begin to learn important rules about reasoning.  He or she will learn how several propositions can serve as the basis for conclusions.  They will learn how certain properties are related to various geometric figures and arithmetical rules.  Although much of this will be memorized at first, with time, they will have the opportunity to see that human reasoning in mathematical subjects is orderly and logical.  On the basis of such “logical experience,” young learners can then begin to be taught the rules of logic that they have been using all along.  As the medievals used to say, they could go from logica utens, logic used in other subjects, to logica docens logic taught, as a unique, and separate subject.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

Beginning with simple, everyday examples, children can be taught the more

Beginning with simple everyday, examples, children can be taught the more

Beginning with simple everyday examples children can be taught the more

Beginning with simple, everyday, examples, children can be taught the more

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

Beginning with simple, everyday examples, children can be taught the more

Explanation:

Generally speaking, when you have a list of adjectives, each modifying the same noun, you should separate those adjectives by commas. In the introductory clause to this sentence, both "simple" and "everyday" modify "examples." Therefore, a comma should be placed between "simple" and "everyday."

Example Question #548 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

“Intellectual Virtues”

Whenever someone talks about being “virtuous,” we immediately think of someone whose very moral.  Perhaps we even think of people who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear to have no fun at least in the popular imagination.  Whatever the case might be, almost any reader would be surprised to see the expression “intellectual virtues.”  What could this expression mean to designate!  At best, most people would say, “Such virtues must describe people for who knowledge is combined with devotion and rigorous discipline.”  That is; they would seem to describe the person who has a disciplined character in addition to being intelligent.

However, in ancient and medieval philosophy, certain intellectual capacities were considered virtues.  These character traits were not quite the same as moral character traits or virtues.  To understand this idea, it can be helpful to consider two example people, one whose skills are the fruit of a so-called intellectual virtue and the other whose skills are not.

It is easier to start with the person who does not have a given intellectual virtue.  We all know someone who is not very good at math, that is, someone for who math is difficult even though he or she might be quite skilled at many other tasks   It makes sense to say that this person doesn’t have an intellectual virtue.  Likewise, think of the person who is only able to memorize formulas.  Such a person is often very good at working through many problems with deft skill.  This person seems to be a “wiz” at geometry and algebra, quickly solving equations and proofs. 

However, this latter person might suddenly be presented with a difficult, new problem.  When we notice that he or she does not have the creative skill and insight to solve the problem, we realize that he or she does’nt have a so-called “intellectual virtue.”  This person merely has a habit—a particular skill that is helpful but does not indicate true and complete mathematical knowledge.  The person who is able to understand the mathematics and creatively apply this knowledge to solve new problems.  This person has a true intellectual virtue.  They have a particular ability for intellectual insight, able to probe the difficult domain of this topic.  This is much more noble as the mere habit of being able to balance equations and repeat facts about geometric figures!

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

people who are a bit boring, for virtuous people can appear

people who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear

people, who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear

NO CHANGE

people who are a bit boring for virtuous people often appear

Correct answer:

people who are a bit boring for virtuous people can appear

Explanation:

This sentence is a bit difficult to read at first glance. The error causes part of these problems, for you should have a comma before the conjunction "for." There are two subjects at play here. In the first clause, the subject is "we." In the second, it is "virtuous people." Therefore, you should separate the two clauses with a comma. This makes this shift much easier to read.

Example Question #403 : Comma Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

We went for a walk on the beach, the sunset was really beautiful.

Possible Answers:

We went for a walk, on the beach, the sunset was really beautiful.

We went for a walk, on the beach the sunset was really beautiful.

NO CHANGE

We went for a walk on the beach. The sunset was really beautiful.

We went for a walk on the beach the sunset was really beautiful.

Correct answer:

We went for a walk on the beach. The sunset was really beautiful.

Explanation:

This question asks you to correct a comma splice, which occurs when two complete sentences (independent clauses) are incorrectly connected with only a comma. The phrases "We went for a walk on the beach" and "the sunset was really beautiful" are each complete sentences, containing a subject and a main verb. Therefore, they should be separated by punctuation such as a period. Without any punctuation to separate the two independent clauses, the sentence becomes a run-on sentence.

Example Question #404 : Comma Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

I love my dog, I fed her a treat.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

I love and fed a treat to my dog.

I love my dog I fed her a treat.

I love my dog, so I fed her a treat.

I love my dog and I fed her a treat.

Correct answer:

I love my dog, so I fed her a treat.

Explanation:

The original sentence contains a comma splice, which is a grammatical error created by an author combining two independent clauses with only a comma. To combine two independent clauses, you need either a semicolon, or a comma in addition to a conjunction such as "and," "but," "so," or "if."

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