ACT English : Correcting Grammatical Errors

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Example Question #521 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Passage adapted from Around the World in Eighty Days (1873) by Jules Verne

Phileas Fogg was a member of the Reform, and that was all.

The way in which he got admission to this exclusive club was simple enough.

He was recommended by the Barings, with whom he had an open credit. His cheques were regularly paid at sight from his account current, which was always flush.

Was Phileas Fogg rich? Undoubtedly. But those who knew him best could not imagine how he had made his fortune, and Mr. Fogg was the last person to whom to apply for the information. He was not lavish, nor, on the contrary, avaricious; for, whenever he knew that money was needed for a noble, useful, or benevolent purpose, he supplied it quietly and sometimes anonymously. He was in short the least communicative of men. He talked very little, and seemed all the more mysterious for his taciturn manner. His daily habits were quite open to observation; but whatever he did was so exactly the same thing that he had always done before, that the wits of the curious were fairly puzzled.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

He was, in short the least communicative of men.

He was, in short, the least communicative of men.

He was in short, the least communicative of men.

Correct answer:

He was, in short, the least communicative of men.

Explanation:

Commas should only be placed around "in short," because this is a non-restrictive clause that can be removed without altering the sentence's meaning.

Example Question #862 : Act English

Passage adapted from The Wonderful Wizard of Oz (1899) by L. Frank Baum

When Aunt Em came there to live she was a young, pretty wife. The sun and wind had changed her, too. They had taken the sparkle from her eyes and left them a sober gray; they had taken the red from her cheeks and lips, and they were gray also. She was thin and gaunt, and never smiled now. When Dorothy who was an orphan first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter that she would scream and press her hand upon her heart whenever Dorothy's merry voice reached her ears; and she still looked at the little girl with wonder that she could find anything to laugh at.

Uncle Henry never laughed. He worked hard from morning till night and did not know what joy was. He was gray also, from his long beard to his rough boots, and he looked stern and solemn, and rarely spoke.

It was Toto that made Dorothy laugh, and saved her from growing as gray as her other surroundings. Toto was not gray; he was a little black dog, with long silky hair and small black eyes that twinkled merrily on either side of his funny, wee nose. Toto played all day long, and Dorothy played with him, and loved him dearly.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

When Dorothy, who was an orphan first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter

When Dorothy, who was an orphan, first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter 

When Dorothy who was an orphan, first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter

Correct answer:

When Dorothy, who was an orphan, first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter 

Explanation:

"When Dorothy, who was an orphan, first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled by the child's laughter" is the best choice. The phrase "who was an orphan" should be set off with commas because it is a non-restrictive clause. A non-restrictive clause is a group of words that can be deleted without damaging a sentence's integrity.

Example Question #863 : Act English

Passage adapted from Rose in Bloom (1876) by Louisa May Alcott

Rose and Phebe, sitting side by side on the sofa, had evidently assumed at once the places which they were destined to fill by right of youth, sex and beauty, for Phebe had long since ceased to be the maid and become the friend, and Rose meant to have that fact established at once.

Jamie occupied the rug, on which Will and Geordie stood at ease, showing their uniforms to the best advantage, for they were now in a great school, where military drill was the delight of their souls. Steve posed gracefully in an armchair, with Mac lounging over the back of it, while Archie leaned on one corner of the low chimneypiece, looking down at Phebe as she listened to his chat with smiling lips and cheeks almost as rich in color as the carnations in her belt.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

youth, and sex, and beauty,

youth; sex; beauty

youth, and sex and beauty,

youth, sex, and beauty,

Correct answer:

youth, sex, and beauty,

Explanation:

"Youth, sex, and beauty," is the correct answer, because a comma is needed after each word in a series. This is the simplest and clearest revision.

Example Question #862 : Act English

Passage adapted from Anne of Green Gables (1908) by Lucy Maud Montgomery

And yet here was Matthew Cuthbert, at half-past three on the afternoon of a busy day, placidly driving over the hollow and up the hill; moreover, he wore a white collar and his best suit of clothes, which was plain proof that he was going out of Avonlea; and he had the buggy and the sorrel mare, which betokened that he was going a considerable distance. Now, where was Matthew Cuthbert going and why was he going there?

Had it been any other man in Avonlea, Mrs. Rachel, deftly putting this and that together, might have given a pretty good guess as to both questions. But Matthew so rarely went from home that it must be something pressing and unusual which was taking him; he was the shyest man alive and hated to have to go among strangers or to any place where he might have to talk. Matthew, dressed up with a white collar and driving in a buggy, was something that didn't happen often. Mrs. Rachel ponder as she might could make nothing of it and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

Mrs. Rachel, ponder as she might, could make nothing of it and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

NO CHANGE

Mrs. Rachel, ponder as she might could make nothing of it and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

Mrs. Rachel, ponder as she might could make nothing of it, and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

Mrs. Rachel ponder as she might, could make nothing of it, and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

Correct answer:

Mrs. Rachel, ponder as she might, could make nothing of it and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled.

Explanation:

The correct answer is, "Mrs. Rachel, ponder as she might, could make nothing of it and her afternoon's enjoyment was spoiled."

Commas should be placed around the words "ponder as she might" because they form a nonrestrictive clause (a clause that can be removed without altering the sentence's meaning).

Example Question #521 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Passage adapted from Around the World in Eighty Days (1873) by Jules Verne

At half-past eleven, then, Passepartout found himself alone in the house in Saville Row. He begun its inspection without delay, scouring it from cellar to garret. So clean well-arranged solemn a mansion pleased him; it seemed to him like a snail's shell, lighted and warmed by gas, which sufficed for both these purposes. When Passepartout reached the second story he recognised at once the room which he was to inhabit, and he was well satisfied with it. Electric bells and speaking-tubes afforded communication with the lower stories; while on the mantel stood an electric clock, precisely like that in Mr. Fogg's bedchamber, both beating the same second at the same instant. "That's good, that'll do," said Passepartout to himself.

He suddenly observed, hung over the clock, a card which, upon inspection, proved to be a programme of the daily routine of the house. It comprised all that was required of the servant, from eight in the morning, exactly at which hour Phileas Fogg rose, till half-past eleven, when he left the house for the Reform Club--all the details of service, the tea and toast at twenty-three minutes past eight, the shaving-water at thirty-seven minutes past nine, and the toilet at twenty minutes before ten. Everything was regulated and foreseen that was to be done from half-past eleven a.m. till midnight, the hour at which the methodical gentleman retired.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

So clean well-arranged, solemn a mansion pleased him;

So clean, and well-arranged, and solemn a mansion pleased him;

So clean, well-arranged solemn a mansion pleased him;

So clean, well-arranged, solemn a mansion pleased him;

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

So clean, well-arranged, solemn a mansion pleased him;

Explanation:

"So clean, well-arranged, solemn a mansion pleased him;" is the best answer.

Commas are needed between the words "clean," "well-arranged," and "solemn" because these are coordinate adjectives for the noun "mansion."

Example Question #522 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Passage adapted from Around the World in Eighty Days (1876) by Jules Verne

Mr. Fogg's wardrobe was amply supplied and in the best taste. Each pair of trousers, coat, and vest bore a number, indicating the time of year and season at which they were in turn to be laid out for wearing; and the same system was applied to the master's shoes. In short, the house in Saville Row, which must have been a very temple of disorder and unrest under the illustrious but dissipated Sheridan, was cosiness comfort and method idealised. There was no study, nor were there books, which would have been quite useless to Mr. Fogg; for at the Reform two libraries, one of general literature and the other of law and politics, were at his service. A moderate-sized safe stood in his bedroom, constructed so as to defy fire as well as burglars; but Passepartout found neither arms nor hunting weapons anywhere; everything betrayed the most tranquil and peaceable habits.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

cosiness, comfort and, method idealised.

cosiness: comfort: and method

cosiness, comfort and method, idealised.

cosiness, comfort, and method idealised.

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

cosiness, comfort, and method idealised.

Explanation:

The best answer is, "cosiness, comfort, and method idealised."

This is the best answer because commas are needed to separate words in a series/list. The final comma should be placed before the word "and."

Example Question #521 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

The athlete, a respected team leader was always the first person in the locker room before a game.

Possible Answers:

The athlete a respected team leader was

The athlete, a respected team leader was

The athlete, a respected team leader, was

The athlete, a respected team leader having been

The athlete, the respected team leader was

Correct answer:

The athlete, a respected team leader, was

Explanation:

The phrase "a respected team leader" is what is known as an interrupting phrase, or a phrase that provides information but is unnecessary for the structure of the sentence. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas; therefore, the correct answer is "The athlete, a respected team leader, was."

Example Question #521 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Select that answer that best corrects the underlined portion. If the underlined portion is already correct, select NO CHANGE.

Anna knew that blaming her sister, for breaking the dish, was wrong. 

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

sister for breaking the dish was wrong.

sister, for breaking the dish was wrong.

sister for breaking the dish, was wrong.

sister for breaking, the dish was wrong.

Correct answer:

sister for breaking the dish was wrong.

Explanation:

The sentence does not need any commas-it is all part of the same clause. There is not a part of the sentence you can remove without changing the meaning (so you don't need to offset it with commas).

Example Question #522 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Select the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the sentence is correct as is, select "NO CHANGE."

This year, I visited Singapore, Brazil Italy and Malaysia.

Possible Answers:

Singapore; Brazil, Italy, and Malaysia.

NO CHANGE

Singapore; Brazil; Italy; and Malaysia.

Singapore, Brazil, Italy, and Malaysia.

Singapore, Brazil Italy, and Malaysia.

Correct answer:

Singapore, Brazil, Italy, and Malaysia.

Explanation:

Each item in the list should be separated by a comma. Any time there is a series (three or more elements) each element, including the last two, should be separated with a comma.

Example Question #521 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Our apartment is in an old, crumbling building built in the 20th century.

Possible Answers:

Our apartment is in an old crumbling building built in the 20th century.

Our apartment is in an old crumbling, building built in the 20th century.

Our apartment is an old, crumbling, building built in the 20th century.

Our apartment is in an old, crumbling, building built in the 20th century.

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

In this case, the order of the adjectives ("old" and "crumbling") are interchangeable, so a comma is necessary between the two words. They are describing the building, so no comma is necessary after the second adjective.

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