SAT Writing : SAT Writing

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #991 : Sat Writing

She stumped me with a riddle about ten boxes of various weights; the goal was to find the heavier one by only using the scale twice.

Possible Answers:

of various weights

using

heavier one

stumped me with

No error

Correct answer:

heavier one

Explanation:

In this sentence, there are nine boxes, so the the superlative “heaviest” would be better than the comparative “heavier.” The corrected sentence reads: She stumped me with a riddle about ten boxes of various weights; the goal was to find the heaviest one by only using the scale twice.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Jon, as an avid lover of all animals, decided to protest over the depiction of violence towards dogs, which is becoming increasingly common in feature films. No error

Possible Answers:

becoming 

over

No error 

lover of all animals

towards

Correct answer:

over

Explanation:

As a general idiomatic rule, the verb "protest" always goes with the preposition "against," not "over." Therefore, the phrase should be "protest against," not "protest over."

Example Question #3 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When the batter made contact with the baseball, it zoomed threw the air like a bullet and flew out of the park. No error

Possible Answers:

threw

out of the 

made contact

No error

like 

Correct answer:

threw

Explanation:

The preposition here should be spelled "through." "Threw" is the past tense singular form of the verb "to throw" and is not appropriate in this sentence. 

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The zoo visitor became startled when he saw the tiger running at him with a crazed look in its eyes. No error

Possible Answers:

became

No error

at

when

in

Correct answer:

at

Explanation:

Idiomatically, a person or animal would not be “running at” something, but rather, “running towards” something. Therefore, the underlined word “at” contains the error in the sentence. 

Example Question #301 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

In choosing between hummus, salsa, and guacamole as a dip to serve with pita chips, most people would say that pita chips are best served with hummus. No error

Possible Answers:

salsa, and

between

No error

are

most

Correct answer:

between

Explanation:

"Between" is used to compare two items, while "among" should be used to compare three or more items. Given that three items (hummus, salsa, and guacamole) are being compared, "among" should be used instead of "between."

Example Question #2 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

For people trying to lose weight, having herbal tea after dinner is a good substitution with dessert. No error

Possible Answers:

with

is

after

No error

trying

Correct answer:

with

Explanation:

Idiomatically, the phrase that should be used here is "substitution for," not "substitution with."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Social media has both allowed some people to become more connected, but at the same time, has contributed to a feeling of loneliness with others. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

to 

more 

with

both

Correct answer:

with

Explanation:

Idiomatically, the underlined part of the sentence should be "for" instead of "with." This is because the proper phrase is "loneliness for others" not "loneliness with others."

Example Question #994 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Robert's neighbor likes to argue for a wide variety of topics because he is a very contentious person, much to the lament of those around him. No error

Possible Answers:

because

those

for

much

No error

Correct answer:

for

Explanation:

Idiomatically, the verb "argue" should not be accompanied by the preposition "for" unless it is clear that a person is arguing in favor of something. Here, that is not the case. This error would be eliminated if the phrase used was "argue about."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It is shocking for some people to realize that two from three people infected with bronchitis will develop the disease again later in life. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

from

some people

with 

It is

Correct answer:

from

Explanation:

To be grammatically correct, the sentence should read "two out of three," not "two from three." Idiomaticlly, "out of" is appropriate for the context, but "from" is not.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

During the interview, the applicant was grateful that he had managed to avoid from talking about his grades, which were not very impressive. No error

Possible Answers:

was

During

No error

avoid from 

which

Correct answer:

avoid from 

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern when prepositions should follow verbs. “Avoid,” is not typically followed by a preposition. Therefore, the use of the preposition “from” after the word “avoid” is unnecessary and incorrect.

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