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Example Questions

Example Question #22 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The roller coaster was old and rickety, and the seatbelts were dangerously frayed; getting in, I felt afraid of my life. No error

Possible Answers:

getting in

dangerously

old and rickety

afraid of

No error

Correct answer:

afraid of

Explanation:

This sentence doesn’t follow the conventions of prepositions in its choice of preposition that follows the verb “afraid.” “Afraid of is very different than “afraid for.” In this case, because the speaker’s life is the thing in danger instead of the speaker's life causing the speaker to feel afraid, “for” is appropriate. The corrected sentence reads, "The roller coaster was old and rickety, and the seatbelts were dangerously frayed; getting in, I felt afraid for my life."

Example Question #23 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States, disagreed with how the Constitution should be interpretedNo error

Possible Answers:

should be interpreted

No error

of the United States

political

with

Correct answer:

with

Explanation:

The wrong preposition is used in "disagreed with." You generally "disagree with" a person or policy, but "disagree over" or "disagree on" an issue. Changing "with" to "over" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads "The Federalists and the Republicans, the first two political parties of the United States government, disagreed over how the Constitution should be interpreted."

Example Question #23 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Her father prevented her against dropping out of high schoolNo error

Possible Answers:

of high school

Her father

No error

against

prevented her

Correct answer:

against

Explanation:

The correct phrase is “to prevent someone (or something) from doing something.” 

Example Question #24 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While small dogs are more vulnerable then large dogs, they also tend to be more aggressive. No error

Possible Answers:

are more

also

While

then

No error

Correct answer:

then

Explanation:

"Then" is used to describe a sequence of events, while "than" is used to compare two subjects. Here, two subjects are being compared: big and small dogs. Therefore, "than" should be used, not "then."

Example Question #25 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support for the third party candidate. No error

Possible Answers:

have decided

and

support for

No error

all of the

Correct answer:

support for

Explanation:

In this sentence, the preposition “for” is incorrect. “For” is used after the noun “support,” but not the verb. The corrected sentence reads, "Now that I have researched all of the candidates and the issues, I have decided to support the third party candidate."

Example Question #225 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising for Margaret. No error

Possible Answers:

strewn

was

surprising for

happily

No error

Correct answer:

surprising for

Explanation:

There is an error in the idiomatic use of prepositions in this sentence. The preposition “to” is more acceptable after “surprising.” The corrected sentence reads: The presence of a chicken happily pecking at pretzels strewn across her kitchen floor was rather surprising to Margaret.

Example Question #226 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Half of the students in the class stayed up all night in order to work in the questions that confused them the most. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

work in

of the students

most

confused

Correct answer:

work in

Explanation:

"In" is the wrong preposition. "Work on" makes more sense.

Example Question #227 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Inspired for the delicious quiche that he tried in a French bakery last weekend, Marvin went on a organic vegetable shopping spree and tried to recreate the perfect breakfast in his own kitchenNo error

Possible Answers:

Inspired for

that he tried

No error

and

in his own kitchen

Correct answer:

Inspired for

Explanation:

This sentence uses the wrong preposition after “inspired.” “By” would be idiomatically correct. The corrected sentence reads, "Inspired by the delicious quiche that he tried in a French bakery last weekend, Marvin went on a organic vegetable shopping spree and tried to recreate the perfect breakfast in his own kitchen."

Example Question #31 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Secretly delighted that the prank, the author admonished his friends for giving him such a fright. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

delighted that

admonished

giving

Secretly

Correct answer:

delighted that

Explanation:

The correct idiomatic preposition after “delighted” in this context would be “by.” The corrected sentence reads, "Secretly delighted by the prank, the author admonished his friends for giving him such a fright."

Example Question #32 : Identifying Other Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

 

While his style was initially a protest to painting, Jackson Pollock's brand of artistic expression is now widespread and has influenced many other artists. No error

Possible Answers:

protest to

No error

traditional painting

has influenced

widespread

Correct answer:

protest to

Explanation:

As a general rule for prepositions, "protest" is accompanied by the preposition "against," not "to." Therefore, "protest to" contains an error. 

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