SAT Writing : Correcting Word Usage Errors

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Example Question #231 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Paula's ball was taken away from her by her frustrated teacher. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

Paula's ball was taken away from her by her frustrated teacher!

Paula's ball was taken away from him by his frustrated teacher.

The frustrated teacher took Paula's ball away.

Paula's ball was taken away from she by her frustrated teacher.

Correct answer:

The frustrated teacher took Paula's ball away.

Explanation:

The sentence, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice should usually be changed to active voice. As in the example sentence, passive voice construction often leads to unnecessarily confusing and imprecise sentences. The best way to write this sentence is: "The frustrated teacher took Paula's ball away."

Example Question #232 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Our professor wrote this difficult exam. No error

Possible Answers:

This Difficult Exam was written by our professor.

 No error

This difficult exam was written by our professor.

This difficult exam was written by Our Professor.

This difficult exam, was written by our professor.

Correct answer:

 No error

Explanation:

This sentence is written in an active voice. Active voice is, usually, a more clear and concise option for sentence construction than passive voice. It is rarely correct to change a sentence correctly phrased in active voice to passive voice. This sentence contains no errors.

Example Question #17 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The black coffee was poured by the chipper barista.

Possible Answers:

The black chipper coffee was poured by the barista.  

The black coffee, was poured by the chipper barista.  

The chipper barista poured the black coffee.  

The black coffee was poured by the chipper barista.

The black coffee were poured by the chipper barista.  

Correct answer:

The chipper barista poured the black coffee.  

Explanation:

The sentence, as written, is in passive voice. In this instance (and many others), the passive construction makes the sentence unnecessarily confusing by making the subject of the sentence an item that, logically, should be an object. This most logical and clear subject of this sentence is the "chipper barista" (as s/he is the only sentient being mentioned). The best way to write this sentence is: "The chipper barista poured the black coffee."

Example Question #18 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

His driving test was failed by the scared young man.

Possible Answers:

The scared young man failed his driving test.

His driving test, was failed by the scared young man.

His driving test was failed by the scared young man.

The driving test was failed by the scared young man.

His driving test was failed, by the scared young man.

Correct answer:

The scared young man failed his driving test.

Explanation:

The example sentence is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should usually be changed so that they are written in active voice. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "The scared young man failed his driving test."

Example Question #19 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The chicken was taken by us out of the oven too early.

Possible Answers:

We took the chicken out of the oven too early.

The chicken was taken by us out of the oven, too early.

The chicken was taken by us out of the oven too early.

The chicken was taken by we out of the oven too early.

The chicken was taken by us, out of the oven too early.

Correct answer:

We took the chicken out of the oven too early.

Explanation:

The sentence above is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should often be changed so that they are written in active voice. Active voice is generally more concise and clearer. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "We took the chicken out of the oven too early."

Example Question #233 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Her homework was cheated on by Caroline.

Possible Answers:

Her homework was cheated on by the girl named Caroline.

The homework was cheated on by Caroline.

Caroline cheated on her homework.

Her homework was cheated by Caroline.

Her homework was cheated on, by Caroline.

Correct answer:

Caroline cheated on her homework.

Explanation:

The example sentence is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should often (for concision and clarity's sake) be rewritten in active voice. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "Caroline cheated on her homework."

Example Question #234 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The hospital was went to by the injured man.

Possible Answers:

The hospital was gone to by the injured man.

The hospital was attended by the injured man.

The injured man went to the hospital.

The hospital was went to by the injured man.

The hospital, was went to by the injured man.

Correct answer:

The injured man went to the hospital.

Explanation:

The example sentence is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should often be changed so that they are written in active voice. Sentences written in active voice are, in general, clearer and more precise than those written in passive voice. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "The injured man went to the hospital."

Example Question #235 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The wild and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

Possible Answers:

The wild and untamed plains were roamed, by fearsome warriors.

The wild and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

The wild, and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains.

The wild and untamed, plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

Correct answer:

Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and should usually be changed to active voice. Passive voice often makes sentences overly wordy and confusing. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains."

Example Question #24 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

As his owner howled in frustration, the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

Possible Answers:

As his owner howled in frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti.

As his owner howled with frustration the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, if the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, then the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

Correct answer:

As his owner howled in frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often more confusing and less concise than the active voice. In this case, the unnecessary use of the passive voice creates a dangling modifier, "as his" (meaning the dog's) "owner" is used in the first clause, the subject of the second clause must be "the dog." The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "As his owner howled with frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti."

Example Question #236 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The car was repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

Possible Answers:

The car was repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The car had been repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The car was repaired, by the brilliant mechanic.

The car were repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The brilliant mechanic repaired the car.

Correct answer:

The brilliant mechanic repaired the car.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often overly confusing and wordy. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "The brilliant mechanic repaired the car."

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