SAT Writing : Correcting Word Usage Errors

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Example Question #241 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

Possible Answers:

Big Chuck the incredibly fast horse won the important race.

The important race, was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race.

Correct answer:

Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often less concise, and more confusing, than sentences framed in a direct, active voice. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race." Note that the correct version of the sentence includes an interrupting phrase, which must be contained within commas.

Example Question #233 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.

Possible Answers:

Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.

Mike and Jonas, eager to see how the boxing coach would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar. 

The boxing coach, eagerly sees how Mike and Jonas would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar.

Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.

Mike and Jonas, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, were asked to spar by the boxing coach.

Correct answer:

Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.

Explanation:

The initial independent clause in the sentence, "Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach," uses passive voice ("were asked"); it becomes clearer when we use active voice ("the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas . . .").

Example Question #241 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Nobody knew why it took so long for Jamel to arrive; he had drove there plenty of times before.

Possible Answers:

has drove

had drived

had drove

drived

had driven

Correct answer:

had driven

Explanation:

Since the sentence is in past tense (indicated by "knew"), "had" is correct. The correct past participle of the verb "drive" is "driven." "Had driven" is the correct pairing and therefore the best improvement in this sentence.

Example Question #81 : Correcting Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Horses were domesticating by humans thousands of years ago.

Possible Answers:

were domesticated

were domesticating

domestication

domesticating

domesticated taking place

Correct answer:

were domesticated

Explanation:

The sentence describes what humans did to horses in the past, a fact that needs to be reflected in the verb's tense and transitivity. The correct answer must indicate that the domesticating being discussed took place in the past and was done by humans to horses, leading to "were domesticated" as the only possible answer choice.

Example Question #716 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

As the suit was finished quickly, that it still needed alterations did not surprise Henry.

Possible Answers:

Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.

because it still needed alterations, which surprised Henry.

it still needed alterations, which did not surprise Henry.

that it still needed more alterations did not surprise Henry.

it was not surprising to Henry that it still needed alterations.

Correct answer:

Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.

Explanation:

Avoid the passive voice of the original ("it still needed alterations") and choose the simplest answer which preserves the meaning of the original sentence.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Verb Tense Errors

In a prolonged effort to curb abuses, the governments reduce the amount in bonuses for arrests.

Possible Answers:

the governments to reduce

the governments reduction

the governments reduced

the governments reduce

the governments reduces

Correct answer:

the governments reduced

Explanation:

The opening clause of the sentence notes a "prolonged effort," which indicates the government action has taken place over a long time period. The proper verb will either be in the past tense or show a long amount of time. "The governments reduced" is the best choice among the answers.

Example Question #2 : Correcting Verb Tense Errors

Celebrations begun in the school after it was announced they had won the championship.

Possible Answers:

began the school

begin the school

began in the school

begun by the school

begun in the school

Correct answer:

began in the school

Explanation:

The underlined section of the sentence contains both a verb and a preposition, but the only issue lies in the present tense verb. The use of time in the sentence, "after they found out," indicates the celebrations took place in the past. "Began in the school," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #131 : Usage Errors

Something strange occurs every night of the trip, which spooked the entire family.

Possible Answers:

Somethings strange occurs every night of the trip,

Something strange occurred every night of the trip,

Something strange occurs every nights of the trip,

Something strange occurring every night of the trip,

Something strange occurs every night of the trip,

Correct answer:

Something strange occurred every night of the trip,

Explanation:

The sentence contains two complete thoughts, separated by the conjunction "which." This means the two verbs in each phrase need to have the same tense. As "spooked" is in the past tense, "Something strange occurred every night of the trip," is the correct answer.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Verb Tense Errors

Politics has gains such a nasty tone in recent years that it has turned off many voters.

Possible Answers:

has gained such a nasty tone

has gains such nasty tone

has gains such a nasty tone

has gains a nasty tone

gains such a nasty tone

Correct answer:

has gained such a nasty tone

Explanation:

The underlined phrase needs to be parallel to the later verb usage of "has turned off" later in the sentence. The underlined phrase then needs to similarly be in the past perfect tense. "Has gained such a nasty tone" is the correct answer.

Example Question #1181 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

All of the people know the costs of done business with the corrupt shopkeeper.

Possible Answers:

do business

does business

done business

doing business

business doing

Correct answer:

doing business

Explanation:

The underlined phrase does not appropriately parallel the earlier verb use of "know" in the sentence. Thus, the correct answer choice needs to make the verb form into a present tense verb. "Doing business" is the best choice among the answers.

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