SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #281 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When one is in the library, lower your voice so as not to disturb others. No error

Possible Answers:

in the library

to disturb others.

one

No error

When

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

The words "one and "you" are both acceptable pronouns, but they should not be used as pronouns in the same sentence because the third-person pronoun "you" does not agree with "one."

Example Question #282 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One should never underestimate the worth of double-checking your work. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

double-checking

never

the worth

your

Correct answer:

your

Explanation:

This sentence uses both "one" and "you" as pronouns. These should be kept consistent—that is, if a sentence uses one of these pronouns, it should not suddenly start using the other afterwards. Changing "your" to "one's" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads, "One should never underestimate the worth of double-checking one's work."

Example Question #54 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although learning to balance on your head may be challenging at first, the sense of accomplishment one feels after finally mastering the skill is worth all of the effort. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

Although learning

challenging

is

one feels

Correct answer:

one feels

Explanation:

This sentence switches between using the second-person pronoun “your” and the general pronoun “one.” These should stay consistent; if you begin by using one of these words as a pronoun in a sentence, you shouldn't suddenly switch to using the other. The corrected sentence reads: "Although learning to balance on your head may be challenging at first, the sense of accomplishment you feel after finally mastering the skill is worth all of the effort."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The research study supported the theory that one’s taste expectations are based off of your prior experience with foods of various colors and textures. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

are based

various

research study

your

Correct answer:

your

Explanation:

This sentence first introduces the possessive pronoun "one's" in "one's taste expectations," but later, it switches to using the possessive pronoun "your" in "your prior experience with foods of various colors and textures." If you begin using one of these pronouns in a sentence, you should be consistent and only use that pronoun in that grammatical situation for the rest of the sentence; switching from one to the other mid-sentence is grammatically incorrect. To correct the sentence, you could either change "one's" to "your" or "your" to "one's"—either swap would result in a consistent use of one of the pronouns. One version of the corrected sentence would read, "The research study supported the theory that one’s taste expectations are based off of one’s prior experience with foods of various colors and textures."

Example Question #281 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One should never allow your work responsibilities to be taken over by another person. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

another

to be taken over

your

should never

Correct answer:

your

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronouns do not stay consistent. It starts out with the subject “one” and changes to the possessive “your,” but these should refer to the same thing. The corrected sentence reads, "One should never allow one’s work responsibilities to be taken over by another person."

Example Question #12 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One cannot see the conditions in a sweatshop and truthfully say you think they are acceptable work conditions for any human being. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

they

truthfully

One

any

Correct answer:

One

Explanation:

The subject of the sentence is not consistent throughout the sentence.  At the beginning of the sentence, it refers to "one" but later changes to "you."  As changing the word "you" that is used later in the sentence is not an option, "one" is the incorrect word in this sentence. The sentence should read, "You cannot see the conditions in a sweatshop and truthfully say you think they are acceptable work conditions for any human being."

Example Question #13 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One might try to adopt a baby lion, but you should be prepared for it to become quite ferocious when it grows up. No error

Possible Answers:

when

No error

might try

you

it

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronouns do not stay consistent. It starts about speaking generally about “one,” then switches to a second-person “you.” The corrected sentence reads, "One might try to adopt a baby lion, but one should be prepared for it to become quite ferocious when it grows up."

Example Question #287 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although you might think that teaching your parrot to curse is a fun idea, one quickly learns that parrots do not know to clean up their language around distinguished company. No error

Possible Answers:

one

their

is

Although

No error

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

This sentence switches between using the second-person pronoun (“you”) and the more general “one.” It’s better to keep these consistent. The corrected sentence reads, "Although you might think that teaching your parrot to curse is a fun idea, you will quickly learn that parrots do not know to clean up their language around distinguished company."

Example Question #281 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One’s basic human need for love and acceptance will never overcome your preference to work independentlyNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

One's

will never overcome

independently

need for

Correct answer:

One's

Explanation:

This sentence switches between a general pronoun “one’s” and the second person pronoun “your.” These should remain consistent. The corrected sentence reads: "Your basic human need for love and acceptance will never overcome one’s preference to work independently."

Example Question #289 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When one's eyes grow heavy with sleep, it's important for you to find a pillow quickly.

Possible Answers:

quickly

No error

it's

grow heavy

you

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

"You" does not agree with "one's." When using "one" as a pronoun to speak about an assumed general person, remember not to lapse into using the pronoun "you."

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