SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #42 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Rita tries to arrive ten minutes early to every meeting, but sometimes the rush hour traffic makes it impossible to do itNo error

Possible Answers:

ten minutes

impossible

do it

No error

but

Correct answer:

do it

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronoun “it” refers to the action of arriving ten minutes early. Since that is a verb, the better phrase would be “do so.” The corrected sentence reads, "Rita tries to arrive ten minutes early to every meeting, but sometimes the rush hour traffic makes it impossible to do so."

Example Question #43 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Each of the students is required to come to the stage to read their essays, in order to practice public speaking. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

their essays

is required

in order to

Each

Correct answer:

their essays

Explanation:

Look for pronoun agreement: "each" is a similiar subject, and cannot be paired with "their," a plural pronoun.

Example Question #44 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

No one knows what his or her future holds: everyone's destiny is unwritten. No error

Possible Answers:

everyone's

No one

his or her

holds

No error

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

There is no error. The pronouns are correct: "no one" is singular, and is correctly matched with "his or her."

Example Question #45 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Each of the scientists on the team came to their own conclusion; in the end, there was no clear conclusion to the studyNo error

Possible Answers:

their own

to the study

No error

conclusion

was

Correct answer:

their own

Explanation:

Look here for pronoun agreement: "each" is a singular subject and requires a corresponding singular pronoun. The correct pronoun would be "his," "her," or "his or her," rather than "their."

Example Question #251 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Wooly mammoths, an extinct species of elephant, certainly deserved its name—a newborn calf could weigh 200 pounds! No error

Possible Answers:

its name

could weigh

newborn

No error

species of elephant

Correct answer:

its name

Explanation:

In this sentence, the pronoun “its” does not agree in number with its antecedent “Wooly mammoths.” The corrected sentence reads: Wooly mammoths, an extinct species of elephant, certainly deserved their name—a newborn calf could weigh 200 pounds!

Example Question #47 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The North American moose population has declined, but their cultural popularity in everything from children’s books to hip t-shirts has grown. No error  

Possible Answers:

from children’s books to hip t-shirts

No error

moose

their

has declined

Correct answer:

their

Explanation:

In this sentence the plural pronoun “their” refers to the singular subject “moose population.” The singular pronoun should be used instead. The corrected sentence reads: The North American moose population has declined, but its cultural popularity in everything from children’s books to hip t-shirts has grown.

Example Question #252 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Mitosis is a process when cells undergo division in order to create two new cells. No error

Possible Answers:

to create

undergo

No error

is

when

Correct answer:

when

Explanation:

When describing a idea, concept, or process, we refer to it with the phrase "in which." Mitosis is not a time when cells undergo division, but rather a process in which cells undergo division.

Example Question #253 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

For we, it is easier to get around in public transportation than it is to drive a car on roads that are congested and stress-inducing. No error

Possible Answers:

to

we

No error

than

are

Correct answer:

we

Explanation:

"We" is a subject pronoun. The object pronoun is "us." In the sentence above, it is easier to get around for "we," which is incorrect. To correct the sentence, "we" should be changed to "us."

Example Question #49 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although a sales tax may appear to be an efficient way to raise profits, they are more detrimental to low-income consumers than to rich ones. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

they are

to raise

than to

ones

Correct answer:

they are

Explanation:

"Tax" is a singular antecedent, while the pronoun and verb "they are" are plural. "It is" should be used instead of "they are" so that a singular pronoun and verb correspond to the singular antecedent "tax."

Example Question #51 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The cake was decorated with turquoise frosting swirls and turquoise candles because these were his favorite color. No error

Possible Answers:

was decorated with

these were

frosting swirls

No error

his 

Correct answer:

these were

Explanation:

“These” refers to “turquoise,” which is singular. The pronoun should likewise be singular. The corrected sentence reads, "The cake was decorated with turquoise frosting swirls and turquoise candles because this was his favorite color."

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