PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #81 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Unlike his classmates the boy preferred staying in and reading books.

Possible Answers:

Unlike his classmates the boy

Unlike his classmates' the boy

Unlike his classmates, the boy

Unlike, his classmates, the boy

Unlike, his classmates the boy

Correct answer:

Unlike his classmates, the boy

Explanation:

The phrase "Unlike his classmates" functions as an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the rest of the sentence. All introductory phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma; therefore, "Unlike his classmates, the boy" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #54 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Keeping his promises the father took his sons to the store on the way home.

Possible Answers:

Keeping his promises the father

Keeping his promises that father

Keeping his promises a father

Keeping his promises, the father

Keeping, his promises the father

Correct answer:

Keeping his promises, the father

Explanation:

The phrase "Keeping his promises" is an introductory phrase that conditions the action of the sentence, but is not crucial to the structure of the sentence. All such phrases need to be set apart by a comma from the main portion of the sentence. The only answer choice that does this is "Keeping his promises, the father," which is the correct answer.

Example Question #82 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Per the guidelines everyone at the meeting was allowed to speak uninterrupted for five minutes.

Possible Answers:

Per, the guidelines everyone

Per the guidelines everyone

Per the guidelines everybody

Per the guidelines for everyone

Per the guidelines, everyone

Correct answer:

Per the guidelines, everyone

Explanation:

The phrase "Per the guidelines" is an introductory phrase, a clause that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but is not part of the construction of the sentence. All such clauses must be separated by a comma from the rest of the sentence, making "Per the guidelines, everyone" the correct answer choice.

Example Question #55 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

More than most singers her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans.

Possible Answers:

More, than most singers, her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans.

More than most singers her life story has always been read, into her song lyrics by fans.

More than most singers, her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans.

More than most singers her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans.

More than most singers her life story has always been read into her song lyrics, by fans.

Correct answer:

More than most singers, her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans.

Explanation:

The phrase "More than most singers" is an introductory phrase that explains the conditions of the sentence's body. All introductory phrases need to be set off by a comma, and no other spots in the sentence need a comma. "More than most singers her life story has always been read into her song lyrics by fans," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #56 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Just like his sister he was a very good student in school and a hard worker.

Possible Answers:

Just like his sister he were

Just like his sister he is

Just like his sister, he was

Just like his sister he was

Just, like his sister, he was

Correct answer:

Just like his sister, he was

Explanation:

The phrase "Just like his sister" is an introductory phrase, or a phrase that conditions the meaning of the sentence without being a crucial part of its structure. All introductory phrases need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Just like his sister, he was."

Example Question #57 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Unlike his counterparts in the army the sailor was used to being on the open seas.

Possible Answers:

Unlike his counterparts, in the army the sailor

Unlike, his counterparts in the army the sailor

Unlike his counterparts in the army the sailor

Unlike his counterparts in the army, the sailor

Unlike, his counterparts in the army, the sailor

Correct answer:

Unlike his counterparts in the army, the sailor

Explanation:

The phrase "Unlike his counterparts in the army" is an introductory phrase that conditions the action of the sentence. All such phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. "Unlike his counterparts in the army, the sailor" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #58 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

For eight straight weeks the area saw heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding.

Possible Answers:

For eight straight weeks the area saw heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding.

For eight straight weeks, the area saw heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding.

For eight straight weeks the area saw heavy rain that contributed to the massive flooding.

For eight straight weeks the area saw heavy rains that contributed in the massive flooding.

For eight straight weeks the area sees heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding.

Correct answer:

For eight straight weeks, the area saw heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding.

Explanation:

The phrase "For eight straight weeks" is an introductory phrase, or one that conditions the meaning of the sentence but is not a crucial element of its structure. All such phrases need to be set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "For eight straight weeks, the area saw heavy rains that contributed to the massive flooding."

Example Question #471 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

For the absolute diehard fans the loss was a crushing blow to their spirit.

Possible Answers:

For the absolute diehard fans, the loss was a crushing blow to their spirit.

For the absolute diehard fans the loss was a crushing blow, to their spirit.

For the absolute diehard fans the loss was a crushing blow on their spirit.

For the absolute diehard fans the loss, was a crushing blow to their spirit.

For the absolute diehard fans the loss was a crushing blow to their spirit.

Correct answer:

For the absolute diehard fans, the loss was a crushing blow to their spirit.

Explanation:

The phrase "For the absolute diehard fans" is an introductory phrase, a phrase that conditions the action of the sentence, but is not a necessary part of its structure. All introductory phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that does this is "For the absolute diehard fans, the loss was a crushing blow to their spirit."

Example Question #472 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

For the rest of his career he regretted never completing that specific sale.

Possible Answers:

For the rest of his career he regretted never completion of that specific sale.

For the rest of his career he regretted never completing that specific sale.

For the rest, of his career, he regretted never completing that specific sale.

For the rest of his career, he regretted never completing that specific sale.

For the rest of his career he regretted never completing that specific sale.

Correct answer:

For the rest of his career, he regretted never completing that specific sale.

Explanation:

The phrase "For the rest of his career" is an introductory phrase, a phrase that conditions the meaning of the rest of the sentence but is not crucial to the sentence's structure. All introductory phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "For the rest of his career, he regretted never completing that specific sale."

Example Question #473 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

More than any other sport soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from its players.

Possible Answers:

More than any other sport soccer requiring immense amounts of stamina from its players.

More than any other sport, soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from its players.

More than any other sport soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from its players.

More than any other sport soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from the players.

More than any other sport soccer requires immense amounts of stamina, from its players.

Correct answer:

More than any other sport, soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from its players.

Explanation:

The phrase "More than any other sport" is an introductory phrase, a phrase that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but is separate from the structure of the sentence. All introductory phrases must be set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma, making the correct answer "More than any other sport, soccer requires immense amounts of stamina from its players."

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