PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #1751 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Under the old rules that kind of shot was perfectly legal.

Possible Answers:

Under the old rules this kind of shot was perfectly legal.

Under the old rules that kind of shot was perfectly legal.

Under the old rules that kind of shot is perfectly legal.

Under the old rules, that kind of shot was perfectly legal.

Under the old rules that kind of shot was perfect legal.

Correct answer:

Under the old rules, that kind of shot was perfectly legal.

Explanation:

The phrase "Under the old rules" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence but remains apart from its structure. All introductory phrases must be set off by a comma. The only answer choice that inserts such a comma is "Under the old rules, that kind of shot was perfectly legal."

Example Question #95 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country was distrusted by the army's commanders.

Possible Answers:

The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country were

The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country, was

The soldier a mercenary from a foreign country was

The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country was

The soldier a mercenary from a foreign country were

Correct answer:

The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country, was

Explanation:

In the sentence, the phrase "a mercenary from a foreign country" is an interrupting phrase, one that provides information but is not critical to the structure of the sentence. All such phrases need to be set apart from the sentence by a comma; therefore, the correct answer is "The soldier, a mercenary from a foreign country, was."

Example Question #1481 : Psat Writing Skills

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The soldiers tired from their long march, gladly settled down for the night.

Possible Answers:

The soldiers tired from their long march gladly settled

The soldiers' tired from their long march, gladly settled

The soldiers tired from their long march, gladly settled

The soldiers, tired from their long march, gladly settled

The soldiers tired from their long march gladly settles

Correct answer:

The soldiers, tired from their long march, gladly settled

Explanation:

The phrase "tired from their long march" is a non-restrictive interrupting phrase, a phrase the provides information, but is not necessary in the sentence. Such phrases always must be set off by commas. Therefore, "The soldiers, tired from their long march, gladly settled" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #443 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Under the old regime the action was perfectly legal and undertaken quite often.

Possible Answers:

Under the old regime the action had been

Under, the old regime the action was

Under the old regime the action was

Under, the old regime, the action was

Under, the old regime the action was

Under the old regime, the action was

Under the old regime the action was

Under the old regime, the action was

Under, the old regime, the action was

Under the old regime the action had been

Correct answer:

Under the old regime, the action was

Explanation:

The phrase "Under the old regime" is what is called a conditional phrase, as it gives the conditions which make the main body of the sentence possible. Such phrases always need to be set off from the main part of the sentence by a comma; therefore, "Under the old regime, the action was," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #92 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The general prone to overly assertive maneuvers, found his army caught out in front of the main lines.

Possible Answers:

The general prone, to overly assertive maneuvers,

The general, prone to overly assertive maneuvers

The general prone to overly assertive maneuvers,

The general, prone to overly assertive maneuvers,

The general prone, to overly assertive maneuvers,

Correct answer:

The general, prone to overly assertive maneuvers,

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence contains an interrupting phrase, "prone to overly assertive maneuvers." All interrupting phrases must be set apart by commas from the rest of the sentence. Therefore, the correct answer is, "The general, prone to overly assertive maneuvers,."

Example Question #301 : Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The executive a shrewd negotiator, always waited to make sure he knew his opponent's strengths and weaknesses.

Possible Answers:

The executive, a shrewd negotiator, always

The executive a shrewd negotiator always

The executive a shrewd negotiator, always

The executive a shrewd negotiator, always

The executive, a shrewd negotiator always

Correct answer:

The executive, a shrewd negotiator, always

Explanation:

The phrase "a shrewd negotiator" is an interrupting phrase, a phrase that has no bearing on the construction of the sentence but provides additional information. All interrupting phrases must be set apart by commas; therefore, the correct answer choice is "The executive, a shrewd negotiator, always."

Example Question #781 : Act English

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The students anxious about their grades were pestering their teacher about the test.

Possible Answers:

The students anxious about their grades were

The students, anxious about their grades, were

The students' anxious about their grades were

The students, anxious about their grades were

The students anxious about their grades, were

Correct answer:

The students, anxious about their grades, were

Explanation:

The phrase "anxious about their grades" is an interrupting phrase, or one that provides extra information, but is not crucial to the structure of the sentence. All interrupting phrases need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. The only answer choice that does this is "The students, anxious about their grades, were."

Example Question #561 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

The athlete, a respected team leader was always the first person in the locker room before a game.

Possible Answers:

The athlete, a respected team leader was

The athlete, a respected team leader having been

The athlete, a respected team leader, was

The athlete a respected team leader was

The athlete, the respected team leader was

Correct answer:

The athlete, a respected team leader, was

Explanation:

The phrase "a respected team leader" is what is known as an interrupting phrase, or a phrase that provides information but is unnecessary for the structure of the sentence. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas; therefore, the correct answer is "The athlete, a respected team leader, was."

Example Question #1482 : Psat Writing Skills

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The hardest thing, for most new pianists to learn is the correct hand position.

Possible Answers:

The hardest thing, for most new pianists to learn, is the correct hand position.

The hardest thing, for most new pianists to learn is the correct hand position.

The hardest thing for most new pianists to learn is the correct hand position.

The hardest thing for most new pianists to learn, is the correct hand position.

The hardest thing, for most new pianists, to learn is the correct hand position.

Correct answer:

The hardest thing for most new pianists to learn is the correct hand position.

Explanation:

The comma in the sentence is incorrectly deployed, as it divides a continuous phrase into two parts. The sentence should actually have no commas in it, as the sentence works as a continual phrase. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "The hardest thing for most new pianists to lean is the correct hand position."

Example Question #592 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

"What goes around comes around" is an idiom that often does not make sense outside of a larger context.

Possible Answers:

"What goes around comes around" is an idiom

What goes around comes around is an idiom

"What goes around comes around" are idioms

"What goes around, comes around" is an idiom

"What goes, around, comes around" is an idiom

Correct answer:

"What goes around, comes around" is an idiom

Explanation:

The phrase in quotation marks, "What goes around comes around," is the subject of the sentence, but described as an idiom. This means that it needs to be treated as a full sentence, because it is being referred to as a singular whole. To be a complete sentence, a comma needs to be put between its two parts, making ""What goes around, comes around" is an idiom," the correct answer choice.

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