PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #62 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Heartbreak a favorite topic of songwriters, is a prevalent theme throughout the album.

Possible Answers:

Heartbreak, a favorite topic of songwriters,

Heartbreak the favorite topic of songwriters,

Heartbreak a favorite topic of songwriters,

Heartbreak as a favorite topic of songwriters,

Heartbreak a favorite topic of songwriters

Correct answer:

Heartbreak, a favorite topic of songwriters,

Explanation:

The phrase "a favorite topic of songwriters" is an interrupting phrase, a phrase that provides information but is not essential to the structure of the sentence. All interrupting phrases need to be set apart by commas; therefore, "Heartbreak, a favorite topic of songwriters," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #63 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The actor unlike his colleagues, never performed until he was invited to be in the film.

Possible Answers:

The actor unlike his colleagues, never performed

The actor, unlike his colleagues, never performed

The actor unlike his colleagues never performed

The actor, unlike his colleagues never performed

The actor unlike his colleagues never performs

Correct answer:

The actor, unlike his colleagues, never performed

Explanation:

The phrase "unlike his colleagues" is an interrupting phrase, a phrase that provides information in the sentence, but is not a element key to its structure. All such phrases need to be set apart by commas; therefore, "The actor, unlike his colleagues, never performed" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #64 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The newspaper a radical journal often sought to foment rebellion.

Possible Answers:

The newspaper, a radical journal, often sought to foment rebellion.

The newspaper a radical journal often sought to foment rebellion.

The newspaper, a radical journal often sought to foment rebellion.

The newspaper a radical journal, often sought to foment rebellion.

The newspaper being a radical journal often sought to foment rebellion.

Correct answer:

The newspaper, a radical journal, often sought to foment rebellion.

Explanation:

The phrase "a radical journal" is an appositive. It provides extra information in the sentence by renaming the noun "the newspaper," but remains apart from the sentence's structure. An appositive always needs to be set apart by commas when the removal of the its information would not change the meaning of the sentence. The only answer choice that does this is "The newspaper, a radical journal, often sought to foment rebellion."

Example Question #36 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

School placement a highly controversial issue has been a hotly debated topic in legislatures, school boards, and parent groups.

Possible Answers:

School placement, a highly controversial issue has been

School placement a highly controversial issue, has been

School placement a highly controversial issue has been

School placement, a highly controversial issue, has been

School placement a highly controversial issue having been

Correct answer:

School placement, a highly controversial issue, has been

Explanation:

The phrase "a highly controversial issue" is an interrupting phrase, or one that provides extra information while remaining apart from the structure of the sentence. That is, "a highly controversial issue" could be removed from the sentence and the sentence would still make sense. Interrupting phrases that don't provide necessary information need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. "School placement, a highly controversial issue, has been" is the only answer choice that does this, so it is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #71 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Many Americans unaware of the historical circumstances, did not understand the President's reference to the Revolutionary War.

Possible Answers:

Many Americans unaware of the historical circumstances

Many Americans unaware of the historical circumstances, 

Many Americans, unaware of the historical circumstances, 

Many Americans' unaware of the historical circumstances, 

Many Americans being unaware of the historical circumstances, 

Correct answer:

Many Americans, unaware of the historical circumstances, 

Explanation:

In the sentence, the phrase "unaware of the historical circumstances" is an interrupting phrase, or a phrase that provides information but is not a necessary component of the complete sentence. Such clauses always need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. Thus, "Many Americans, unaware of the historical circumstances," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #72 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Francine the band's lead singer was late to the concert because she got stuck in traffic.

Possible Answers:

Francine the bands lead singer was late

Francine, the band's lead singer was late

Francine, the band's lead singer, was late

Francine who was the band's lead singer also happened to be late

Francine the band's lead singer were late

Correct answer:

Francine, the band's lead singer, was late

Explanation:

The phrase "the band's lead singer" is an appositive phrase; it renames the subject (here, "Francine") and provides additional information about the subject. In this case, the phrase "the band's lead singer" could be removed from the sentence without changing its meaning, so it needs to be surrounded by commas.

Example Question #73 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The boys in the band as disputatious as ever, refused to board the bus until they were paid.

Possible Answers:

The boys in the band as disputatious as ever,

The boys in the band, as disputatious as ever,

The boys' in the band as disputatious as ever,

The boys in the band as disputatious as ever

The boys in the band as disputatious, as ever,

Correct answer:

The boys in the band, as disputatious as ever,

Explanation:

The phrase "as disputatious as ever" is a non-restrictive interrupting phrase, or a phrase that provides extra information and is not necessary to the meaning of the sentence. Any such phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. As such, "The boys in the band, as disputatious as ever," is the correct answer.

Example Question #1691 : Improving Sentences

Frequently students wish they did not have to take as many required courses.

Possible Answers:

Frequent students

Frequently, students

Frequent, students

Frequently students

Frequently students'

Correct answer:

Frequently, students

Explanation:

The word "Frequently" in the sentence is used as an adverb describing the actions of the students; therefore, it must be set apart from the rest of the sentence, and "students" in particular, to work as an introductory phrase. "Frequently, students" is the correct answer.

Example Question #1692 : Improving Sentences

Day by day fewer people emerged from the countryside to attend the fair in the village.

Possible Answers:

Day, by day fewer 

Day, by day, fewer 

Fewer day by day

Fewer, day by day

Day by day, fewer 

Correct answer:

Day by day, fewer 

Explanation:

The phrase "day by day" is used in the sentence as an introductory phrase, modifying the meaning of the sentence. As such, it needs to be set off from the rest of the sentence. "Day by day, fewer" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #711 : Improving Sentences

When researching employment opportunities college students frequently become overly focused on one potential job.

Possible Answers:

employment opportunities college, students

employment opportunities, college students

employment, opportunities college students

employment opportunities college students

employment opportunities college students,

Correct answer:

employment opportunities, college students

Explanation:

The phrase "when researching employment opportunites" operates in the sentence as an introductory conditional phrase, giving a necessary "if" to the sentence. Such a clause needs to be appropriately set apart from the rest of the sentence; therefore, "employment opportunities, college students" is the correct answer choice.

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