PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #3902 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In the Middle Ages few peasants were ever able to rise above the economic class in which they were born.

Possible Answers:

In the Middle Ages few peasants were ever able

In the Middle Ages fewer peasants were ever able

In the Middle Ages few peasants was ever able

In the Middle Ages few peasants were even able

In the Middle Ages, few peasants were ever able

Correct answer:

In the Middle Ages, few peasants were ever able

Explanation:

"In the Middle Ages" is an introductory phrase, a phrase that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but remains outside its main structure. Any introductory phrase must be set apart by a comma from the rest of the sentence. "In the Middle Ages, few peasants were ever able" is the only answer choice to appropriately use such a comma.

Example Question #3903 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Unlike his brothers the little boy hated playing sports or any outdoor activities

Possible Answers:

Unlike, his brothers, the little boy hated 

Unlike his brothers the little boy, hated 

Unlike, his brothers the little boy hated 

Unlike his brothers, the little boy hated 

Unlike his brothers the little boy hated 

Correct answer:

Unlike his brothers, the little boy hated 

Explanation:

"Unlike his brothers" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but remains outside its main structure. Any introductory phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. "Unlike his brothers, the little boy hated" is the only answer choice that correctly uses a comma.

Example Question #3904 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Under the new treaty neither side could put defensive works along their border.

Possible Answers:

Under the new treaty neither side could put defensive works along their border.

Under the new treaty neither side could put defensive works, along their border.

Under the new treaty, neither side could put defensive works along their border.

Under, the new treaty, neither side could put defensive works along their border. 

Under the new treaty neither side, could put defensive works along their border.

Correct answer:

Under the new treaty, neither side could put defensive works along their border.

Explanation:

"Under the new treaty" is an introductory phrase, one that condistions the action of the sentence, but remains outside of the sentence's main structure. An introductory phrase must always be set off by a comma. The only answer choice that correctly sets off the phrase is "Under the new treaty, neither side could put defensive works along their border."

Example Question #3905 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In the previous case the exact same weapon was used.

Possible Answers:

In the previous case the exact same weapon, was used.

In the previous case, the exact same, weapon was used.

In the previous case, the exact same weapon was used.

In the previous case, the exact same weapon, was used.

In the previous case the exact same weapon was used.

Correct answer:

In the previous case, the exact same weapon was used.

Explanation:

"In the previous case" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but remains separate from the main body of the sentence. Any interrupting phrase must be set off from the main portion of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that correctly sets off the phrase is "In the previous case, the exact same weapon was used."

Example Question #3906 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.

Possible Answers:

Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.

Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improving.

Under the teacher's guidance, the students' reading ability improved.

Under the teacher's guidance the students' reading ability improved.

Under the teacher's guidance the students reading ability improved.

Correct answer:

Under the teacher's guidance, the students' reading ability improved.

Explanation:

"Under the teacher's guidance" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the action of the sentence, but is apart from its main structure. Any introductory phrase needs to be set apart fom the main body of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that correctly uses a comma to separate the phrase is "Under the teacher's guidance, the students' reading ability improved."

Example Question #101 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. 

Unlike his family the man became deeply religious as he got older.

Possible Answers:

Unlike his family the man became deeply religious as he got older.

Unlike his family, the man became deeply religious as he got older.

Unlike his family the man became, deeply religious as he got older.

Unlike his family the man, became deeply religious as he got older.

Unlike his family the man became deeply religious, as he got older.

Correct answer:

Unlike his family, the man became deeply religious as he got older.

Explanation:

"Unlike his family" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the action of the sentence, but remains apart from its main body. Any introductory phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that correctly uses the comma is "Unlike his family, the man became deeply religious as he got older."

Example Question #81 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Just like his father the little boy had flaming red hair.

Possible Answers:

Just as like his father the little boy had flaming red hair.

Just like his father the little boy had flaming red hair.

Just like his father, the little boy had flaming red hair.

Just like his father the little boy having flaming red hair.

Just like his father the little boy had flaming, red hair.

Correct answer:

Just like his father, the little boy had flaming red hair.

Explanation:

"Just like his father" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the action of the sentence, but remains outside its main structure. Any introductory phrase must be set apart from the body of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that appropriately uses a comma in this way is "Just like his father, the little boy had flaming red hair."

Example Question #81 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

For the new model everything about the car was changed.

Possible Answers:

For the new model everything, about the car was changed.

For the new model, everything about the car was changed.

For the new model everything about the car was changed.

For, the new model, everything about the car was changed. 

For the new model everything, about the car, was changed.

Correct answer:

For the new model, everything about the car was changed.

Explanation:

"For the new model" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the action of the sentence, but remains outside of its main structure. Any introductory phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice which properly uses the comma is "For the new model, everything about the car was changed."

Example Question #82 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

For the new team the coach intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

Possible Answers:

For the new team, the coach intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

For the new team the coach intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

For the new team the coach, intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

For the new team, the coach—intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

For the new team the coach intentionally sought out; different kinds of players.

Correct answer:

For the new team, the coach intentionally sought out different kinds of players.

Explanation:

The phrase "For the new team" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence but remains outside its main structure. All introductory phrases need to be set apart from the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice to correctly do this is "For the new team, the coach intentionally sought out different kinds of players."

Example Question #1741 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal stays out during daylight hours and sleeps at night.

Possible Answers:

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin, the raccoon this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon these mammals 

Unlike, its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal 

Correct answer:

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal 

Explanation:

It may take you a moment to figure out that "the raccoon" is not actually the subject of the sentence and "this mammal" is since the nouns appear right next to each other. The phrase "Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon" is an introductory phrase, giving a condition in which to understand the main body of the sentence. All introductory phrases need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal."

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