SAT Writing : Improving Sentences

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Example Questions

Example Question #3942 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Cicero a one time senator died poor, hunted, and alone. 

Possible Answers:

Cicero a one time senator

Cicero, a one time senator

Cicero a one time, senator

Cicero a one time senator,

Cicero, a one time senator,

Correct answer:

Cicero, a one time senator,

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases that add contextual information but do not fundamentally alter the grammatical structure of the sentence must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In the sentence above "Cicero a one time senator" should read, "Cicero, a one time senator," instead. 

Example Question #3943 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Paul the fireman's son was hurt very badly in the accident.

Possible Answers:

Paul, the firemans' son, was hurt

Paul the firemans son was hurt

Paul the firemans' son was hurt

Paul, the fireman's son was hurt

Paul, the fireman's son, was hurt

Correct answer:

Paul, the fireman's son, was hurt

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases are phrases that add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being complete, and they must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In the sentence above "Paul the fireman's son was hurt" should read, "Paul, the fireman's son, was hurt."

Example Question #525 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met is really no fun to be around.

Possible Answers:

Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met is really no fun to be around.

Spencer one of the most boorish men I have ever met is really no fun to be around.

Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met, is really no fun to be around.

Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met, is really no fun to be around.

Spencer-one of the most boorish men I have ever met is really no fun to be around.

Correct answer:

Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met, is really no fun to be around.

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases, subordinate phrases that add information to a sentence but are not necessary to the sentence being complete (like this one), must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Spencer, one of the most boorish men I have ever met, is really no fun to be around."

Example Question #1771 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time has recently developed a new fan base.

Possible Answers:

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time has recently developed a new fan base.

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time has recently engineered new fans.

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time has recently developed a new fan base.

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time, has recently endangered new fans.

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time, has recently engendered new fans.

Correct answer:

The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time, has recently engendered new fans.

Explanation:

Introductory or interrupting phrases are phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being complete. Introductory and interrupting phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "The novel we're studying, one of my favorite books of all time, has recently developed a new fan base."

Example Question #527 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars you're only hurting yourself.

Possible Answers:

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars you're only hurting yourself.

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars, youre only hurting yourself.

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars; you're only hurting yourself.

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars, you're only hurting yourself.

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars, your only hurting yourself.

Correct answer:

When you fail to pay attention during the seminars, you're only hurting yourself.

Explanation:

Introductory or interrupting phrases are phrases that are subordinate to the main clause and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being complete. Introductory phrases must be separated from the main clause by a comma. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "When you fail to pay attention during the seminars, you're only hurting yourself."

Example Question #3944 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

My favorite dish, pork fried rice is best served warm but not too hot. 

Possible Answers:

My favorite, dish pork fried rice, is

My favorite dish pork fried rice is

My favorite dish, pork fried rice, is

My favorite dish, pork fried rice is,

My favorite dish, pork fried rice is

Correct answer:

My favorite dish, pork fried rice, is

Explanation:

Introductory or interrupting phrases add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being complete. Since they are dependent clauses, they must be separated from the rest of the sentence with a comma. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "My favorite dish, pork fried rice, is"

Example Question #3945 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I'm worried about Michael the youngest boy on the trip because he hasn't been engaged with his peers.  

Possible Answers:

Michael, the youngest boy on the trip, because

Michael, the youngest boy on the trip so

Michael the younger boy on the trip because

Michael the youngest boy on the trip because

Michael, the younger boy on the trip, because

Correct answer:

Michael, the youngest boy on the trip, because

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases provide context or information about an element of the sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, therefore they must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Michael, the youngest boy on the trip, because"

Example Question #530 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I don't much care for Marcus easily the most pugnacious player on our team because he is such a poor sport.

Possible Answers:

I don't much care for Marcus easily the most pugnacious player on our team, because he is such a poor sport.

I don't much care for Marcus, easily the most pugnacious player on our team because he is such a poor sport.

I do not much care for Marcus easily the most pugnacious player on our team, because he is such a poor sport.

I don't much care for Marcus easily the most pugnacious player on our team because he is such a poor sport.

I don't much care for Marcus, easily the most pugnacious player on our team, because he is such a poor sport.

Correct answer:

I don't much care for Marcus, easily the most pugnacious player on our team, because he is such a poor sport.

Explanation:

Phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence but are not necessary to the sentence being complete must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. If these phrases come in the middle of the main clause they are called interrupting phrases. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I don't much care for Marcus, easily the most pugnacious player on our team, because he is such a poor sport."

Example Question #121 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky is widely known for its history and culture.

Possible Answers:

Bourbon County: one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky, is widely known for its history and culture.

Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky is widely known for its history and culture.

Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky, is widely known for its history and culture.

Bourbon county, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky is widely known for its history and culture.

Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky; is widely known for its history and culture.

Correct answer:

Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky, is widely known for its history and culture.

Explanation:

Introductory or interrupting phrases, phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence but are not necessary to the sentence being complete (like this one!), must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. You should be able to remove an interrupting phrase from a sentence without grammatically altering the overall structure of the sentence. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Bourbon County, one of the most famous counties in all Kentucky, is widely known for its history and culture."

Example Question #122 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

After she took her terrible fall the very old woman had great difficulty walking around.

Possible Answers:

After she took her terrible fall the very old woman had a great difficulty walking around.

After she took her terrible fall the very old woman had greatest difficulty walking around.

After she took her terrible fall the very old woman had greater difficulty walking around.

After she took her terrible fall the very old woman had great difficulty walking around.

After she took her terrible fall, the very old woman had great difficulty walking around.

Correct answer:

After she took her terrible fall, the very old woman had great difficulty walking around.

Explanation:

Introductory phrases come at the beginning of a sentence. They are subordinate and add information or context to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence's grammatical completeness. Introductory phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence with a comma. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "After she took her terrible fall, the very old woman had great difficulty walking around."

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