SAT Writing : Improving Sentences

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Example Questions

Example Question #83 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal stays out during daylight hours and sleeps at night.

Possible Answers:

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin, the raccoon this mammal 

Unlike, its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon this mammal 

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon these mammals 

Correct answer:

Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal 

Explanation:

It may take you a moment to figure out that "the raccoon" is not actually the subject of the sentence and "this mammal" is since the nouns appear right next to each other. The phrase "Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon" is an introductory phrase, giving a condition in which to understand the main body of the sentence. All introductory phrases need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Unlike its distant cousin the raccoon, this mammal."

Example Question #84 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

When reaching for a metaphor authors often make their point more confusing.

Possible Answers:

When reaching for metaphor authors often make their point more confusing.

When reaching for metaphors authors often make their point more confusing.

When reaching for a metaphor; authors often make their point more confusing.

When reaching for a metaphor authors often make their point more confusing.

When reaching for a metaphor, authors often make their point more confusing.

Correct answer:

When reaching for a metaphor, authors often make their point more confusing.

Explanation:

The sentence, as written, actually contains two separate phrases, with "When reaching for metaphors" being an introductory phrase. Introductory phrases always need to be set off by commas; therefore, the correct answer is "When reaching for a metaphor, authors often make their point more confusing."

Example Question #85 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

The exciting political race the first in the county in years drew a large amount of interest from local news outlets.

Possible Answers:

The exciting political race the first in the county in years drew

The exciting political race the first in the county in years, drew

The exciting political race, the first in the county in years, drew 

The exciting political race, the first in the county in years drew

The exciting, political race, the first in the county in years drew

Correct answer:

The exciting political race, the first in the county in years, drew 

Explanation:

The phrase "the first in the county in years" is an interrupting phrase, a clause that provides information to the sentence but is not crucial to the structure. All interrupting phrases need to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas; therefore, the correct answer choice is "The exciting political race, the first in the county in years, drew."

Example Question #86 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

In the first heat every car spun out, and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

Possible Answers:

In the first heat every car spun out, and none of the racers, finished the required four laps.

In the first heat, every car spun out, and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

In the first heat every car spun out, and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

In the first heat every car spun out and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

In the first heat every car spun out; and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

Correct answer:

In the first heat, every car spun out, and none of the racers finished the required four laps.

Explanation:

The phrase "In the first heat" is an introductory phrase in the sentence, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence (or in this case, the first part of this compound sentence), but remains apart from its structure. All introductory phrases need to be separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma. As this is the only punctuation error in the sentence as written, the correct answer choice is "In the first heat, every car spun out, and none of the racers finished the required four laps."

Example Question #87 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

For three years the fugitive lived in hiding by wearing a beard and taking on an assumed name.

Possible Answers:

For three, years the fugitive lived

For three years the fugitive lives

For three years, the fugitive lived

For three years the fugitive lived

For, three years, the fugitive lived

Correct answer:

For three years, the fugitive lived

Explanation:

The phrase "for three years" is an introductory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence but is not part of the necessary structure of the sentence. All introductory phrases should be set off by a comma from the rest of the sentence. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "For three years, the fugitive lived."

Example Question #81 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The artist's masterpiece a giant canvas of the emperor had hung in the museum for centuries.

Possible Answers:

The artist's masterpiece a giant canvas of the emperor had hung in the museum in centuries.

The artist's masterpiece a giant canvas about the emperor had hung in the museum for centuries.

The artist's masterpiece a giant canvas of the emperor had hanging in the museum for centuries.

The artist's masterpiece a giant canvas of the emperor had hung in the museum for centuries.

The artist's masterpiece, a giant canvas of the emperor, had hung in the museum for centuries.

Correct answer:

The artist's masterpiece, a giant canvas of the emperor, had hung in the museum for centuries.

Explanation:

The phrase "a giant canvas of the emperor" is an interrupting phrase, one that adds information to the sentence, but sits outside its main structure. Any interrupting phrase must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. The only answer choice which appropriately places commas in the sentence is "The artist's masterpiece, a giant canvas of the emperor, had hung in the museum for centuries."

Example Question #82 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The dog a purebred champion was remarkably well behaved throughout the trip.

Possible Answers:

The dog, a purebred champion was

The dog a purebred, champion was

The dog a purebred champion was

The dog, a purebred champion, was

The dog a purebred champion, was

Correct answer:

The dog, a purebred champion, was

Explanation:

The phrase "a purebred champion" is an interrupting phrase, one that adds extra meaning to the sentence, but does not constitute a crucial element of its structure. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the sentence by commas. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "The dog, a purebred champion, was."

Example Question #83 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The lottery winner a poor farmer, said he was unsure what he would do with his winnings.

Possible Answers:

The lottery winner, a poor farmer said

The lottery winner a poor farmer, said

The lottery winner, a poor farmer, said

The lottery winner a poor farmer, says

The lottery winner a poor farmer said

Correct answer:

The lottery winner, a poor farmer, said

Explanation:

The phrase "a poor farmer" is an interrupting phrase, one that provides extra information but is not a crucial part of the sentence's structure. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "The lottery winner, a poor farmer, said."

Example Question #91 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Possible Answers:

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter. Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter Sarah wanted to adopt one of them.

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter; Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter, so Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter, Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Correct answer:

Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter, Sarah wanted to adopt all of them.

Explanation:

"Although she was supposed to pick out one puppy to adopt at the animal shelter" is a subordinate or dependent clause. When you begin a sentence with a subordinate clause, you need to separate it from the independent clause with a comma.

Example Question #92 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

For the next twenty years which went past his retirement, the detective was haunted by the unsolved murder case.

Possible Answers:

For the next twenty years which went past his retirement,

For the next twenty years going past his retirement

For the next twenty years, which went past his retirement,

For the next twenty years which went past his retirement

For the next twenty years, which went past his retirement

Correct answer:

For the next twenty years, which went past his retirement,

Explanation:

The phrase "which went past his retirement" is an interrupting phrase, a phrase whch provides information to the meaning of the sentence but is outside the structure of the sentence. An interrupting phrase needs to be set apart by commas, making "For the next twenty years,which went past his retirement," the correct answer choice.

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