SAT Writing : Improving Sentences
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Example Question #41 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises, was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises; was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises: was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises, was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales, and warm-up exercises, was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises was an excellent way to kick off the piano lesson.
Here, we have a single independent clause. “Beginning with scales and warm-up exercises” isn’t a dependent clause; it’s part of the main idea that’s being advanced here. Adding a comma or other punctuation would incorrectly break up the clause.
Example Question #42 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, it was a fine and beautiful summer's day.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, it was a fine and beautiful Summer's day.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, it was a fine and beautiful summer's day.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, it was a fine and beautiful summer day.
The old man went down to his Venerable Fishing Boat, it was a fine and beautiful summer's day.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, because it was a fine and beautiful summer's day.
The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, because it was a fine and beautiful summer's day.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. The best way to correct the underlined portion is: "The old man went down to his venerable fishing boat, because it was a fine and beautiful summer's day."
Example Question #1551 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship, I have a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I, have a very acrimonious relationship: I have a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship, I have a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship, I have: a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship... I have a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship; I have a hard time tolerating him.
My landlord and I have a very acrimonious relationship; I have a hard time tolerating him.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses.
Example Question #1552 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The governor was bloviating incessantly, many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly, for many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly...many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly, with many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly; many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly, many citizens were bored to tears.
The governor was bloviating incessantly; many citizens were bored to tears.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. Either a comma with a conjunction or a semicolon would correctly combine these clauses into a single sentence.
Example Question #1553 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The young official was utterly incorruptible, she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorrigible, while she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorruptible, she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorruptible; she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorruptible, but she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorruptible...she proved impossible to bribe.
The young official was utterly incorruptible; she proved impossible to bribe.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. A period, a semicolon, or a comma with a coordinating conjunction would all be appropriate replacements for the comma in the example sentence.
Example Question #1554 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates, he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates, with he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates-he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates, he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates: he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
I can't stand how much Emmett bloviates: he is constantly saying more than is necessary or proper.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. The only correct option from the choices given is the colon.
Example Question #1555 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, over you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, but you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, so you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, under you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, so you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. The three options for doing so are a comma and a coordinating conjunction, a semicolon, or a period. The best choice is: "It is entirely too difficult to pass through that part of town unnoticed, so you must keep to side streets and back alleys if you want to elude capture."
Example Question #51 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test, that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test, so that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test; so that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test, that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test so that's why he performed so poorly.
The truth of the matter is that he was utterly unprepared for the test, so that's why he performed so poorly.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. The three options are a comma with a conjunction, a semicolon, or a period. In the example above, a comma with a conjunction is probably the smoothest choice, as it causally connects the two clauses.
Example Question #52 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The trial was going extremely poorly, the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
The trial was going extremely poorly; the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
The trial was going extreme poorly, the defendant was excruciating worried.
The trial was going extreme poorly, the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
The trial was going extremely poorly, the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
The trial was going extremely poorly; and the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
The trial was going extremely poorly; the defendant was excruciatingly worried.
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. The best choice of the answers above is: "The trial was going extremely poorly; the defendant was excruciatingly worried." A semicolon works here to connect the two independent clauses, and suggest that they are contextually related, as opposed to two entirely separate sentences.
Example Question #51 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister to bear, he defenestrated from the highest tower of the castle and died instantly.
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister too bear,
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister to bear;
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister to bear,
The shame of the failure was too great, for the minister to bear,
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister two bear,
The shame of the failure was too great for the minister to bear;
When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses.
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