SAT Writing : Correcting Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors
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Example Question #121 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Currency has had rarely any uniform shape or design throughout human history.
Currency has had rarely any uniform shape or design throughout human history.
Currency has had rarely any uniform shape or design through out human history.
Currency has had rarely any uniform shape or design human history throughout.
Currency has had rarely any uniform shape nor design throughout human history.
Currency has rarely had any uniform shape or design throughout human history.
Currency has rarely had any uniform shape or design throughout human history.
The insertion of the adverb "rarely" after "had" makes its usage confusing and unclear, since the reader is not sure which verb it is modifying. By placing "rarely" between "has" and "had," the meaning of the sentence becomes clearer, and thus the correct answer is "Currency has rarely had any uniform shape or design throughout human history."
Example Question #122 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
He was the only third driver to win ten races in one season.
He was only the third driver to win ten races in one season.
He was the third driver to only win ten races in one season.
He only was the third driver to win ten races in one season.
He was the third driver only to win ten races in one season.
He was the only third driver to win ten races in one season.
He was only the third driver to win ten races in one season.
The placement of "only" in the sentence makes the sentence confusing, as it seems as if the subject were "only" one of many "third drivers" "to win ten races in one season," which doesn't make sense. The sentence only makes sense if it suggests that the driver in question was just "the third driver" ever to achieve the feat. The answer choice that correctly deploys "only" is, "He was only the third driver to win ten races in one season."
Example Question #123 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Widespread structural reform is only the way the organization can remain solvent in the future.
Widespread structural reform is only the way the organization can remain solvent for the future.
Widespread structural reform is only the way the organization could remain solvent in the future.
Widespread structural reform is only the way that organization can remain solvent in the future.
Widespread structural reform is only the way the organization can remain solvent in the future.
Widespread structural reform is the only way the organization can remain solvent in the future.
Widespread structural reform is the only way the organization can remain solvent in the future.
The insertion of "only" between "is" and "the" makes it unclear what the word is modifying in the sentence. As "only" is modifying "way," it should be placed next to it in the sentence; therefore, the correct answer choice is "Widespread structural reform is the only way the organization can remain solvent in the future."
Example Question #12 : Correcting Misplaced Or Interrupting Modifier Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The Zulu tribe was the British army's arguably most formidable opponent in the Colonial period.
was arguably the British army's most formidable opponent
was the British army's arguable most formidable opponent
was the British army's most formidable opponent arguably
was the British army's arguably most formidable opponent
was the British army's arguing most formidable opponent
was arguably the British army's most formidable opponent
The word "arguably" is an odd place in the sentence that makes it unclear exactly what is being modified by the word. As the thing that is arguable is the status of "the Zulu tribe" against other British opponents. Therefore, the clearest and best answer choice is "was arguably the British army's most formidable opponent."
Example Question #124 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The hill was a particularly difficult challenge for the racers, who could find nothing like it for practicing anywhere.
like it for practicing anywhere.
like practicing for it anywhere.
like it practicing for anywhere.
like for it practicing anywhere.
like it anywhere for practicing.
like it anywhere for practicing.
With "anywhere" placed after "practicing," the sentence reads as though the problem was in "practicing anywhere" rather than its intended meaning of finding something "anywhere" on which the racers could practice. The answer choice that best clarifies this is "like it anywhere for practicing."
Example Question #125 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.
Only the cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
Only the cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
Only the cure for a common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
The only cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
Only the cure for the common cold is rest relaxation and fluids.
Only a cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
The only cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids.
The use of "only" at the very beginning of the sentence creates confusion throughout the rest of the sentence. As it needs to directly modify "cure," it should be moved directly next to it. The answer choice that appropriately does this is "The only cure for the common cold is rest, relaxation, and fluids."
Example Question #126 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
In all of human history, such actions before had never been undertaken.
actions before had never been undertaken.
such actions before had never be undertaken.
such actions had never before been undertaken.
such actions before never been undertaken.
such actions before had never been undertaken.
such actions had never before been undertaken.
The main issue with the underlined phrase is one of word order, as "before" is stuck in a place that makes the meaning confusing. To improve this phrase, "before" should be moved to work with "never." "Such actions had never before been undertaken," is the correct answer choice.
Example Question #127 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The tickets only were able to be given out to people who called the radio station.
The tickets only were able to be given out to people who called the radio station.
The tickets were only able to be given out to people who called the radio station.
The tickets only were able to be given out to people who call the radio station.
The tickets only were able to be gave out to people who called the radio station.
The tickets only were able to be given out until people who called the radio station.
The tickets were only able to be given out to people who called the radio station.
The placement of "only" in the sentence is confusing, as it is unclear what "only" is modifying. By moving "only" after the verb, it makes it clear that "only" modifies "able," making the correct answer "The tickets were only able to be given out to people who called the radio station."
Example Question #128 : Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
With each passing year, the veterans of the war fewer grew in number.
the veterans of the war fewer growing in number.
the veterans of the war fewer grew in number.
the veterans of the war few grew in number.
the veterans of the war grew fewer in number.
the veterans of the war fewer grew on number.
the veterans of the war grew fewer in number.
The word "fewer" is in a strange and confusing place in the sentence. The sentence needs to be restrutured so that the veterans have "fewer" "in number." Therefore, the correct answer choice is "the veterans of the war grew fewer in number."
Example Question #441 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Scientists believe the extinction now was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
Scientists now believe the extinction was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
Scientists believe the extinction now was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago rather than a single cause.
Scientists believe the extinction now caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
Scientists believe the extinction now was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
Scientists believe the extinction now was causing by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
Scientists now believe the extinction was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause.
The placement of "now" before "was" makes the sentence read so that the "extinction" appears to be simultaneously "now" and "millions of years ago." The word order should be changed to demonstrate the thing happening "now" is what "scientists believe." Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Scientists now believe the extinction was caused by a variety of factors millions of years ago, rather than a single cause."
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