SAT Writing : Correcting Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

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Example Question #301 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The flood was the beginning only of the area's experience with natural disasters that season.

Possible Answers:

The flood was the beginning only of the area's experience

The flood was only the beginning of the area's experience

The flood was the beginning only of the area's experiencing

The flood was the beginning only of the areas experience

The flood was the beginning only for the area's experience

Correct answer:

The flood was only the beginning of the area's experience

Explanation:

The insertion of "only" between "beginning" and "of" makes the sentence confusing and awkward. The sentence is attempting to say that the flood began a sequence of awful natural disasters, but "only" should be moved to better indicate this. The answer choice that best clarifies the sentence is "The flood was only the beginning of the area's experience."

Example Question #302 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The king was the person only in the country who could exercise such power.

Possible Answers:

The king was the person in the country only who could exercise such power.

The king was the only person in the country who could exercise such power.

The king was the person only in the country who could exercise such power.

Only the king was the person in the country who could exercise such power.

The king was the person in the country who could exercise such power only.

Correct answer:

The king was the only person in the country who could exercise such power.

Explanation:

In the sentence as it is written, "only" is floating between phrases, and it is not clear what exactly the word is modifying. The sentence is trying to say that the king was the singular person with the ability to exercise the power. So, "only" should be placed next to "person" to make this clear. The only answer choice that places "only" before "person" is "The king was the only person in the country who could exercise such power."

Example Question #303 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Just he was seventeen when he first got arrested, and he was charged with a minor shoplifting violation.

Possible Answers:

Just he was seventeen when he first got arrested

He was seventeen when he just first got arrested

Just seventeen he was when he first got arrested

He was just seventeen when he first got arrested

He was seventeen just when he first got arrested

Correct answer:

He was just seventeen when he first got arrested

Explanation:

The use of "just" at the beginning of the sentence is awkward and confusing, making it unclear what exactly the adjective is modifying. The word makes the most sense if it modifies "seventeen," to emphasize the subject's youth during his "first arrest." "He was just seventeen when he first got arrested" is the answer choice that best makes use of the word "just" by placing it directly before "seventeen."

Example Question #32 : Misplaced Or Interrupting Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The race's winner was actually only the driver to complete the full race.

Possible Answers:

The race's winner was actually the driver to only complete the full race.

The race's winner was actually the driver only to complete the full race.

The race's winner was actually the only driver to complete the full race.

The race's winner was actually only the driver to complete the full race.

The race's winner was only actually the driver to complete the full race.

Correct answer:

The race's winner was actually the only driver to complete the full race.

Explanation:

The placement of "only" in the sentence is confusing and odd, as it seems to imply that the subject was merely the driver who finished. The sentence will make the most sense if "only" is used to show that the winner was the one driver to finish. The sentence which best does this is "The race's winner was actually the only driver to complete the full race."

Example Question #104 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The runner was the third person only from his home country to win a medal at the games.

Possible Answers:

the third person from only his home country 

the third person only from his home country

only the third person from his home country

the third person from his home country only

the only third person from his home country

Correct answer:

only the third person from his home country

Explanation:

The use of "only" in the sentence is confusing, and makes it unclear what is being modified by the adjective. The word can be better used by placing it at the front of the underlined phrase to show the subject was the third person from the country; therefore, the correct answer choice is "only the third person from his home country."

Example Question #105 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

There once was a shepherd boy whom sat on the hillside watching the village sheep. He was hot and exhausted fanning himself, rapidly in a feeble attempt to cool himself down. On top of that, he had never been so bored before. To amuse himself, he decided to play a joke. He put his hands around his mouth and yelled in a loud voice, "Wolf! Wolf! A wolf is chasing the sheep!”

They came running. They asked the boy, “What’s going on? Did you yell ‘A wolf is chasing the sheep?’”

The boy laughed. “It was just a joke, everyone.”

The people fumed, but they all returned to their homes.

The next day, the boy bored again decided to amuse himself again. He bellowed, “Wolf! Wolf!” Again, the townspeople came running. Once they arrived and witnessed the laughing boy, they realized they’d been tricked a second time. Nonetheless, they returned home and irritated resolved to never fall for the trick again for third time.

The next day, the boy was watching his sheep. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a wolf appeared from behind the bushes. With its teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep. Terrified, he called, “Help! A wolf! A wolf is here!” The people ignored his cries. “That mischievous boy,” they all said to one another. “He must think he can fool us again.” But not one of them came running.

No one was there to witness as the wolf ate every last sheep on the hillside, as the boy helplessly cowered behind a bush. As the boy hid, he shook his head. “I shall never fib again,” he resolved to himself.

How should the underlined section be corrected?

Possible Answers:

With bared teeth the boy cowered as the wolf the sheep approached.

With its teeth bared, the wolf approached the sheep as the boy cowered.

NO CHANGE

Its teeth was bared as the wolf approached the sheep and the boy was cowering as it did so.

Correct answer:

With its teeth bared, the wolf approached the sheep as the boy cowered.

Explanation:

In the original sentence, the boy is the subject of the sentence, so the phrase "with its teeth bared" would be a modifier for him. The author was intending to use this phrase to describe the wolf, so one has to choose an option in which the phrase clearly modifies the wolf. In "With its teeth bared, the wolf approached...," the wolf is the subject of the sentence, so the modifier applies correctly. 

The sentence, "With bared teeth the boy cowered as the wolf the sheep approached" does not fix the modifier, and it is confusing to read without a comma setting off the prepositional phrase, "with bared teeth." The sentence, "Its teeth was bared as the wolf approached the sheep and the boy was cowering as it did so," is needlessly wordy. The sentence, "With his teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep" still has a misplaced modifier, and now that "his" is added, it is significantly more confusing.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audience enjoying the show. 

Possible Answers:

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

(No changes needed)

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays; his audiences enjoying the show. 

Inspired of storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audiences enjoyed the show. 

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one man plays, his audiences enjoying the show. 

Correct answer:

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

Explanation:

The original statement is grammatically incorrect because "audience" and "show" should be plural.  Also, "his audience enjoying the show" makes the sentence into a run-on.  The correct answer is concise and not awkward.  

Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Possible Answers:

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room has appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes from the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes of the performers.

Correct answer:

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Explanation:

The sentence as written is actually a fragment, as it does not contain a proper verb. The word "appreciating" in the sentence is a gerund, or a verb form that can function as anoun. The correct answer will use a full verb form, as "Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers" does.

Example Question #481 : Improving Sentences

Religious texts often appear quite difficult to understand, being contradictions of themselves.

Possible Answers:

being contradicting them.

contradicting them.

contradicting themselves.

being contradictions of themselves.

being contradictions of them.

Correct answer:

contradicting themselves.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase in the sentence is awkwardly worded, which makes the sentence itself difficult to understand. The "religious texts" contain contradictions, a meaning not conveyed properly by the sentence. "Contradicting themselves" is the clearest, most appropriate choice among the answers.

Example Question #131 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

All people choose their own religious denomination when they have been adults.

Possible Answers:

when they have been adults.

when adults they have been.

when they are adults.

they have been adults.

when being adults.

Correct answer:

when they are adults.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is very awkwardly worded, and the use of the past perfect form "have been" is confusing. The phrase needs to be cleaned up for better clarity of meaning. "When they are adults" is the best choice among the answers.

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