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Example Question #341 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Since its inception in the 19th century, photography has played various and complex roles. 2 Crude pinhole cameras first appeared in antiquity. 3 Silver salts, the colloidon process, and daguerreotypes were all developed during the 1800s as photography took form and it’s technology evolved.
4 By the 1900s, photography was often considered an equal of, or at least analgesic to, painting and other visual art forms. 5 In much the same way that portrait painters used to memorialize their subjects in gilded frames and oil paints, photography now serves to document people’s daily lives, experiences, and possessions, such as what someone has eaten for dinner or seen on a road trip. 6 For example, on social media sites.
7 Photography can capture such minuet, intimate details that some aboriginal peoples famously believed cameras could steal the subject’s soul. 8 Perhaps this is why paparazzi are so victimized by others in their profession: Their intrusiveness may reveal more about the subject than he or she would like. 9 Celebrity photographers including Annie Liebovitz, who often favors a black and white composition, who also works for a famous magazine, attempt to portray the essence of famous people through a single photographic portrait. 10 Photography serves to document war atrocities, famine, or other human rights issues. 11 For example, Nick Ut’s famous picture of Vietnamese children being burned by napalm helped turn American public opinion against the Vietnam War, while Dorothea Lange’s photographs of migrant workers during the Great Depression influenced public policy regarding the treatment of these workers. 12 In the end, photography can be journalistic or artistic, significant or intrusive or ephemeral.
Where should the following sentence be inserted in the passage? “Most recently, digital photography and editing software has allowed professionals to transcend many early limitations of the form.”
After Sentence 4
After Sentence 5
After Sentence 7
After Sentence 6
After Sentence 3
After Sentence 3
Because this sentence discusses recent developments in photography, you may be misled to believe that it belongs at the end of the passage. However, because the sentence is concerned with camera technology, it belongs at the end of the first paragraph, which is all devoted to tracing the technical development of photography over the centuries.
Example Question #121 : New Sat
The Moluccas is a chain, or archetype, of islands belonging to Indonesia. Historically, these islands were known as the Spice Islands for their abundance of nutmeg, cloves, mace, and pepper, this profundity of spices eventually drew colonial attention. Spices such as cloves, cinnamon, cardamom, anise, and pepper were particularly popular during the medieval times. In the 1600s, the Spice Wars arose as a result of competing Portuguese and Dutch interest’s in the Spice Islands. The bloody conflict ended in the deaths of many native Moluccans as well as European traders, wherefore both Portugal and the Netherlands gained and lost territories ranging from Africa and South America. For this day, strife occasionally breaks out on the islands although it is now motivated by religious and not colonial disagreements. It is located just west of New Guinea in the Pacific Ocean, and its more than 1,000 islands are home to more than 2 million people today.
Which of these sentences requires the addition of a semi-colon?
Historically, these islands were known as the Spice Islands for their abundance of nutmeg, cloves, mace, and pepper, this profundity of spices eventually drew colonial attention.
The bloody conflict ended in the deaths of many native Moluccans as well as European traders, wherefore both Portugal and the Netherlands gained and lost territories ranging from Africa and South America.
The Moluccas is a chain, or archetype, of islands belonging to Indonesia.
In the 1600s, the Spice Wars arose as a result of competing Portuguese and Dutch interest’s in the Spice Islands.
Spices such as cloves, cinnamon, cardamom, anise, and pepper were particularly popular during the medieval times.
Historically, these islands were known as the Spice Islands for their abundance of nutmeg, cloves, mace, and pepper, this profundity of spices eventually drew colonial attention.
The second sentence of the paragraph, "Historically, these islands were known as the Spice Islands for their abundance of nutmeg, cloves, mace, and pepper, this profundity of spices eventually drew colonial attention," uses a comma to separate two independent clauses. Adding a semicolon will fix this error. Another option would be to replace the semi-colon with a comma and an appropriate coordinating conjunction. The other sentences, while including some grammatical errors, would neither benefit from nor even permit the addition of a semi-colon.
Example Question #131 : New Sat
The Moluccas is a chain, or archetype, of islands belonging to Indonesia. Historically, these islands were known as the Spice Islands for their abundance of nutmeg, cloves, mace, and pepper, this profundity of spices eventually drew colonial attention. Spices such as cloves, cinnamon, cardamom, anise, and pepper were particularly popular during the medieval times. In the 1600s, the Spice Wars arose as a result of competing Portuguese and Dutch interest’s in the Spice Islands. The bloody conflict ended in the deaths of many native Moluccans as well as European traders, wherefore both Portugal and the Netherlands gained and lost territories ranging from Africa and South America. For this day, strife occasionally breaks out on the islands although it is now motivated by religious and not colonial disagreements. It is located just west of New Guinea in the Pacific Ocean, and its more than 1,000 islands are home to more than 2 million people today.
Which of the following pieces of information would be most relevant to add to the passage?
The origin of the name of the Moluccas
A list of the territorial gains made by the Dutch in the Spice Wars
The taxonomy of popular Moluccan spices such as pepper and cloves
The names of the builders of the Dutch and Portuguese warships
The ship’s log from the first recorded European sightings of the Moluccas
The origin of the name of the Moluccas
Since the passage is mainly devoted to describing the Moluccas’ historical background and geographical location, all of the choices except “the origin of the name of the Moluccas” are too specific and would represent digressions from the main topic.
Example Question #112 : New Sat
There once was a shepherd boy whom sat on the hillside watching the village sheep. He was hot and exhausted fanning himself, rapidly in a feeble attempt to cool himself down. On top of that, he had never been so bored before. To amuse himself, he decided to play a joke. He put his hands around his mouth and yelled in a loud voice, "Wolf! Wolf! A wolf is chasing the sheep!”
They came running. They asked the boy, “What’s going on? Did you yell ‘A wolf is chasing the sheep?’”
The boy laughed. “It was just a joke, everyone.”
The people fumed, but they all returned to their homes.
The next day, the boy bored again decided to amuse himself again. He bellowed, “Wolf! Wolf!” Again, the townspeople came running. Once they arrived and witnessed the laughing boy, they realized they’d been tricked a second time. Nonetheless, they returned home and irritated resolved to never fall for the trick again for third time.
The next day, the boy was watching his sheep. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a wolf appeared from behind the bushes. With its teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep. Terrified, he called, “Help! A wolf! A wolf is here!” The people ignored his cries. “That mischievous boy,” they all said to one another. “He must think he can fool us again.” But not one of them came running.
No one was there to witness as the wolf ate every last sheep on the hillside, as the boy helplessly cowered behind a bush. As the boy hid, he shook his head. “I shall never fib again,” he resolved to himself.
The author is thinking of inserting the following sentence: "Wolves were a common threat to the people in the village, in fact a 'wolf curfew' had even been imposed the previous winter." Where should this sentence be inserted?
At the very beginning of the passage
At the very end of the passage
After "they came running" at the beginning of the second paragraph
After "the boy laughed" at the beginning of the the third paragraph
The sentence is completely irrelevant and cannot sensibly be added to the passage
After "they came running" at the beginning of the second paragraph
This sentence helps to explain why the boy's actions were regarded poorly, and why the townspeople would reacted to his "cries" the way they did. Placing this sentence after the first major reaction of the townspeople to the cries of wolf ("they came running"). Knowing that a wolf curfew had been imposed the previous winter certainly helps to contextualize the townspeople's reaction. None of the other places specified make contextual or logical sense.
Example Question #1 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Ella's younger sister was afraid and scared; it was her first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was scared; it was her first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was afraid and scared... it was her first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was afraid and scared; it was their first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was afraid and scared and terrified; it was her first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was afraid and scared; it was her first time riding a horse.
Ella's younger sister was scared; it was her first time riding a horse.
"Afraid and scared" are too similar in meaning to be used together to describe something in a sentence. The correct answer simply removes one of these two words. The rest of the sentence is correct as written.
Example Question #2 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
1 If you’re wearing clothes right now you’re likely wearing something a sewing machine has produced. 2 But what you may not know is the history of the sewing machine that made your clothes. 3 The device was invented in England during the Industrial Revolution in the late 18th-century. 4 Greatly increasing efficiency by mechanizing the process. 5 Early machines were often used for stitching leather and canvas for various purposes including, horse tack, sails, and shoes. 6 Gradually, other machines emerged that were superior in Europe and America. 7 Famous brands today; include those by 19th century inventor Isaac Singer. 8 As the 1800s progressed sewing machines became purchases for not just clothing manufacturers but individuals.
How should Sentence 2 be rewritten?
But what you may not know is the history of the sewing machine that made your clothes. (no change)
But what you may not know – the history of the sewing machine – is what made your clothes.
But what you may not know is the history of the sewing machine; it made your clothes.
But what you may not know is the history of that machine.
But what you may not know: is the history of the sewing machine.
But what you may not know is the history of that machine.
While Sentence 2 is already grammatically correct, but it is redundant and can be improved. Here, the most concise choice is the right one, and that choice removes the unnecessary addition of the characterization of sewing machines as having made "your clothes" (it also removes an unnecessary and aesthetically unappealing use of the second person, what if, for instance, I made my own clothes? What if I am wearing a knit sweater? This statement is not accurate, since the writer actually has no idea who made every single reader's clothes).
Example Question #2 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
1 One of America’s most inflammatory early disasters, the Johnstown Flood. 2 It was occurring in 1889 after the collapse of the South Fork Dam in Johnstown, Pennsylvania. 3 Heavy rainfall invigorated a reservoir upriver, causing the dam to burst and more than 20 million tons of water pouring down the Conemaugh River. 4 The Johnstown Flood has been immortalized in poems, novels, songs, and films. 5 The committal flood killed more than 2,000 people and it required the attention of the American Red Cross, Clara Barton, and various lawsuits. 6 Compounding the disaster was the Stone Bridge, causing a fire that killed at least 80 people when burning debris caught fire. 7 Later people would fault the rich business tycoons who had weakened the reservoir for their own leisure, building cottages and a spillway along the dam to create the swarthy South Fork Fishing and Hunting Club.8 Nearly $4 million would be donated to relief funds, for Pennsylvanians the true horror never preceded.
How should Sentence 6 be rewritten?
Causing a fire that killed at least 80 people, burning debris caught fire; compounding the disaster at the Stone Bridge.
Compounding the disaster, burning debris at the Stone Bridge caused a fire that killed at least 80 people.
Compounding the disaster, the Stone Bridge: causing a fire that killed at least 80 people when burning debris caught fire.
Compounding the disaster, the Stone Bridge, causing a fire that killed at least 80 people when burning debris caught fire.
Compounding the disaster was the Stone Bridge, causing a fire that killed at least 80 people when burning debris caught fire. (no change)
Compounding the disaster, burning debris at the Stone Bridge caused a fire that killed at least 80 people.
A full rewrite is necessary to make this sentence both grammatically correct and logical. As the original sentence is grammatically incorrect and overly wordy, making "compounding the disaster" into a clear dependent clause, then making "burning debris" the subject successfully stops the modifier from dangling, and makes the meaning clear and the writing concise.
Example Question #1 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
1 Leprosy: used to be a dreaded illness both in biblical times as well as more recently. 2 People endured its disfiguring effects until the invention of antibiotics in the 1950s. 3 Also known as Hansen’s disease, antibiotics will fictitiously cure leprosy today. 4 In the old days there exacted leprosy colonies to quarantine infected people, as the disease was then considered highly contagious. 5 Symptoms include skin lesions, nerve damage, numbness, tissue damage, and, in severe cases, deformation of fingers and toes. 6 Thanks to modern medicine, leprosy no longer needs to be a source of social skirmish. 7 In reality, it is transmitted through fluids, usually in the form of airborne particles.
How should Sentence 3 be rewritten?
Also known as Hansen’s disease, leprosy will today be cured fictitiously, and antibiotics will do so.
Also known as Hansen’s disease, leprosy can be fictitiously cured by antibiotics today.
Also known as Hansen’s disease: antibiotics will fictitiously cure leprosy today.
Also known as Hansen’s disease, antibiotics will fictitiously cure leprosy today. (no change)
Also known as Hansen’s disease, the fictitious cure of leprosy today is accomplished by antibiotics.
Also known as Hansen’s disease, leprosy can be fictitiously cured by antibiotics today.
The original sentence contains a misplaced modifier. It’s not the antibiotics that are also known as Hansen’s disease; it’s the leprosy itself. Change the order of the words in the second clause in order to avoid this error.
Example Question #1 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
Are you trying to stick to a budget? Using coupons for purchases, also known as “couponing” is a great way to save money on groceries. Coupons are a little piece of paper that can give you a discount on what you buy. You will be amazed at the great bargains and amazing savings you can get!
It’s easy to get started. When you open up your daily newspaper, one might find a glossy insert full of coupons. Some of the coupons will be for things you don’t buy, some will be for things you buy all the time. Go through the coupons and chop out the ones you can use.
The key to successful couponing is getting multiple copies of coupon circulars. Ask your friends, your neighbors, and family if they have any extras. Some coupon users even go through the recycling at their office to find more coupons! Have you ever heard of such a thing in your life! Completely devoted, these circulars help coupon users to get even more savings.
Couponing might sound like hard work, but for many people, it’s also a hobby. Not only does it help them save hundreds of dollars per year, but also it gives them a fun challenge every time they do their shopping.
How should the underlined section be corrected?
These circulars, completely devoted, help coupon users get even more savings.
These circulars help coupon users get even more savings, completely devoted.
These circulars help completely devoted coupon users get even more savings.
NO CHANGE
Completely devoted, these circulars help get even more savings for coupon users.
These circulars help completely devoted coupon users get even more savings.
This question asks you to correct a misplaced modifier error. The modifying phrase, "completely devoted," should be placed as close as possible to the phrase it modifies, "coupon users." Otherwise, the misplaced modifier confuses the sentence's meaning, making it sound as though the circulars themselves are devoted.
Example Question #2 : Avoiding Ambiguity And Redundancy In A Full Sentence
Are you trying to stick to a budget? Using coupons for purchases, also known as “couponing” is a great way to save money on groceries. Coupons are a little piece of paper that can give you a discount on what you buy. You will be amazed at the great bargains and amazing savings you can get!
It’s easy to get started. When you open up your daily newspaper, one might find a glossy insert full of coupons. Some of the coupons will be for things you don’t buy, some will be for things you buy all the time. Go through the coupons and chop out the ones you can use.
The key to successful couponing is getting multiple copies of coupon circulars. Ask your friends, your neighbors, and family if they have any extras. Some coupon users even go through the recycling at their office to find more coupons! Have you ever heard of such a thing in your life! Completely devoted, these circulars help coupon users to get even more savings.
Couponing might sound like hard work, but for many people, it’s also a hobby. Not only does it help them save hundreds of dollars per year, but also it gives them a fun challenge every time they do their shopping.
How should the underlined section be corrected?
When you open up your daily newspaper, you might find a glossy insert full of coupons.
When they open up your daily newspaper, they find a glossy insert full of coupons.
When you open up your daily newspaper, one finds a glossy insert full of coupons.
Upon opening up your daily newspaper, one might find a glossy insert full of coupons
NO CHANGE
When you open up your daily newspaper, you might find a glossy insert full of coupons.
This question asks you to correct ambiguity caused by a subject shift. The first part of the sentence uses the second-person subject, “you,” but the second part of the sentence switches to the third-person neutral subject, “one.” This reduces the clarity and consistency of the text. To correct this error, replace “one” with “you.”