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Example Question #115 : Inserting Content
1 If you’ve watched any environmental news reports in the last few years, it’s likely you’ve stumbled among the idea of fracking. 2 The word is short for “hydraulic fracturing” and involves injecting liquid into rock to create fractures and fractals, there allowing natural gas to be extracted more querulously.3 Proponents say the method facilitates oil drilling and allows countries, like the United States, to cut back on their foreign oil dependence. 4 Amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage.
5 Fracking can require sonorous quantities of water, and leach dangerous carcinogenic chemicals into the groundwater. 6 Some people have even inquired minor earthquakes to fracking: as the process thought to spurn tremors.7 Perhaps most worrisome, fracking allows governments to continue depending on fossil fuel rather than exploring renewable energy. 8 These sources could include wind turbines, solar panels, even hot springs and waterwheels.
What transitional word or phrase should begin Sentence 4?
However
Moreover
What’s more
Likewise
Furthermore
However
Sentence 4 introduces an opposite point of view from Sentence 3, so we need a transitional word that signifies contrast. Note that transitional words or phrases need to be followed by a comma. The sentence should read: "However, amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage."
Example Question #116 : Inserting Content
1 Punk rock developed in the mid-1970s. 2 It was a musical movement that arose out of antiauthoritarian garage bands.3 It was characterized by fast-paced songs, sedimentary lyrics, and a raw loud sound. 4 And often its lyrics were also political. 5 Some of the most famous punk rock bands came from England and the United States and including the Clash, the Sex Pistols, and the Ramones.
6 Punk bands tending to convince a liberal, anti-establishment, sensibility,and they were proponents of individualism, freedom, and nonconformity.7 (Later in the 1990s “riot grrrl” bands like Bikini Kill and Sleater-Kinney used their punk music to draw attention on feminist concerns.)8 Now you can find, punk bands in cities all around the world.9 By the 1980s, the public was beginning to accept punk music, slowly becoming mainstream.
Which of the following topics would best contribute to the passage if added in a sentence?
A description of other musical genres that evolved at the same time as punk rock
Quotes from parents who disapproved of punk music
A description of the punk subculture that arose around the genre’s music scene
A ranking of song lyrics from several famous punk bands
A list of the top ten British punk bands
A description of the punk subculture that arose around the genre’s music scene
Describing the punk subculture and aesthetic would mostly closely align with the passage’s main goal: describing the essence of punk music to an unfamiliar audience. A simple list would certainly contribute, but it would contribute less than a thorough description of the subculture. Discussion of other musical genres, while potentially interesting, would potentially distract from the passage's main goal, and the same is true of a ranking of famous punk song lyrics.
Example Question #331 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Lemon juice with cayenne pepper, cabbage soup, cookies, grapefruit. 2 What do these have in common?3 They are all key ingredients in recent fad diets; since these diets sound promising, few lead to any permanent weight loss.4 Some of the worst can even lead to health problems, such as, vitamin deficiencies or anemia. 5 Instead of being concerned with lasting weight loss, they are promoting radical changes that only last a short time. 6 Cutting out too many calories at once from your diet can lead to dizziness, heart palpitations, and even a slower metabolism.
7 Some thinkers suggest that fad diets are really a way for us to impose order on our chaotic world, hundreds of food choices, conflicting advice from various health experts. 8 So why diet at all?
In Sentence 2, where should the word “foods” be inserted?
after “What”
after “these”
after “have”
It should not be inserted
after “common”
after “these”
In the case of a pronoun such as “these,” vagueness can be an issue, so it’s usually a good idea to include the noun as well. The sentence is discussing “these foods” mentioned in Sentence 1.
Example Question #332 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Lemon juice with cayenne pepper, cabbage soup, cookies, grapefruit. 2 What do these have in common?3 They are all key ingredients in recent fad diets; since these diets sound promising, few lead to any permanent weight loss.4 Some of the worst can even lead to health problems, such as, vitamin deficiencies or anemia. 5 Instead of being concerned with lasting weight loss, they are promoting radical changes that only last a short time. 6 Cutting out too many calories at once from your diet can lead to dizziness, heart palpitations, and even a slower metabolism.
7 Some thinkers suggest that fad diets are really a way for us to impose order on our chaotic world, hundreds of food choices, conflicting advice from various health experts. 8 So why diet at all?
What introductory word or phrase should begin Sentence 6?
Similarly
With all that said
And yet
On the other hand
More or less
Similarly
Sentence 6 presents different but related health issues from the ones discussed in Sentence 4, so “Similarly” will guide the reader to understand that we’re still discussing a relevant topic.
Example Question #333 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Thoreau went to them when he wished to live deliberately, Whitman wrote about them in his book Leaves of Grass. 2 They clean the air, and harbor wildlife. 3 There are nearly 200 million, protected acres of them in the United States. 4 Forests are a national treasure.
5 Since the late 1800s, Congress and Presidents have decorated various areas of the country as national forests, grasslands, and preserves. 6 Some well known National Parks include the Grand Canyon, Yosemite, Yellowstone, and the Great Smoky Mountains. 7 Protecting forests helps safeguard native plant and animal species, it honors landscapes complex histories, and preserving the natural beauty for future generations.
Which sentence needs an apostrophe added to it?
Sentence 7
Sentence 6
Sentence 4
Sentence 1
Sentence 2
Sentence 7
In Sentence 7, the “complex histories” belong to the “landscapes,” so we must add an apostrophe to create the proper possessive: landscapes’.
Example Question #334 : Improving Paragraphs
1 What is to be done about the problem of shoplifting. 2 Small security devices hidden in the tags of expensive clothing, clearly posted signs vocalizing the penalties for shoplifting, and “spider tags” or wired alarm clips all measures that store owners can take. 3 However many can be removed turgidly with magnets, scissors, or other means.
4 Other solutions including using attentive employees, clear and wide aisles, security guards, and security cameras. 5 With self-checkouts, an additional degree of honesty comes into play. 6 Though, it might be more fruition to examine the motives for shoplifting, as more lugubrious social policies could prevent people from needing to shoplift in the first place.
What is the best title for the passage?
"Don’t Shoplift!"
"Sneaky Shoplifters"
"Shoplifting Tricks and Techniques"
"Crime and Punishment: Sentencing Shoplifters"
"Shoplifting Solutions"
"Shoplifting Solutions"
Because the passage is primarily concerned with proposing ways to solve the problem of shoplifting, we want a title that focuses on solutions. While the passage does discuss "shoplifters" as well as their "tricks and techniques," the primary focus of the passage is on finding ways to prevent shoplifting, not accomplishing theft. A simple command statement does not capture the main meaning of the passage as accurately as the option describing "solutions."
Example Question #334 : Improving Paragraphs
1 What is to be done about the problem of shoplifting. 2 Small security devices hidden in the tags of expensive clothing, clearly posted signs vocalizing the penalties for shoplifting, and “spider tags” or wired alarm clips all measures that store owners can take. 3 However many can be removed turgidly with magnets, scissors, or other means.
4 Other solutions including using attentive employees, clear and wide aisles, security guards, and security cameras. 5 With self-checkouts, an additional degree of honesty comes into play. 6 Though, it might be more fruition to examine the motives for shoplifting, as more lugubrious social policies could prevent people from needing to shoplift in the first place.
What introductory word or phrase should be added to Sentence 6?
Since,
Wherefore,
Overall,
Because,
Moreover,
Overall,
Because Sentence 6 is a conclusion, it makes sense to use a transitional word that indicates summary.
Example Question #335 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Acoustics is a field of science that refers to the study of mechanical waves but it is best known for its relation to audible sound. 2 Acoustics has been a branch of human impunity since ancient Greece, Pythagoras investigated musical harmonies.3 Concert halls, headphones, car speakers: all are things that employ acoustical studies to electrocute listeners’ experiences. 4 Sound is not important to just humans; it allows birds, elephants, elk, and other animals to attract mates and defend their territories.
5 It benefits to understand sound waves and their behaviors, when engineers have this knowledge everyone from Roman amphitheaters to modern day punk rockers can enjoy a better listening experience.
Which sentence requires an added hyphen?
Sentence 3
Sentence 6
No sentence requires an added hyphen.
Sentence 5
Sentence 2
Sentence 5
In Sentence 5, the compound adjective “modern day” should be hyphenated, since it appears directly in front of a noun.
Example Question #336 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Thoreau went to them when he wished to live deliberately, Whitman wrote about them in his book Leaves of Grass. 2 They clean the air, and harbor wildlife. 3 There are nearly 200 million, protected acres of them in the United States. 4 Forests are a national treasure.
5 Since the late 1800s, Congress and Presidents have decorated various areas of the country as national forests, grasslands, and preserves. 6 Some well known National Parks include the Grand Canyon, Yosemite, Yellowstone, and the Great Smoky Mountains. 7 Protecting forests helps safeguard native plant and animal species, it honors landscapes complex histories, and preserving the natural beauty for future generations.
What is the best title for this passage?
"Malevolent Forests"
"Morbid Forests"
"Munificent Forests"
"Monetary Forests"
"Magnificent Forests"
"Magnificent Forests"
“Magnificent,” or beautiful and impressive, is the best adjective to convey the author’s tone and message in this passage. (“Malevolent” means hateful, “munificent” means generous, “monetary” means related to money, and “morbid” means abnormally interested in death.)
Example Question #338 : Improving Paragraphs
1 Since its inception in the 19th century, photography has played various and complex roles. 2 Crude pinhole cameras first appeared in antiquity. 3 Silver salts, the colloidon process, and daguerreotypes were all developed during the 1800s as photography took form and it’s technology evolved.
4 By the 1900s, photography was often considered an equal of, or at least analgesic to, painting and other visual art forms. 5 In much the same way that portrait painters used to memorialize their subjects in gilded frames and oil paints, photography now serves to document people’s daily lives, experiences, and possessions, such as what someone has eaten for dinner or seen on a road trip. 6 For example, on social media sites.
7 Photography can capture such minuet, intimate details that some aboriginal peoples famously believed cameras could steal the subject’s soul. 8 Perhaps this is why paparazzi are so victimized by others in their profession: Their intrusiveness may reveal more about the subject than he or she would like. 9 Celebrity photographers including Annie Liebovitz, who often favors a black and white composition, who also works for a famous magazine, attempt to portray the essence of famous people through a single photographic portrait. 10 Photography serves to document war atrocities, famine, or other human rights issues. 11 For example, Nick Ut’s famous picture of Vietnamese children being burned by napalm helped turn American public opinion against the Vietnam War, while Dorothea Lange’s photographs of migrant workers during the Great Depression influenced public policy regarding the treatment of these workers. 12 In the end, photography can be journalistic or artistic, significant or intrusive or ephemeral.
What would be the best title for this passage?
Camera Technology: Pros and Cons
Digitalization and Documentaries: Photography’s Role
Photography’s History Through the Ages
Photography’s Range and Evolution
Paparazzi and the Development of the Photograph
Photography’s Range and Evolution
Although the passage does discuss the history of photography, camera technology, paparazzi, and documentary aspects of the form, none of these are so central to the passage that they should stand alone as a title. A good hint at the sentence's overall focus is that the first sentence's introduction of the historical period in which the camera was invented is only done in the context of photography's "various and complex roles." The text is most concerned with discussing photography’s extensive range and history.