SAT Writing : Rewriting a Single Word

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Example Questions

Example Question #638 : Improving Paragraphs

1 Have you ever went hang gliding? 2 Sailing smoothly across the sky, hang gliders are a sight to behold and capture humans’ longstanding fascination with self propelled flight. 3 Whereas, it is also a dangerous pastime. 4 Personally, I know many people who are aware of the sport’s relative danger but still enjoy it on a regular basis. 5 With proper technical training and certification, it is possible to avoid some of the most common hang gliding catamounts, stalling near the ground, aerobatic stunts gone wrong, and failure to use helmets or parachutes.

7 In the United States, hang gliding is a relatively new sport and most hang gliders are wealthy and educated devotees. 8 Hang gliding actually originated in the 500s in China, with man-sized kites allowing people to sustain flight for short distances. 9 Continual advances in material technologies’ result in constantly improving hang glider equipment – specialized nylon parachutes and lightweight aluminum alloy frames, for example. 10 Popular hang gliding destinations in the United States include Salt Lake City, Utah, Kitty Hawk, North Carolina, and Jackson Hole, Wyoming. 11 The most ardent affiliates say there’s absolutely nothing like the joy of soaring miles above the ground for hours.

In Sentence 11, what word should replace “affiliates”?

Possible Answers:

affiliates

aficionados

affinities

affluence

affidavits

Correct answer:

aficionados

Explanation:

While “affiliates” isn’t a terrible choice for this sentence, “aficionados” (which means fans and devotees) fits the meaning more closely. “Affluence” means wealth, an “affidavit” is a written oath, and an “affinity” is a liking for or attraction to something.

Example Question #639 : Improving Paragraphs

1 Tattoos have even been found on ancient Icelandic, Egyptian, and South American mummies.2 On their various voyages to the South Pacific, Captain Cook and other European explorers brought back accounts of colorfully inked natives, and their sailors soon began to adopt the practice. 3 Early medieval Northern European tribes such as the Picts and Visigoths were often heavily tattooed; particularly the warriors. 4 Over the centuries, various cultures have described various meanings to tattoos, with indelible ink signifying everything from royalty to gang membership to magical powers.

5 Interestingly modern-day tattooing’s popularity evolved out of its adoption by wealthy British nobility, and by American celebrities, musicians, and actors. 6 While tattoos do have a dark past, most notably at Auschwitz, where Nazi’s identified prisoners by tattooing numbers on their arms. 7 Tattoos can be signs of joy, belief, or even healing, such as the colorful tattoos that breast cancer survivors use to cover mastectomy scars.

8 Today, there are more options than ever before, tattoo artists often have fine arts training, lengthy apprenticeships, and can offer specialty inks that glow in the dark or are easier to remove. 9 The internet is full of design ideas, tattoo parlor rankings, and even horror stories about bad tattoo experiences. 10 Now more than ever, information about ink abounds. 11 Choose wisely!

In Sentence 4, which of the following words should replace “described”?

Possible Answers:

descried

subscribed

imbibed

ascribed

scribed

Correct answer:

ascribed

Explanation:

To ascribe meaning to something is to assign it or imbue it with that meaning. That definition most closely fits the sense of the sentence.

Example Question #640 : Improving Paragraphs

1 Although agritourism is a fairly recent phenomenon in the Western world; it is proving popular in many countries. 2 Agritourism is broadly defined as any activity or attraction that draws visitors to a farm, and it can include anything from corn mazes and apple picking to vineyard tours, workshops on animal husbandry, and work-stay exchange programs. 3 The practice is particularly prevocalic in North America, Europe, and Australia. 4 With a huge variety of farms and activities available to agritourists. 5 For example: visitors can learn how to run a cattle drive in Wyoming, make cheese in France, harvest olives in Sicily, or pick kiwi fruit in New Zealand.

6 Income generated from agritourism can help small family farms remain soluble as well as educate the public about where their food comes from. 7 Henceforth, most people agree that agritourism is benevolent for everyone involved. 8 While there are some who argue that it is a cheap ploy designed to make selfish tourists feel better about their vacations. 9 All in all, it will be interesting to see how agritourism continues to develop in the future. 

In Sentence 3, what word should replace “prevocalic”?

Possible Answers:

prevaricated 

precedent

prevocalic (no change)

prevenient

prevalent

Correct answer:

prevalent

Explanation:

“Prevocalic” is a word to describe the letter or sound that comes before a vowel, so it doesn’t fit the meaning of the sentence well. We’re looking for a word that means popular or widespread, and “prevalent” is fits that definition.

Example Question #3181 : Sat Writing

1 Although agritourism is a fairly recent phenomenon in the Western world; it is proving popular in many countries. 2 Agritourism is broadly defined as any activity or attraction that draws visitors to a farm, and it can include anything from corn mazes and apple picking to vineyard tours, workshops on animal husbandry, and work-stay exchange programs. 3 The practice is particularly prevocalic in North America, Europe, and Australia. 4 With a huge variety of farms and activities available to agritourists. 5 For example: visitors can learn how to run a cattle drive in Wyoming, make cheese in France, harvest olives in Sicily, or pick kiwi fruit in New Zealand.

6 Income generated from agritourism can help small family farms remain soluble as well as educate the public about where their food comes from. 7 Henceforth, most people agree that agritourism is benevolent for everyone involved. 8 While there are some who argue that it is a cheap ploy designed to make selfish tourists feel better about their vacations. 9 All in all, it will be interesting to see how agritourism continues to develop in the future. 

In Sentence 7, what word should replace “benevolent”?

Possible Answers:

covalent

munificent

beneficial

bereft

benedictory

Correct answer:

beneficial

Explanation:

Based on the meaning of the sentence, we’re looking for a word that means advantageous, and “beneficial” is the closest synonym. “Benevolent” means generous, charitable, and kind; "munificent" means generous; covalent is a type of chemical bond; "benedictory" means related to a prayer or blessing; and "bereft" means grieved because of deprivation (usually because of the death of a loved one).

Example Question #11 : Increasing The Contextual Relevance Of A Single Word

1 Deaccession or deaccessioning is defined as the intentional disposing or selling of books from library’s collections. 2 And is often undertaken to make room for newer volumes, to shift the focus of the library’s collection, or to reflect changing trends in literature. 3 Many people disagree vehicularly about which books should be deaccessioned, when and how books should be disposed of, and even whether books should be deaccessioned at all. 4 Book deaccession: It sounds boring, but is in fact one of the more controversial and problematic aspects of running a library. 5 Though others argue that it allows libraries to remain current and relevant to the public’s reading needs. 6 No doubt it is a topic that will continue to provoke debate for years to come.

In Sentence 3, what word should replace “vehicularly”?

Possible Answers:

vehicularly (no change)

vinaceously

variously

vehemently

violently

Correct answer:

vehemently

Explanation:

“Vehicularly” means related to vehicles, which doesn’t make sense in the sentence. Based on context clues, we can determine that we’re looking for a word that means strongly or intensely. “Violently” is a bit too extreme a word, but “vehemently,” which means showing strong, forceful emotions, works perfectly. It's a great word!

Example Question #11 : Increasing The Contextual Relevance Of A Single Word

1 All in all, aviation will likely continue to fascinate people for centuries to come. 2 Long before the famous Wright brothers humans were attempting to fly. 3 The ancient Greek myth of Icarus and Daedalus shows the tantalizing allusion of flight. 4 With large kites’ in China may have been the first successful instance of human flight several thousand years ago. 5 Hundreds of years later and despite many hazings; the Montgolfier brothers and other pioneering aviators began experimenting with manned hot-air balloon flights. 6 Therefore, technology has advanced to the point of supersonic and hypersonic flight, but people are still trying to break new barriers and invent new methods of flight.

In Sentence 3, what word should replace “allusion”?

Possible Answers:

allusion

alkaloid

allure

alluvium

alloy

Correct answer:

allure

Explanation:

Based on context clues, we’re looking for a word that means attractiveness or appeal and works well with “tantalizing.” “Allure” means the power of attraction, charm, or fascination, so it fits best in the sentence. “Allusion” is a literary reference to another work, and “alkaloid,” “alloy,” and “alluvium” are all science words that do not make sense in context.

Example Question #12 : Increasing The Contextual Relevance Of A Single Word

1 All in all, aviation will likely continue to fascinate people for centuries to come. 2 Long before the famous Wright brothers humans were attempting to fly. 3 The ancient Greek myth of Icarus and Daedalus shows the tantalizing allusion of flight. 4 With large kites’ in China may have been the first successful instance of human flight several thousand years ago. 5 Hundreds of years later and despite many hazings; the Montgolfier brothers and other pioneering aviators began experimenting with manned hot-air balloon flights. 6 Therefore, technology has advanced to the point of supersonic and hypersonic flight, but people are still trying to break new barriers and invent new methods of flight.

In Sentence 5, what word should replace “hazings”?

Possible Answers:

hazards

haphazards

hazes

hazings (no replacement)

hazans

Correct answer:

hazards

Explanation:

Based on the context, it doesn’t make much sense that the Montgolfier brothers would be experiencing “hazing,” or unpleasant initiation rites. “Hazards,” or dangers, is a much more logical choice. A “hazan” is a Jewish official, a “haze” is a smoke or mist that obscures vision, and “haphazard” means chance (“haphazards” isn’t a word).

Example Question #3185 : Sat Writing

1 Visitors to Pennsylvania, Indiana, Ohio, or other United States are often astounded when they encounter an Amish person. 2 To someone who is not familiar with this religious community, the lifestyle seems to harp back to a bygone era. 3 In particular the Amish are known for their plain garments, their eschewal of modern technology, their use of horses and buggies, and their exquisite handicrafts, including: wooden furniture, intricate quilts, and fruit pies. 4 Contact with the outside world is limited, and communities are often as insolent now as when they emigrated from Switzerland in the 1700s.

5 The people are governed strictly in their auspicious behavior, dress, and lifestyle by a set of rules known as Ordnung, and most speak both Pennsylvania Dutch and English. 6 Their religious beliefs are most closely related to Mennonites, and they observe many common Christian practices: baptism, marriage, and Sunday church services, for example. 7 Whereas, the Amish also practice rumspringa, a period of adolescent exploration, as well as excommunication and shunning to exclude those who do not conform to the community’s beliefs and practices. 8 What does life look like inside an Amish community? 9 Wherewithal, there seem to be both positive and negative aspects to this emphasis on family ties, manual labor, and religious belief.

In Sentence 2, what word should replace “harp”?

Possible Answers:

harm

harangue

hark

harass

harp (no change)

Correct answer:

hark

Explanation:

This is a particular English phase: we can hark back to an earlier time. The only verb that ever works in this construction is “hark.”

Example Question #3186 : Sat Writing

1 Visitors to Pennsylvania, Indiana, Ohio, or other United States are often astounded when they encounter an Amish person. 2 To someone who is not familiar with this religious community, the lifestyle seems to harp back to a bygone era. 3 In particular the Amish are known for their plain garments, their eschewal of modern technology, their use of horses and buggies, and their exquisite handicrafts, including: wooden furniture, intricate quilts, and fruit pies. 4 Contact with the outside world is limited, and communities are often as insolent now as when they emigrated from Switzerland in the 1700s.

5 The people are governed strictly in their auspicious behavior, dress, and lifestyle by a set of rules known as Ordnung, and most speak both Pennsylvania Dutch and English. 6 Their religious beliefs are most closely related to Mennonites, and they observe many common Christian practices: baptism, marriage, and Sunday church services, for example. 7 Whereas, the Amish also practice rumspringa, a period of adolescent exploration, as well as excommunication and shunning to exclude those who do not conform to the community’s beliefs and practices. 8 What does life look like inside an Amish community? 9 Wherewithal, there seem to be both positive and negative aspects to this emphasis on family ties, manual labor, and religious belief.

What word should replace eschewal?

Possible Answers:

escarpment

eschewal (no replacement)

eschatology

escapade

escharotic 

Correct answer:

eschewal (no replacement)

Explanation:

Eschewal, or shunning, is the correct word in this context.

Example Question #13 : Increasing The Contextual Relevance Of A Single Word

1 Dehydration is a potentially serious medical condition that arrives when a patients’ metabolic processes are disrupted by a lack of water in the body. 2 What can cause dehydration? 3 Dehydration can be caused by overexertion, sickness (vomiting or diarrhea), or sun exposure; among other factors. 4 Treatments for dehydration include: drinking small quantities of clear fluid and intravenous hydration. 5 Symptoms of dehydration vary by the severance of water loss, but the most common signs are increased thirst, a swollen tongue, dizziness, weakness, and fainting. 6 If treatment is not sanctioned quickly dehydration can result in delirium, seizures, and even death. 7 Dehydration is most often a problem in the developing world, where insect- and water-borne disease and a lack of accessible medical care causing many preventable infant fatalities.

In Sentence 5, what word should replace “severance”?

Possible Answers:

severance (no change)

severity

severally

savagery

savant

Correct answer:

severity

Explanation:

We can infer from context that dehydration symptoms vary by the seriousness of the water loss, so “severity,” which is a synonym for seriousness, would be the best choice.

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