SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

The scapula are not actual connected to the rib cage through any bones or joints.

Possible Answers:

or joints

actually

through any

are

No error

Correct answer:

actually

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “actual” is used to describe the verb “connected.” The adverb should be used instead. The corrected sentence reads: The scapula are not actually connected to the rib cage through any bones or joints.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

She will arrive lately than expected due to travel issues.

Possible Answers:

later expectedly

expectedly lately.

lately than expected.

lately expectedly.

later than expected.

Correct answer:

later than expected.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence uses an adverb "lately," where an adjective should be used. The only answer choice that properly uses an adjective is "later than expected," which is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #421 : Identifying Sentence Errors

In the following question, please choose the best sentence improvement.

The parents looked at their college graduate so proud that they seemed to glow with happiness.

Possible Answers:

so very proud

so proudly

so proud

so prideful

so much pride

Correct answer:

so proudly

Explanation:

The word proud needs to be an adverb because it is modifying looked.

Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

 

While the trick may look effortlessly, the actual execution of a perfect double back handspring is quite tricky to achieve successfully.

 

Possible Answers:

may

No error

execution of

effortlessly

quite tricky

Correct answer:

effortlessly

Explanation:

This sentence uses an adverb (effortlessly) to describe a noun (trick). An adjective would be more appropriate. The corrected sentence reads: While the trick may look effortless, the actual execution of a perfect double back handspring is quite tricky to achieve successfully.

 

Example Question #421 : Identifying Sentence Errors

The woman convinced the rest of humanity that the aliens should be allowed to stay, and they settled peaceful in the Great Barrier Reef.

Possible Answers:

peaceful

should be allowed

convinced the rest

they

No error

Correct answer:

peaceful

Explanation:

This sentence uses the adjective “peaceful” to describe a verb. The correct sentence uses an adverb: The woman convinced the rest of humanity that the aliens should be allowed to stay, and they settled peacefully in the Great Barrier Reef.

Example Question #12 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As soon as (A) he woke up, he sprinted (B) quick downstairs to open his gifts (C) that were (D) under the tree. (E) No error

Possible Answers:

D

B

A

C

E

Correct answer:

B

Explanation:

Since "quick" is modifying the verb "ran," it needs to be an adverb. "Quick" is an adjective, but "quickly" is an adverb. So, "quick" must be changed to "quickly."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Having finished their homework, the students quick decided to escape to the TV for entertainment. No error

Possible Answers:

to escape

their

No error

quick decided

Having

Correct answer:

quick decided

Explanation:

Here, "quick decided" contains the sentence's error. "Quick" is an adjective, but it is being used to describe a verb, "decided," so it needs to be in its adverbial form, "quickly."  

Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Randy grabbed the ball with his hand, moving intense and with a focused look in his steely blue eyes. No error

Possible Answers:

grabbed 

focused

No error

intense

steely blue

Correct answer:

intense

Explanation:

The underlined word "intense" modifies the verb, "grabbed." Therefore, "intense" should be an adverb, not an adjective. "Intense" is an adjective; the appropriate adverb would be "intensely."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The narrator described how as a child, he loved to let his body drift down the river, floating serene and happily in the sparkling water. No error

Possible Answers:

happily

serene

described

as a child 

No error

Correct answer:

serene

Explanation:

The word "serene" is modifying the verb "floating." Therefore, "serenely," an adverb, should be used; "serene" is an adjective, and is improperly used in this sentence. 

Example Question #13 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It is often hard to keep up with my friend because she is in much better shape than I am and also walks very quickNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

she is

than 

keep up

quick

Correct answer:

quick

Explanation:

Adverbs modify verbs, while adjectives modify nouns. Given that “walks” is a verb, it should be modified by an adverb. “Quick,” however is an adjective, so the adverb "quickly" should be used instead.

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