SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #431 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As the online presence of businesses has expanded at a rapidly pace, so too have the outlets for cyber shopping. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

for

online

rapidly

too

Correct answer:

rapidly

Explanation:

The underlined word, "rapidly," is modifying "pace," which is a noun. Therefore, the underlined word should be the adjective, "rapid," as opposed to the adverb, "rapidly."

Example Question #432 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The artist painted slowly and deliberate, trying to capture every detail that she could with her paintbrush. No error

Possible Answers:

with

deliberate

every 

painted

No error

Correct answer:

deliberate

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “deliberate” modifies the verb “painted.” Given that only adverbs can modify verbs, "deliberate" should be changed to “deliberately,” which is an adverb.

Example Question #433 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The horse ran beautifully and fierce towards the ranch, anxious to see its new foals, which were only a few weeks old. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

ran

which 

its

fierce

Correct answer:

fierce

Explanation:

 In this sentence, the adjective “fierce” modifies the verb “ran.” Given that adverbs can only modify verbs, the proper word would instead be “fiercely,” which is an adverb. 

Example Question #21 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The bird flew cautious over the fence, which the owners had laced with barbed wire. No error

 

Possible Answers:

cautious

No error

which 

had 

barbed

Correct answer:

cautious

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “cautious” modifies the verb “flew.” Given that only adverbs can modify verbs, the proper word to use would instead be “cautiously,” which is an adverb. 

Example Question #22 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The nurse adjusted the bandages softly and gentle, as she knew the wound beneath them was very tender. No error

Possible Answers:

beneath

No error

knew 

adjusted

gentle

Correct answer:

gentle

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “gentle” modifies the verb “adjusted.” Given that adverbs can only modify verbs, the proper word would instead be “gently,” which is an adverb.

Example Question #23 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Many people find the appearance of the potoo, a small brown bird, to be extremely amusing due to the large of its round, yellow eyes. No error

Possible Answers:

round, yellow eyes

large

the potoo, a small brown bird,

to be extremely amusing

No error

Correct answer:

large

Explanation:

You can spot this sentence's error by realizing that the adjective "large" needs to be a noun because it is preceded by the definite article "the," which refers to nouns, not adjectives. Changing "large" to "largeness" would correct the sentence's error.

Example Question #24 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

"I'm sorry that I'm running late for dinner," I said to my mother on the phone, "but I'll be home real soon." No error

Possible Answers:

that

said

No error

real

running

Correct answer:

real

Explanation:

The word "real" here is meant to modify the adjective "soon," which means that an adverb is needed. The adverb form of the word "real" is "really," so the sentence should say, "I'm sorry that I'm running late for dinner," I said to my mother on the phone, "but I'll be home really soon." People might use the word "real" as an adverb during everyday conversation, but that slang form is grammatically incorrect.

Example Question #25 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Though the dog had been washed by the petsitter just yesterday, he continued to smell badly. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

smell badly

yesterday,

had been

continued to

Correct answer:

smell badly

Explanation:

This sentence's error is that it uses an adverb in the place of an adjective. "Badly," as an adverb, is referencing not the quality of the dog's odor, but its poor ability to smell.

Example Question #26 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Sarah, Emilie, and Jenn competed against one another in the four hundred meter hurdle event, and they both scored similarly. No error

Possible Answers:

one another

similarly

event, and

No error

both

Correct answer:

both

Explanation:

This sentence has three subjects: "Sarah," "Emilie," and "Jenn." Because of this, the sentence requires a form of the word "both" that is used to refer to groups of three or more. "Both" would be correct if only two of the girls were racing.  However, since all three are racing, we need to use the adverb "all" instead of "both." The corrected sentence would read "Sarah, Emilie, and Jenn competed against one another in the four hundred meter hurdle event, and they all scored similarly."

Example Question #27 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Many popular books and movies are inspired by folktales that were original passed down orally from generation to generationNo error

Possible Answers:

inspired by

that were

No error

from generation to generation

original

Correct answer:

original

Explanation:

The word "original" is an adjective and should modify a noun. Here, it modifies the verb "passed". An adverb would be correct: "Many popular books and movies are inspired by folktales that were originally passed down orally from generation to generation."

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