SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors
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Example Question #451 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
“We need some pie,” he said to Joleen gentle, hoping that the sugary treat would lift his melancholy friend’s spirits. No error
melancholy
sugary
to
need
gentle
gentle
Adverbs modify verbs (or sometimes adjectives). "Gentle" modifies "said"—he said the phrase in a gentle manner. Adverbs tend to tend in "-ly," but don't be fooled by the adjective "melancholy" here, which modifies "spirits" (a noun) and is therefore an adjective!
The sentence would be fixed by replacing "gentle" with "gently."
Example Question #452 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
When her boyfriend arrived at the airport, Cathy ran quick towards him, ready to give him a hug. No error
give him
arrived
quick
towards
No error
quick
"Quick" modifies the verb, "ran." However, "quick" is an adjective and therefore is incorrectly used, becuase adjectives aren't used to describe verbs. Adverbs are used to describe verbs, so to correct the sentence's error, "quick" should be changed to the adverb "quickly."
Example Question #1 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
People who experience less health problems are more likely to be happier and less depressed than their unhealthy counterparts. No error
who
happier
than
No error
less
less
The error in this sentence is "less" because "health problems" are countable nouns—you can count the number of health problems a person has. When referring to countable nouns, you should use "fewer" instead of "less." The beginning of this sentence, then, should read, "People who experience fewer health problems."
Example Question #1 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Even though Joe, Pat and Lisa are all neighbors, Joe lives in a house that is further from Lisa's than it is from Pat's. No error
are all
Even though
further
than
No error
further
When describing physical distance, the adjective "farther" should be used. However, when describing figurative distance, the adjective "further" should be used. Given that the distance of a house from another house is being described—that is, a physical distance—the adjective "farther" should be used, not "further."
Example Question #341 : Psat Writing Skills
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Between Portia and Franklin, the majority of observers would zealously agree that Franklin is the most intelligent. No error
the majority of
Most
agree that
Between
No error
Most
When three or more items are being compared, "most" and other superlatives should be used. However, when only two items are being compared, as is the case here, "more" should be used instead.
Example Question #342 : Psat Writing Skills
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
At first the little boy couldn't choose between the white puppy and the brown puppy, but he eventually chose the brown puppy because it was the cutest of the two. No error
and
between
cutest
No error
At first
cutest
When comparing two items, "cuter," a comparative adjective, should be used. "Cutest," a superlative adjective, should only be used when there are three or more items being compared.
Example Question #2 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
While Scott enjoys spending time with his brother and sister, he likes his brother best because they have more in common. No error
and
No error
best
more in common
with
best
Given that Scott is comparing only his brother and sister (two subjects), the superlative adjective “best” should not be used because it is only appropriate when three or more items are being compared. Here, the comparative adjective “better" should be used instead.
Example Question #41 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The oldest of the triplets is the activest one, perhaps because he intuitively knows that he is the big brother who needs to take care of everyone. No error
who
activest
because
of
No error
activest
“Activest” is not a word; “most active" should be used instead.
Example Question #42 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Among the major newspapers in Los Angeles, the more popular is The Los Angeles Times, outselling the four other large publications in the area. No error
other
more
No error
Among
outselling
more
When there are more than three items being compared, the superlative adjective "most" should be used. The comparative adjective "more" is only used to compare two items. Given that The Los Angeles Times is being compared to four other newspapers, the appropriate word to use would be "most," not "more."
Example Question #2 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
While I enjoy both swimming and running, I am best at swimming, as I naturally have more upper body strength and feel very natural in the water. No error
best
No error
in the water
more
both
best
When two items are being compared, the word "better" should be used to distinguish one from the other. "Best" is only used when three or more items are being compared.
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