SAT Writing : Correcting Adjective and Adverb Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #31 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Which of the heroes do you think is greatest, my favorite one or Sam's?

Possible Answers:

That of the heroes do you think is greatest

Which of the heroes do you think is greater

Which of the heroes does one think is greatest

Which of the heroes do you thinks is greatest

Which of the heroes do you think is greatest

Correct answer:

Which of the heroes do you think is greater

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Which of the heroes do you think is greater"

Example Question #32 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Of all the soldiers present, Gunter is the stronger by far.

Possible Answers:

Gunter is the strongest by far.

Gunter is the stronger by far.

Gunter is the strongest as far.

Gunter is the stronger as far.

Gunter is the stronger with far.

Correct answer:

Gunter is the strongest by far.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things (or an indefinite number of things), you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Gunter is the strongest by far."

"Of all" is a reliable indicator that the superlative construction will be needed.

Example Question #83 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children kinder.

Possible Answers:

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but, Francisca treats children kinder.

Ada is nicer, in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children kinder.

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children kinder.

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children more kindly.

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children more kind.

Correct answer:

Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children more kindly.

Explanation:

Adjectives describe nouns, and adverbs describe verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs. Always ensure that you are using the correct one for describing a particular word. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "Ada is nicer in general than Francisca, but Francisca treats children more kindly."

Example Question #84 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

What do you think is most difficult: tactics or strategy?

Possible Answers:

What do you think is more difficult: tactics or strategy?

What do you think is most difficult: tactics or strategy?

What do you think is a most difficult: tactics, or strategy?

What do you think is most difficult: tactics, or strategy?

What do you think is the most difficult: tactics, or strategy?

Correct answer:

What do you think is more difficult: tactics or strategy?

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "What do you think is more difficult: tactics or strategy?"

Note that while "tactics" and "strategy" are sometimes used synonymously, this is not accurate. "Tactics" refers to specific techniques used to deal with situations or techniques, while "strategy" refers to the overall plan for dealing with a situation. "Tactics" deal with minutiae, while "strategies" deal with large-scale plans and concepts.

Example Question #85 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Fried chicken is my favorite food, but it certainly isn't the healthier thing to eat.

Possible Answers:

but it certainly isn't the healthiest thing to eat.

and it certainly isn't the healthier thing to eat.

so it certainly isn't the healthier thing to eat.

because it certainly isn't the healthier thing to eat.

but it certainly isn't the healthier thing to eat.

Correct answer:

but it certainly isn't the healthiest thing to eat.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things (or an indefinite number of things), you must use the superlative construction instead. In this case, no other item is named, so we can assume that "fried chicken" is being compared to all other food options, in terms of healthiness. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "but it certainly isn't the healthiest thing to eat."

Example Question #86 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I love both Taylor Swift and Nicki Minaj, but in my heart of hearts I know that Nicki is the best artist.

Possible Answers:

which Nicki is the best artist.

that Nicki is the better artist.

that Nicki is a best artist.

that Nicki is the best Artist.

that Nicki is the best artist.

Correct answer:

that Nicki is the better artist.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "that Nicki is the better artist."

Note that the introduction of one other item directly affects the grammar of the rest of the sentence. It would be perfectly grammatically correct to say, "In my heart of hearts I know that Nicki is the best artist." But, once an introductory clause has been used that discussed Nicki in conjunction with "Taylor Swift" a comparative structure becomes necessary.

Example Question #87 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Of all the villains in Armadilloman's gallery of enemies, the Humorous Prankster is by far the more dangerous.

Possible Answers:

the Humorous Prankster is by far the dangerous.

the Humorous Prankster is by far the more dangerous.

the Humorous Prankster is by far the more dangerouser.

the Humorous Prankster is by far the dangerousest.

the Humorous Prankster is by far the most dangerous.

Correct answer:

the Humorous Prankster is by far the most dangerous.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since the group of enemies is described as a "gallery" we know that there are many, certainly more than two, enemies to which the "Humorous Prankster" is being compared. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "the Joker is by far the most dangerous."

Example Question #88 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

William is undoubtedly the strongest member of the squad, but Richard is most honorable than him.

Possible Answers:

but Richard is most honorable than him.

or Richard is more honorable than him.

but Richard is more honorable than him.

but Richard is the most honorable than him.

and Richard is most honorable than him.

Correct answer:

but Richard is more honorable than him.

Explanation:

When you are comparing one thing to only one other thing, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Superlatives distinguish one item from many others in one particular aspect. Comparatives directly compare one item to only one other item. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "but Richard is more honorable than him."

Note that since the second clause provides information that contradicts the sentiment of the first clause "but" rather than "or" is the correct conjunction.

Example Question #2031 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Chicago is a most beautiful city, but New York has a lot going for it.

Possible Answers:

Chicago is a more beautiful city,

Chicago is a most beautiful city;

Chicago is a most beautiful city,

Chicago is the most beautiful city,

Chicago is a more beautiful city;

Correct answer:

Chicago is a more beautiful city,

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Chicago is a more beautiful city,"

Since the two clauses are connected into a compound sentence with a comma and a coordinating conjunction, the comparison between Chicago and New York is grammatically necessary. Note that it is incorrect to follow a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction.

Example Question #2032 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

Possible Answers:

I hate dealing with Barry; because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, he is more difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, he is most difficult to deal with than John.

Correct answer:

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In this instance only "Barry" and "John" were mentioned as items of comparison, so the comparative, rather than the superlative construction is required. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John."

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