SAT Writing : Correcting Adjective and Adverb Errors

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Example Question #41 : Correcting Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Paula's elocution is very excellently: she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Possible Answers:

Paula's elocution is very excellent, she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Paula's elocution is very excellently: she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Paula's elocution is very excellent she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Paula's elocution is very excellently; she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Paula's elocution is very excellent: she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Correct answer:

Paula's elocution is very excellent: she has really become a phenomenal speaker.

Explanation:

While this sentence describes the way in which "Paula" speaks, her "elocution" is actually acting as a noun in this sentence, and thus an adjective is required. The correct version of this sentence reads, "Paula's elocution is very excellent: she has really become a phenomenal speaker."

Example Question #42 : Correcting Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesque that I was taken aback.

Possible Answers:

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesquely: that I was taken aback.

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesque: that I was taken aback.

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesque that I was taken aback.

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesque; that I was taken aback.

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesquely that I was taken aback.

Correct answer:

Johnny was eating his cake so grotesquely that I was taken aback.

Explanation:

In this sentence the way in which "Johnny" undertook the action of "eating his cake." Since verbs describe actions, we need an adverbial form of "grotesque" not an adjectival one. The correct sentence reads, "Johnny was eating his cake so grotesquely that I was taken aback."

Example Question #41 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack, I don't feel very good afterwards.

Possible Answers:

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack I don't feel very well afterwards.

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack, I don't feel very well afterwards.

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack, I don't feel very good afterwards.

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack I don't feel very good afterwards.

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack: I don't feel very well afterwards.

Correct answer:

Whenever I eat at Pizza Shack, I don't feel very well afterwards.

Explanation:

Adjectives describe nouns, and adverbs describe verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs. In the example sentence "good" is meant to describe the verb "feel," so the adverbial, rather than the adjectival, form is required. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "Whenever I eat at Pizza Hut, I don't feel very well afterwards."

Note also that a comma correctly connects the dependent introductory clause "whenever I eat at Pizza Shack" to the main clause.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Michael and Larry are both excellent basketball players, but Michael is best.

Possible Answers:

Michael and Larry are both excellent basketball players, but Michael is best.

Michael and Larry are both excellent basketball players, but Michael is better.

Michael and Larry are both excellent basketball players, and yet Michael is best.

Michael is the better basketball player, and yet both he and Larry are excellent at it.

Michael and Larry are both excellent—but Michael is better—basketball players.

Correct answer:

Michael and Larry are both excellent basketball players, but Michael is better.

Explanation:

Whenever you are comparing only two things, use the comparative form (usually words ending in "-er"—better, smarter, faster, and so forth). If there are three or more items, use the superlative form (usually ending in "-est"—best, smartest, fastest . . .) to designate the best one.

Example Question #4 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

If you compared my sister and me, you’d see that she was the best dancer.

Possible Answers:

If you compared my sister and I, you’d see that she was the better dancer.

If you compared my sister and me, you’d see that she was the best dancer.

If you compared my sister and I, you’d see that she was the best dancer.

If you compared my sister and me, you’d see that she was the better dancer.

If you compared my sister and I, you were to see that she was the best dancer.

Correct answer:

If you compared my sister and me, you’d see that she was the better dancer.

Explanation:

We use comparative adjectives when comparing two people or things (bigger, worse); we use superlative adjectives when comparing one person or thing with three or more people or things (the biggest, the worse).

Example Question #5 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

 

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and me, you will see that I am the shorter of the group.

Possible Answers:

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and me, you will see that I am the shorter of the group.

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and me, you would see that I am the shorter of the group. 

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and I, you will see that I am the shorter of the group. 

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and me, you will see that I am the shortest of the group. 

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and I, you will see that I am the shortest of the group. 

Correct answer:

If you look at Jamie, Jamal, and me, you will see that I am the shortest of the group. 

Explanation:

We use comparative adjectives when comparing two people or things (bigger, worse, etc.); we use superlative adjectives when comparing one person or thing with three or more people or things (the biggest, the worst, etc.). Thus, here we use the superlative adjective “the shortest.” In the first clause, we use “me” instead of “I” because “me” is an object pronoun, and “me” is the indirect object of the verb “look.”.

Example Question #6 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

 

He was a strongest boy that grew up into the biggest teenager in his town.

Possible Answers:

a strongly boy

a stronger boy

the strongly boy

the strongest boy

a strongest boy

Correct answer:

the strongest boy

Explanation:

The use of the form "strongest" is a superlative that indicates the peak of an adjective; therefore, there can be only one "strongest boy," and the phrase needs a definite article, "the," instead of the indefinite article, "a."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

I have a lot of friends who did well on those exams, but I think that I will do more well than them.

Possible Answers:

better

gooder

best

more good

more well

Correct answer:

better

Explanation:

"More well" is not a phrase—the comparative form of "well" is not "more well," but "better." Since we are only comparing two groups (the speaker versus the speaker's friends), "better" is the most appropriate here.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Between my younger sister, my older sister, and me, my older sister walks most fast.

Possible Answers:

faster

most fast

most quickly

more quick

more quickly

Correct answer:

most quickly

Explanation:

In the sentence as it is written, "fast," an adjective, is being used to modify "walks." This is incorrect; only adverbs can modify verbs. So, we need to pick out an answer choice which uses the adverbial form of "fast," which is "quickly." This lets us eliminate the answer choice "most fast." "Faster" cannot be correct because more than two subjects are being compared in the sentence, and "faster" is a comparative adjective that is used to compare two subjects. "More quick," "more fast," and "more quickly" can each be eliminated for this same reason, in addition to the fact that "more quick" isn't grammatically correct at all—one would say "quicker," not "more quick." This leaves us with the correct answer, "most quickly."

Example Question #9 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The chefs of New York City cannot compare with the home-cooked meals of my mother.

Possible Answers:

The chefs of New York City cannot hardly compare with the home-cooked meals of my mother.

The chefs of New York City were not comparing with the home-cooked meals of my mother.

The chefs of New York City cannot compare with my mother.

The chefs of New York City cannot compare to the home-cooked meals of my mother.

(No changes to original.)

Correct answer:

The chefs of New York City cannot compare with my mother.

Explanation:

We must compare the chefs to my mother, not to the home-cooked meals.

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