SAT Writing : Correcting Adjective and Adverb Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #1991 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The more difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

Possible Answers:

The more difficult step in the process of all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

The more difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

The most difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

The more difficult steps in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

The more difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthier obstacle course.

Correct answer:

The most difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course.

Explanation:

The use of "more" in this sentence is odd and confusing, as "more" should be used in a direct comparison between two things. As no comparison is made in this sentence, the modifier should simply indicate a great degree of difficulty. The word "most," a superlative adjective, properly conveys such a meaning, making the correct answer, "The most difficult step in the process for all of the initiates was the lengthy obstacle course."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

During his lifetime, few people knew about the fuller extent of his condition.

Possible Answers:

about the fuller extent for his condition.

about the full extent of his condition.

around the fuller extent of his condition.

about the fuller extents of his condition.

about the fuller extent of his condition.

Correct answer:

about the full extent of his condition.

Explanation:

The use of "fuller" is incorrect in this sentence, as "fuller" implies a comparison, but is not comparing anything in the sentence. The use of the simple adjective "full" is perfectly appropriate in the sentence, making the correct answer choice "about the full extent of his condition."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Carbohydrates and proteins both have less calories per gram than fats do.

Possible Answers:

Carbohydrates and proteins both have less calories per gram than fats do.

Carbohydrates and proteins have less calories per gram than fats.    

Carbohydrates and proteins both have less calories per gram than fats were to have.

Carbohydrates and proteins both have fewer calories per gram than fats do. 

Carbohydrates and proteins both have less calories per gram than fats. 

Correct answer:

Carbohydrates and proteins both have fewer calories per gram than fats do. 

Explanation:

Calories can be counted, and so we use the word "fewer." "Less" is for quantities that cannot be counted, such as water.  

Example Question #391 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Amy drinks lesser water than Johnny, which is why Johnny refills his water bottle more often than Amy does.

Possible Answers:

least

few

fewer

fewest

less

Correct answer:

less

Explanation:

As the question compares two people, a comparative form of the adjective in question must be used, meaning that "few," the regular form of the adjective, and "least" and "fewest," which are each superlative forms, are incorrect. While "fewer" and "less" might each look like a potentially correct answer, "fewer" is used to distinguish between countable nouns, while "less" is used to distinguish between uncountable nouns, like "water." (You can tell if a noun is countable or not if you could precede it with a number, and "seven water" doesn't make sense, given how "water" is used here.) So, "less" is the correct answer.

Example Question #1991 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Why do you look at me like I am so much lesser intelligently than you are?

Possible Answers:

much less intelligent

lessly intelligently

much lessly intelligently

much lesser in intelligent

much fewer intelligent

Correct answer:

much less intelligent

Explanation:

"Intelligently" is an adverb and adverbs are not used comparatively, so we need to change "intelligently" to "intelligent," an adjective. Also, "lesser," an adjective, needs to be changed to a determiner, "less." So, "less intelligent" is the correct answer.

Example Question #23 : Comparative And Superlative Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worst musician; both were practically tone deaf.

Possible Answers:

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worst of the musicians;

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worse of the two musicians; 

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worse musician; 

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worsest musician; 

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worst musician; 

Correct answer:

The teacher was reluctant to say which of the twin brothers was the worse musician; 

Explanation:

If only two things are being compared, the comparative form ("better," "bigger," "smarter," etc.) is correct. If three or more things are being compared, the superlative form ("best," "biggest," "smartest," etc.) is correct. Because there are only the two brothers here, we use the comparative form: “worse” and not “worst.” In addition, because “worse musician” is more concise than “worse of the two musicians,” it is the better answer.

Example Question #21 : Comparative And Superlative Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I’m not sure whose garden is of the prettiest: Leah’s, David’s, or Juanita’s.

Possible Answers:

I’m not sure whose garden is the most prettiest: 

I’m not sure whose garden is the most pretty: 

I’m not sure whose garden is prettier: 

I’m not sure whose garden is of the prettiest: 

I’m not sure whose garden is prettiest: 

Correct answer:

I’m not sure whose garden is prettiest: 

Explanation:

If only two things are being compared, the comparative form ("better," "bigger," "smarter," etc.) is correct. If three or more things are being compared, the superlative form ("best," "biggest," "smartest," etc.) is correct. Because there are three gardens here, we use the concise superlative form: “prettiest” and not “prettier,” “most pretty,” or “most prettiest.”

Example Question #1991 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I've heard that all vitamins are good for you, but of all the different kinds, are there any that are better?

Possible Answers:

is better

is the most

is the better

are best

are better

Correct answer:

are best

Explanation:

When comparing more than two items, you should use superlative adjectives. So, in this case, you should use the word "best."

Example Question #401 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Volleyball is more fun than basketball.

Possible Answers:

most fun than

more fun than

funner than

more fun then

funner then

Correct answer:

more fun than

Explanation:

Here, because you are making a direct comparison between two things, and the adjective in question is "fun," "more fun" is the correct construction. Additionally, you want to use "than," which indicates comparison, rather than "then," which indicates time or causation. 

Example Question #402 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

All the conspirators were envious, but he was the more avaricious of the group.

Possible Answers:

avariciousest

more avaricious than

avariciouser

most avaricious

more avaricious

Correct answer:

most avaricious

Explanation:

Here, you have a comparison between an individual and a group of people the size of which is unknown. Because you are not comparing two things directly, this is a superlative comparison. As such, the correct construction is "most avaricious."

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