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Example Question #151 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The audience watched breathless as the contortionist brought her leg behind her back and in front of her nose. No error.
brought
in front of her nose
breathless
her
No error.
breathless
This sentence uses the adjective “breathless” to modify the verb “watched”. An adjective cannot be used to modify a verb, but an adverb can, so an adverb would be more appropriate. The corrected sentence reads, "The audience watched breathlessly as the contortionist brought her leg behind her back and in front of her nose."
Example Question #322 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The mademoiselle’s promising career in opera was tragic cut short by a falling piano. No error.
falling
tragic
No error.
promising career in opera
cut short by
tragic
In this sentence, the adjective “tragic” is misused to modify a verb, “cut short.” An adverb would be correct here. The corrected sentence reads, "The mademoiselle’s promising career in opera was tragically cut short by a falling piano."
Example Question #152 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Francisca was nervous that the sudden arrival of fifty international students would be overly chaotic, but fortunately everything went smooth. No error
arrival of
overly chaotic
was nervous that
went smooth
No error
went smooth
In this sentence, the adjective “smooth” is used to modify the verb “went.” An adverb would be correct in this situation. The corrected sentence reads, "Francisca was nervous that the sudden arrival of fifty international students would be overly chaotic, but fortunately everything went smoothly."
Example Question #153 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
That track star is admired for his ability to run so swift, which is why many adoring fans have given him a nickname relating to his speed. No error
No error
is admired
have given him
swift
which
swift
Adverbs often end in "–ly" (e.g. "quickly," "slyly," and "happily"). Without this "–ly" ending, swift is only an adjective (e.g. "He is a swift runner."). In this case, “swift” acts as an adverb (describing how the track star runs), so it should be written “swiftly.”
Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors
While the trick may look effortlessly, the actual execution of a perfect double back handspring is quite tricky to achieve successfully.
may
No error
execution of
effortlessly
quite tricky
effortlessly
This sentence uses an adverb (effortlessly) to describe a noun (trick). An adjective would be more appropriate. The corrected sentence reads: While the trick may look effortless, the actual execution of a perfect double back handspring is quite tricky to achieve successfully.
Example Question #154 : Identifying Word Usage Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Although the eighth grade math bowl team did excellently in practice, the members performed terrible in the actual tournament. No error
excellently
No error
Although
terrible
the members
terrible
This sentence uses the adjective "terrible" to modify the verb "performed." An adverb is more appropriate. The corrected sentence reads, "Although the eighth grade math bowl team did excellently in practice, the members performed terribly in the actual tournament."
Example Question #325 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Of the sixteen jellybean varieties available, the turquoise tasted more exquisite. No error.
Of the sixteen
tasted
available, the
No error.
more
more
This sentence uses a comparative (“more”) to compare more than two things—sixteen, in fact. For a comparison involving more than two things, a superlative (“most”) is used. The corrected sentence reads, "Of the sixteen jellybean varieties available, the turquoise tasted most exquisite."
Example Question #326 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Of her four classes that semester, Introduction to Biology was the more challenging. No error.
No error.
that
semester, Introduction
her
more challenging
more challenging
This sentence uses the comparative adjective “more” to compare four things. The superlative “most” would be correct here, as the superlative form of adjectives is used when three or more things are being compared. The corrected sentence reads, "Of her four classes that semester, Introduction to Biology was the most challenging."
Example Question #1 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
People who experience less health problems are more likely to be happier and less depressed than their unhealthy counterparts. No error
happier
No error
who
less
than
less
The error in this sentence is "less" because "health problems" are countable nouns—you can count the number of health problems a person has. When referring to countable nouns, you should use "fewer" instead of "less." The beginning of this sentence, then, should read, "People who experience fewer health problems."
Example Question #2 : Identifying Comparative And Superlative Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Even though Joe, Pat and Lisa are all neighbors, Joe lives in a house that is further from Lisa's than it is from Pat's. No error
further
No error
Even though
than
are all
further
When describing physical distance, the adjective "farther" should be used. However, when describing figurative distance, the adjective "further" should be used. Given that the distance of a house from another house is being described—that is, a physical distance—the adjective "farther" should be used, not "further."