PSAT Writing : Identifying Word Usage Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #13 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Frida Kahlo and her husband Diego Rivera were both well-known and talented Mexican painterNo error

Possible Answers:

talented

and her

No error

painter

were both

Correct answer:

painter

Explanation:

In this sentence, there are two individuals, both painters, so the object should reflect that number. The corrected sentence reads, "Frida Kahlo and her husband Diego Rivera were both well-known and talented Mexican painters."

Example Question #14 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Recognizing that the inhabitants of Earth suffered from many wars, disasters, and diseases, the aliens hoped to be welcomed as a saviorNo error

Possible Answers:

as a savior

suffer from

Recognizing

No error

wars, disasters, and diseases

Correct answer:

as a savior

Explanation:

This sentence lacks agreement between nouns. Since there are many aliens, “savior” should be plural. The corrected sentence reads, "Recognizing that the inhabitants of Earth suffered from many wars, disasters, and diseases, the aliens hoped to be welcomed as saviors."

Example Question #111 : Identifying Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

At the end of the day, Jeremy and Joe said goodbye to each other, got into their car, and drove their separate ways. No error

Possible Answers:

said goodbye

their car

separate

At the end of the day

No error

Correct answer:

their car

Explanation:

It is clear from the content of this sentence that Jeremy and Joe each have their own car, but the sentence has “car” as singular. This should be plural to avoid confusion. The corrected sentence reads, "At the end of the day, Jeremy and Joe said goodbye to each other, got into their cars, and drove their separate ways."

Example Question #20 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Reading, writing, and arithmetic are essential skill to learn in elementary school. No error

Possible Answers:

are

and

in elementary school

No error

skill

Correct answer:

skill

Explanation:

There is a discrepancy in the agreement of nouns in this sentence. "Reading, writing and arithmetic" require the plural form of "skill," "skills." Multiple subjects require a plural predicate to match their form. "Reading, writing, and arithmetic" are not being discussed as a unified group (which is an exception requiring a singular predicate), so the agreement must be plural, because several subjects are being discussed.

Example Question #641 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Hillary Clinton, a prominent American politician, is often being represented in the media as a conniving woman rather than a successful political figureNo error.

Possible Answers:

in the media

conniving

No error.

being

than a successful political figure

Correct answer:

being

Explanation:

The progressive verb “being” is not necessary in this sentence. It is more concise and to-the-point to say: "Hillary Clinton, a prominent American politician, is often represented in the media as a conniving woman rather than a successful political figure."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Verb Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The spectators looked at one another, not having much to say, as they were dumbfounded by the tricks of the New York City street magician. No error.

Possible Answers:

New York City

one another

dumbfounded

No error.

having

Correct answer:

having

Explanation:

“Having” is an incorrect use of a gerund. It creates confusion with respect to time, as both “looked” and “dumbfounded” are in the simple past tense.

Example Question #61 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Despite her best intentions, Suzy’s attempting to throw a surprise birthday party was a complete disaster. No error.

Possible Answers:

was

attempting

Despite her best intentions

No error.

surprise birthday

Correct answer:

attempting

Explanation:

It is not necessary to use the gerund “attempting” in this sentence because the noun “attempt” already exists. The corrected sentence reads, "Despite her best intentions, Suzy’s attempt to throw a surprise birthday party was a complete disaster."

Example Question #641 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Most elderly women prefer to go to bed early instead of stay up late watching television. No error.

Possible Answers:

stay up late

instead of

No error.

to go to bed

Most

Correct answer:

stay up late

Explanation:

Usually, the phrase “instead of” is followed by a gerund or verb that ends in "-ing". The corrected sentence reads, "Most elderly women prefer to go to bed early instead of staying up late watching television."

Example Question #645 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Given the chance, Frank would drop everything and dedicate his life to swim the English Channel. No error.

Possible Answers:

his life

everything and

No error.

to swim

Given the chance

Correct answer:

to swim

Explanation:

This sentence uses the verb “swim” when it needs a gerund, “swimming.” A gerund is a verb that is acting as a noun. The corrected sentence reads, "Given the chance, Frank would drop everything and dedicate his life to swimming the English Channel."

Example Question #646 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

All of the children were sorely disappointed that the water slide being closed for repairsNo error.

Possible Answers:

No error.

sorely

being closed

for repairs

All of the children

Correct answer:

being closed

Explanation:

This sentence has the gerund "being" in it, but the past tense "was" is cleaner and more direct. The corrected sentence reads, "All of the children were sorely disappointed that the water slide was closed for repairs."

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