PSAT Writing : Correcting Noun-Noun Agreement Errors
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Example Question #311 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Dogs, unlike many types of birds, usually do not stay with their mate for life.
do not stay with there mates for life
do not stay with their mates for life
do not stay with there mate for life
do not stay with they’re mates for life
do not stay with their mate for life
do not stay with their mates for life
Since we are talking about "dogs" (plural), they must have "mates" (plural). Also, “their” is the possessive form of “they.” “There” denotes a place, and “they’re” is the contraction of “they are.”
Example Question #2 : Correcting Noun Noun Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I hate wearing my shoes when they are wet; it squeaks and squishes when I walk.
they squeak and squish when I walk.
it squeak and squish when I walk.
they squeaks and squishes when I walk.
it squeaks and squishes when I walk.
it squeaky and squishy when I walk.
they squeak and squish when I walk.
Because the pronoun in the next sentence is describing the "shoes," plural, the pronoun must be the plural "they." The verbs must also then follow the plural form "squeak and squish," making the correct answer "they squeak and squish when I walk." Note that a semicolon is correctly used to separate the two independent clauses making up this sentence, and also note that since the two clauses are combined into one sentence, the pronouns must remain consistent within that sentence, even though each clause is independent.
Example Question #312 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
When I moved out of town, all of my classmates gave me a suggestion for how to make friends in my new school.
give me a suggestion for how to make friends
give me suggestions for how to make friends
gave me a suggestion for how to make friends
giving me suggestions for how to make friends
gave me suggestions for how to make friends
gave me suggestions for how to make friends
The plural "classmates" were suggesting, so he had to receive plural "suggestions." Also, since he "moved" (past tense) we have to say that the classmates "gave" (past tense) the suggestions. This means the correct answer is "gave me suggestions for how to make friends."
Example Question #313 : Correcting Word Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
To Timmy, the best part of science fiction movies are the special effects.
To Timmy, the best parts of science fiction movies is the special effects.
To Timmy, the best part of science fiction movies are the special effects.
To Timmy, the best parts of science fiction movie is the special effects.
To Timmy, the best part of science fiction movies is the special effects.
The best part of science fiction movies, the special effects are, to Timmy.
To Timmy, the best part of science fiction movies is the special effects.
"To Timmy, the best part of science fiction movies is the special effects."
This is the only correct answer because the subject ("part") agrees in number with the verb ("is"). Do not be misled by the plural "movies"; it is not the subject.
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