ACT English : Writing and Revising Effectively

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Example Question #1 : Word Choice, Style, And Tone

Adapted from The Apology by Plato (trans. Jowett)

This inquisition has led to my having many enemies of the worst and most dangerous kind and has given occasion also to many false statements against me. And I am called wise, for my hearers always imagine that I myself possess the wisdom which I find lacking in others. However, O men of Athens, the truth is that god only is wise. By his answer he intends to show that the wisdom of men is worth little or nothing. He is not speaking of Socrates, he is only using my name by way of illustration. It is as though he said, “He, O men, is the wisest, who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is in truth worth nothing.” And so, I go about the world, obedient to the god, searching and making enquiry into the wisdom of any one, whether citizen or stranger, who appears to be wise. If he is not wise, then I show him that he is not wise. My occupation quite absorbs me, and I have no time to give either to any public matter of interest or to any concern of my own. Indeed I am in utter poverty by reason of my devotion to the god.

There is another thing. Young men of the richer classes, who have not much to do, come about me of their own accord. They like to hear my examinations of others and often imitate me, and then proceed to examine others. They quickly discover that there is plenty of people, who think that they know something but really know little or nothing. Then, those who are examined by them instead of being angry with themselves become angry with me. 

“This confounded Socrates,” they say, “this villainous misleader of youth!” And then, if somebody asks them, “What evil does he practice or teach?” they do not know and cannot tell. However, in order that they may not appear to be at a loss, they repeat the ready-made charges which are used against all philosophers: the teaching things up in the clouds and under the earth, having no gods, and making wrong things appear to be right. 

They do not like to confess that their pretence of knowledge has been detected (which is the truth). And as they are numerous and ambitious and energetic, they have filled your ears with they’re loud and inveterate calumnies.

And this, O men of Athens, is the truth and the whole truth. I have concealed nothing; I have dissembled nothing. And yet, I know that my plainness of speech makes them hate me. Still, what is their hatred but a proof that I am speaking the truth? From this have arisen the crowds’ prejudice against me. This is the reason of it, as you will find out either in this or in any future enquiry.

Which of the following expresses a meaning equivalent to the underlined selection, "He, O men, is the wisest, who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is in truth worth nothing"?

Possible Answers:

Socrates was the wisest, for he knew that his wisdom was in truth worth nothing.

Socrates is the model for all wise men, if indeed there are any such people.

The wisest person is the man who knows that he is not wise. This was the case for Socrates.

The wisest men are like Socrates, who alone knew the limits of his wisdom.

Correct answer:

The wisest person is the man who knows that he is not wise. This was the case for Socrates.

Explanation:

The original sentence communicates two points:

(1) The wisest person knows that his wisdom is worth nothing.

(2) Socrates too knew that his wisdom was worth nothing.

The correct answer contains both of these, even though it uses two sentences to do so.

Example Question #31 : Revising Content

In today's society, (1) they have a popular TV series that (2) follows the life of 4-5 (3) young teenage girls who are trying to raise their child while being a teenager at the same time (4). The television series shows hardships, but they (5) focus more on the relationships of these girls rather than how much their baby’s diaper is changed or how often the baby spits up all over them. They always have a happy ending, giving teen girls these days hope that it (6) will do the same for them. The show focuses of (7) a different group of teen moms each season, but all being held back by having a child at a young age. Some are alone, some have significant others, and some even decided to give (8) their baby up for adoption, but not one of their lives are perfect nor easy (9). Some teenagers enjoy watching the show just to watch the babies grow, but others watch it because they think it’s popular, they think it will make them popular as well (10). The show is based upon these girl’s (11) lives and it doesn’t always seem to have to do with their children it has to do with them being teenagers (12).

Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake preceding the question number.  If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

Now in days

In our modern society

NO CHANGE

Currently

Correct answer:

Currently

Explanation:

"Currently" is the most concise and correct way to replace the wordy phrase above.

Example Question #1 : Word Choice, Style, And Tone

In today's society, (1) they have a popular TV series that (2) follows the life of 4-5 (3) young teenage girls who are trying to raise their child while being a teenager at the same time (4). The television series shows hardships, but they (5) focus more on the relationships of these girls rather than how much their baby’s diaper is changed or how often the baby spits up all over them. They always have a happy ending, giving teen girls these days hope that it (6) will do the same for them. The show focuses of (7) a different group of teen moms each season, but all being held back by having a child at a young age. Some are alone, some have significant others, and some even decided to give (8) their baby up for adoption, but not one of their lives are perfect nor easy (9). Some teenagers enjoy watching the show just to watch the babies grow, but others watch it because they think it’s popular, they think it will make them popular as well (10). The show is based upon these girl’s (11) lives and it doesn’t always seem to have to do with their children it has to do with them being teenagers (12).

Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake preceding the question number.  If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

there was a popular TV series that

there is a popular TV series that

they show a popular TV series that

Correct answer:

there is a popular TV series that

Explanation:

Since we don't know who "they" are, the phrase "there is a popular TV series that" is the most correct choice.

Example Question #1 : Word Choice, Style, And Tone

Choose the correct version of the following sentence. 

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores, so she began by emptying the trash can, replacing it's bag and then rolled the garbage bin to the street. 

Possible Answers:

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores, so, she began by, emptying the trash can, replacing its bag, and rolling the garbage bin to the street. 

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores, so she began by emptying the trash can, replacing it's bag and then rolling the garbage bin to the street. 

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores, and she began by emptying the trash can, replacing it's bag and then rolled the garbage bin to the street. 

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores, so she began by emptying the trash can, replacing it's bag and, then she rolled the garbage bin to the street. 

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores and she began by emptying the trash can, replacing its bag and rolling the garbage bin to the street. 

Correct answer:

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores and she began by emptying the trash can, replacing its bag and rolling the garbage bin to the street. 

Explanation:

Claudia's mother told her to begin her chores and she began by emptying the trash can, replacing its bag and rolling the garbage bin to the street. 

This is the correct version of the sentence because it (1) removes "so" a poor stylistic choice, (2) removes the apostrophe in "its" to make it possessive, and (3) creates parallel structure by changing "rolled" to "rolling."

Example Question #1 : Word Choice, Style, And Tone

Adapted from "The Philosophy of Composition" by Edgar Allan Poe (1846)

Charles Dickens in a note now lying before me (1) alluding to an examination I once made of the mechanism of [the novel] Barnaby Rudge (2), says (3) "By the way, are you aware that Godwin wrote his 'Caleb Williams' backwards? He first involved his hero in a web of difficulties, forming the second volume, and then, for the first, cast about him for some mode of accounting for what had been done" (4)

I cannot think this the exacting (5) mode of procedure on the part of Godwin — and indeed what he himself acknowledges, is not altogether in accordance with Mr. Dickens idea (6) — but the author of “Caleb Williams” was too good an artist not to perceive the advantage derivative (7) from at least a somewhat similar process. Nothing is more clear than that every plot, worth the name, must be elaborated to its dénouement before any thing be attempted with the pen. It is only with the dénouement constantly in view that we can give a plot its indispensable (8) air of consequence, or causation, by making the incidents (9) and especially the tone at all points, tend to the development of the intention.

There is a radical error I think (10) in the usual mode of constructing a story. Either history affords a thesis — or one is suggested by an incident of the day — or, at best, the author sets himself to work in the combination of striking events to form merely the basis of his narrative — designing, generally, to fill in with description, dialogue, or autorial (11) comment, whatever crevices of fact, or action, may from page to page (12) render themselves apparent.

Choose from the following four options the answer that best corrects the underlined mistake, using contemporary usage, preceding the question number. If there is no mistake or the original text is the best option, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

"Barnaby Rudge"

Barnaby Rudge

'Barnaby Rudge'

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

Barnaby Rudge

Explanation:

While Poe and Dickens both might have used single or double quotation marks to give the name of a novel, the standard in contemporary times is to italicize a novel's title.

Example Question #2 : Word Choice, Style, And Tone

Adapted from “The Nose Tree” in German Fairy Tales and Popular Stories by Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm (trans. Taylor, ed. 1864)

Then the king made known to all his kingdom, that whomever would heal her of this dreadful disease should be richly rewarded. Many tried, but the princess got no relief. Now the old soldier dressed himself up very sprucely as a doctor, and said he could cure her. Therefore, he chopped up some of the apple, and, to punish her a little more, gave her a dose, saying he would call to-morrow and see her again. The morrow came, and, of course, instead of being better, the nose had been growing on all night as before; and the poor princess was in a dreadful fright. So the doctor then chopped up a very little of the pear and gave it to her. He said that he was sure that it would help, and he would call again the next day. Next day came, and the nose was to be sure a little smaller. However, it was bigger than when the doctor first began to meddle with it.

Then he thought to him, "I must frighten this cunning princess a little more before I am able to get what I want from her." Therefore, he gave her another dose of the apple and said he would call on the morrow. The morrow came, and the nose was ten times bad as before.

"My good lady," said the doctor, "Something works against my medicine and is to strong for it. However, I know by the force of my art that it is this, you have stolen goods about you. I am certain of it. If you do not give them back, I can do nothing for you."

The princess denied very stoutly that she had anything of the kind.

"Very well," said the doctor, "you may do as you please, but I am sure I am correct. You will die if you do not own it." Then he went to the king, and told him how the matter stood.

"Daughter," said he, "send back the cloak, the purse, and the horn, that you stole from the right owners."

Then she ordered her maid to fetch all three and gave them to the doctor, and begged him to give them back to the soldiers. The moment he had them safe, he gave her a whole pear to eat, and the nose came right. And as for the doctor, he put on the cloak, wished the king and all his court a good day and was soon with his two brothers. They lived from that time happily at home in their palace, except when they took an airing to see the world in their coach with their three dapple-grey horses.

Which of the following is the best replacement for the underlined word "own"?

Possible Answers:

acknowledge possession of

None of the other answers

acknowledge responsibility for

possess

Correct answer:

acknowledge responsibility for

Explanation:

This passage is slightly old-fashioned in its tone; therefore, we should not be surprised that a word like "own" might be used in an older, less standard manner (as it is here). The word own can mean "acknowledge ownership of / possession of / [or even] responsibility for." Think of the contemporary expression "own up to your crime." It means "accept responsibility for your crime." Since the author uses the word "it," we know that he is not talking about the possessions. (He spoke of them in the plural in the preceding paragraphs.)  Instead, he wants the princess to take responsibility for the general state of affairs. That is, he wants her to "own up" to the fact that she has stolen goods (not to "own" the goods themselves).

Example Question #91 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Adapted from The Sorrows of Young Werther by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (1774; trans. Boylan 1854)

That the life of man is but a dream, many a man has surmised heretofore. I, too, am everywhere pursued by this feeling. When I consider the narrow limits within which our active and inquiring faculties are confined, I am silent. Likewise, when I see how all our energies are wasted in providing for mere necessities, which again has no further end than to prolong a wretched existence, I find myself to be silenced. Indeed, discovering that all our satisfaction concerning certain subjects of investigation ends in nothing better than a passive resignation, while we amuse ourselves painting our prison-walls with bright figures and brilliant landscapes—when I consider all this Wilhelm—I am silent. I examine my own being, and find there a world, but a world rather of imagination and dim desires, than of distinctness and living power. Then, everything swims before my senses, and I smile and dream while pursuing my way through the world.

All learned professors and doctors are agreed that children do not comprehend the cause of their desires; however, nobody is willing to acknowledge that the grown-ups should wander about this earth like children, without knowing whence they come or whither they go, influenced as little by fixed motives but, instead, guided like them by biscuits, sugar-plums, and the rod.

I know what you will say in reply. Indeed, I am ready to admit that they are happiest, who, like children, amuse themselves with their playthings, dress and undress their dolls.  They are happiest, who attentively watch the cupboard, where mamma has locked up her sweet things, and, when at last they get a delicious morsel, eat it greedily, and exclaim, "More!" These are certainly happy beings; but others also are objects of envy, who dignify their paltry employments (and sometimes even their passions) with pompous titles, representing them to mankind as gigantic achievements performed for their welfare and glory. However, the man who humbly acknowledges the vanity of all this, who observes with what pleasure the thriving citizen converts his little garden into a paradise, and how patiently even the poor man pursues his weary way under his burden, and how all wish equally to behold the light of the sun a little longer—yes, such a man is at peace, and creates his own world within himself. Indeed, he is also happy precisely because he is a man. And then, however limited his sphere, he still preserves in his bosom the sweet feeling of liberty and knows that he can quit his prison whenever he likes.

Which of the following is the subject of the passage's first sentence?

Possible Answers:

many a man

dream

life

That the life of a man is but a dream

Correct answer:

many a man

Explanation:

The main clause of the sentence is, "Many a man has surmised . . ." The order is reversed for poetic / stylistic reasons. The relative clause, "That the life of man is but a dream," is the direct object of this clause's verb, "surmised." It answers the question "what?": What have many surmised? That the life of man is but a dream.

Example Question #92 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Adapted from The Sorrows of Young Werther by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (1774; trans. Boylan 1854)

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love. What is a magic-lantern without light? You have but too kindle the flame within, and the brightest figures shine on the white wall; and, were love only to show us fleeting shadows, we are yet happy, when, like mere children, we behold it, and are transported with the splendid phantoms. I have not been able to see Charlotte today. I was prevented by company from which I could not disengage myself. What was to be done? I sent my servant to her house, that I might at least see somebody today whom had been near her. Oh, the impatience with which I waited for his return! Oh, the joy with which I welcomed him. I should certainly have caught him in my arms and kissed him, if I had not been ashamed.

It is said that the Bonona stone, when placed in the sun, attracts its rays and for a time appears luminous in the dark. So was it with me and this servant. The idea that Charlotte's eyes had dwelt on his countenance, his cheek, his very apparel, endeared it all inestimably to me so that, at that moment, I would not have parted from him for a thousand crowns. His presence made me so happy! Beware of laughing at me, Wilhelm. Can that be a delusion which makes us happy?

Which of the following is the best form of the underlined sentence, "Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love"?

Possible Answers:

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love!

NO CHANGE

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love?

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love;

Correct answer:

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love?

Explanation:

We can surmise that the author is looking to make a certain parallelism at the beginning of this sentence. It is a simple one but can help give us the correct punctuation. In the second sentence, he is asking a question. Perhaps it is rhetorical, but even if that is the case, this rhetoric is strengthened and emphasized if the first sentence ends in a question mark.

Example Question #93 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Unfortunately, two years later, the public fear of invasion won out, and the digging stopped. Almost 100 years later, in 1973, investigations into building a tunnel began again, but once more, digging stopped after two years. This time, construction on the tunnel was prevented in England by economic continued recession. Finally, in 1984, construction began on what eventually became the Chunnel. In 1987, workers began digging on the British side; the following year, digging on the French side began.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the passage. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

an economic recession in England prevented continued construction on the tunnel

NO CHANGE

continued construction on the tunnel was prevented, by an economic recession, in England

continued construction in England on the tunnel prevented by an economic recession

an economic recession—in England—prevented continued construction on the tunnel

Correct answer:

an economic recession in England prevented continued construction on the tunnel

Explanation:

The correct answer uses active voice, and the subject and verb are clear. The other choices are unclear, use passive voice, or are grammatically incorrect.

Example Question #132 : Act English

Humanities: This passage is adapted from chapter three of Sir John Lubbock’s The Pleasures of Life. The chapter is entitled “A Song of Books” and was written in 1887.

 

Of all the privileges we enjoy in this nineteenth century there is none, perhaps, for which we ought to be more thankful than for the easier access to books.

The debt we owe to books was well expressed and articulated by Richard de Bury, Bishop of Durham, author of Philobiblon, written as long ago as 1344, published in 1473, and the earliest English treatise on the delights of literature: "These,” he says, “are the masters who instruct us without rods and ferules, without hard words and anger, without clothes or money. If you approach them, they are not asleep; if you interrogate them, they conceal nothing; if you mistake them, they never grumble; if you are ignorant, they cannot laugh at you. The library, therefore, of wisdom is more precious than all riches, and nothing that can be wished for is worthy to be compared with it. Whosoever therefore acknowledges himself to be a zealous follower of truth, of happiness, of wisdom, of science, or even of the faith, must of necessity make himself a lover of books.” 

This feeling that books are real friends is constantly present to all who love reading. “I have friends,” said Petrarch, “whose society is extremely agreeable to me; they are of all ages, and of every country. They have distinguished themselves both in the cabinet and in the field, and obtained high honors for their knowledge of the sciences. It is easy to gain access to them, for they are always at my service, and I admit them to my company, and dismiss them from it, whenever I please. They are never troublesome, but immediately answer every question I ask them. Some relate to me the events of past ages, while others reveal to me the secrets of Nature. Some teach me how to live, and others how to die. Some, by their vivacity, drive away my cares and exhilarate my spirits; while others give fortitude to my mind, and teach me the important lesson how to restrain my desires, and to depend wholly on myself. They open to me, in short, the various avenues of all the arts and sciences, and upon their information I may safely rely in all emergencies. In return for all their services, they only ask me to accommodate them with a convenient chamber in some corner of my humble habitation, where they may repose in peace; for these friends are more delighted by the tranquillity of retirement than with the tumults of society.”

“He that loveth a book,” says Isaac Barrow, “will never want a faithful friend, a wholesome counsellor, a cheerful companion, an effectual comforter. By study, by reading, by thinking, one may innocently divert and pleasantly entertain himself, as in all weathers, so in all fortunes.”

"By study, by reading, by thinking, one may innocently divert and pleasantly entertain himself, as in all weathers, so in all fortunes.”

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE 

oneself, as in

herself

themselves

Correct answer:

oneself, as in

Explanation:

The pronoun use must be consistent with the subject, which in this case is "one."

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