ACT English : Writing and Revising Effectively

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Example Question #61 : Writing And Revising Effectively

What is the best way to effectively combine the following sentences?

Highway construction legislation is often controversial. It is controversial due to high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Highway construction legislation is often controversial due to high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions.

Highway construction costs that are often controversial, with high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions.

Highway construction legislation, it has high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions, and is often controversial.

Highway construction legislation is often controversial; having high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions.

Correct answer:

Highway construction legislation is often controversial due to high costs, complex structures, and conflicting jurisdictions.

Explanation:

The original sentences are choppy and redundant. 

 Placing a main clause into a modifying position creates a run on sentence.

 A semi-colon requires two main clauses and may only be used to separate two independent clauses.

Example Question #62 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Choose the answer that best reorders the sentences in this passage.

(1) Baking a cake is an easy way to celebrate a birthday with your family. (2) It doesn't require much planning in advance, and it's not expensive. (3) When you are finished, you can all enjoy the results of your project by slicing and serving the cake. (4) Decorations like sprinkles and candles make the baking process more fun for children.

Possible Answers:

Move Sentence 4 before Sentence 3.

NO CHANGE

Move Sentence 4 before Sentence 1. 

Move Sentence 2 before Sentence 1. 

Move Sentence 1 after Sentence 4. 

Correct answer:

Move Sentence 4 before Sentence 3.

Explanation:

This question asks you about the most effective way to order sentences in a paragraph. The best answer is to move Sentence 4 before Sentence 3. Sentence 1 introduces the topic of the sentence, so it should come first. Sentence 2 expands upon the topic introduced in Sentence 1. Sentence 4 adds further detail about the process of baking the cake. Sentence 3 begins with the phrase "When you are finished," indicating that it provides a conclusion for the paragraph as well as coming last chronologically. Therefore, Sentence 3 should end the paragraph.

Example Question #63 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Which choice most effectively combines the given sentences?

Accurate forecasting of the weather is a somewhat inexact science. Relying on many factors that are constantly changing and difficult to measure exactly.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Forecasting the weather accurately is a somewhat inexact science, it relies on many factors that are constantly changing and are difficult to measure exactly.

Forecasting the weather accurately is a somewhat inexact science since it relies on many factors that are constantly changing and are difficult to measure exactly

An inexact science is forecasting the weather accurately, relying on many factors that are constantly changing and are difficult to measure exactly.

Relying on many factors that are constantly changing and are difficult to measure exactly is the inexact science that is forecasting the weather accurately.

Correct answer:

Forecasting the weather accurately is a somewhat inexact science since it relies on many factors that are constantly changing and are difficult to measure exactly

Explanation:

The original answer choice has a fragment. The correct answer correctly links the main clause with a subordinate clause, signalled by "since." The other answer choices are wordy and awkward.

Example Question #25 : Separating, Combining, Or Reordering Sentences

Josh suffered from a fear of dogs ever since he is a little boy. He would shiver in his boots thinking of a dog barking at him, biting him, or that could chase him. He had never met a single dog he liked. The scarier dog he had ever seen was Mr. Green’s dog, whom he had to pass every day. On his way to school. This dog barked so loudly it made Josh’s hairs stand on end.

[1] She said that there was no need to be afraid. [2] Josh’s mom told him that dogs only barked because they were excited to see him. [3] She told him that he just needed to be confident and not act afraid of this dogs’ barking, and speak in a reassuring tone. [4] Then the dog would quiet down and act more friendly.

Josh felt that neither confidence or a reassuring tone would make any difference. He didn’t think he would ever get over his fear. However, one day he had enough. Barking for hours, he realized the dog was bored and just needed a friend. He wasn’t sure if his mother’s advice would prove true? Hiding his fear, he approached the dog and spoke to it in a reassuring tone. To his surprise, the dog wagged it’s tail and quieted down right away. 

Which of the following would best correct the sentence order in Paragraph 2? If the sentences are in the correct order as written, select "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

Move Sentence 4 before Sentence 1

Move Sentence 3 before Sentence 1

NO CHANGE

Move Sentence 2 before Sentence 1

Move Sentence 2 after Sentence 4

Correct answer:

Move Sentence 2 before Sentence 1

Explanation:

This sentence asks you about the best order for sentences in a paragraph. Sentence 2 is the topic sentence of the paragraph; it also introduces the character of "Josh's mother," who is referenced as "she" in Sentence 1 and Sentence 3. Therefore, Sentence 2 should be the first sentence in the paragraph. Sentence 1 and Sentence 3 provide further evidence and should follow Sentence 2. Sentence 4 should come last because it provides a conclusion, summing up the result of the actions described in Sentence 3. 

Example Question #64 : Writing And Revising Effectively

[1] Some people are excited, some people are just annoyed. [2] Being called to jury duty can inspire a range of different emotions. [3] Unsure how long the trial will take, a call to jury duty can be stressful for people who can’t afford to miss work or school.

Some people will be making attempts to get out of jury duty. However, most will still need to serve. Fortunately, many cases are settled before going to trial and is not uncommon for trials to just last only one day. Either way, once you have served on a jury, you won’t have to do it again for a while!

The author is considering moving Sentence 2. What is the most logical placement for this sentence?

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

After Sentence 3

At the very end of the passage

Delete the sentence entirely

Before Sentence 1

Correct answer:

Before Sentence 1

Explanation:

This question asks you about the most logical order for sentences in a paragraph. The sentence "Being called to jury duty can inspire a range of different emotions" is the topic sentence of this paragraph, so it should come first. The information in Sentence 1 about different emotions ("excited" and "annoyed") references the idea introduced in Sentence 2, so Sentence 2 should come first. 

Example Question #31 : Reorganizing Content

Josh and Mary, who have been married for several years, told us the story of the early years of their relationship. They first met on a cold day in December of 1993. They were very different--Josh was an artist and spent his days painting murals, and his nights bartending. Mary was on the fast track to a partnership at a law firm. At first, Josh was not sure he was interested. Mary felt it was love at first sight. Over time, as their relationship developed, Josh could not imagine his life without Mary anymore, so he suggested that they get married. They have been living happily in the country ever since.

The author is considering combining these sentences. What would be the best way to accomplish this?

Possible Answers:

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, and Mary felt it was love at first sight.

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, if Mary felt it was love at first sight.

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, Mary felt it was love at first sight.

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, considering that Mary felt it was love at first sight.

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, but Mary felt it was love at first sight.

Correct answer:

 At first, Josh was not sure he was interested, but Mary felt it was love at first sight.

Explanation:

This sentence asks you to combine two sentences to improve the flow of a paragraph. These two statements present a contrast: Josh's uncertainty contrasts Mary's certainty. A conjunction that conveys a contrast, "but," along with a comma, is therefore the best choice to combine these statements.

Example Question #1 : Separating, Combining, Or Reordering Paragraphs

Adapted from The Autobiography of John Adams (ed. 1856)

Here I will interrupt the narration for a moment to observe that, from all I have read of the history of Greece and Rome, England and France, and all I have observed at home and abroad, articulate eloquence in public assemblies is not the surest road to fame or preferment, at least, unless it be used with caution, very rarely, and with great reserve. The examples of Washington, Franklin, and Jefferson is enough to show that silence and reserve in public is more efficacious than argumentation or oratory. A public speaker who inserts himself, or is urged by others, into the conduct of affairs, by daily exertions to justify his measures, and answer the objections of opponents, makes himself too familiar with the public and unavoidably makes himself enemies. Few persons can bear to be outdone in reasoning or declamation or wit or sarcasm or repartee or satire, and all these things that are very apt to grow out of public debate. In this way, in a course of years, a nation becomes full of a man’s enemies, or at least, of such as have been galled in some controversy and take a secret pleasure in assisting to humble and mortify him. So much for this digression. We will now return to our memoirs.

If you wanted to split this paragraph into two separate paragraphs, what would be the best first sentence of the second paragraph?

Possible Answers:

Few persons can bear . . .

A public speaker who inserts himself . . .

In this way, . . .

The examples of Washington, Franklin . . .

Correct answer:

A public speaker who inserts himself . . .

Explanation:

While the two paragraphs would be relatively short, this could be acceptable for an autobiography, particularly given the length of Mr. Adams' sentences. At the sentence beginning, "A public speaker who inserts," he begins to explain specifically why it is not advisable to be extremely public and argumentative. The first two lengthy sentences merely assert the fact that "articulate eloquence is not the surest road to fame or preferment."

Example Question #2 : Separating, Combining, Or Reordering Paragraphs

Adapted from “The Fisherman and His Wife" in German Fairy Tales and Popular Stories by Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm (trans. Taylor, ed. 1864)

The next morning, when Dame Ilsabill had awoke, it was broad daylight, and she jogged her husband, the fisherman, with her elbow, and said, "Get up husband and bestir yourself, for we must be king of all the land."

"Wife, wife," said the man, “why should we wish to be king? I will not be king."

"Then I will," said she.

"But, wife," said the fisherman, "how can you be king? The fish cannot make you a king."

“Husband," said she, "say no more about it; instead, go and try! I will be king." So the man went away quite sorrowful to think that his wife should want to be king. This time, the sea looked a dark gray color, and was overspread with curling waves and ridges of foam as he cried out, “O man of the sea! Hearken to me! My wife Ilsabill will have her own will, and hath sent me to beg a boon of thee!"

"Well, what would she have now," said the fish?

"Alas!" said the poor man, 'my wife wants to be king."

"Go home," said the fish, “for she is king already."

Then, the fisherman had went home. As he came close to the palace he saw a troop of soldiers, and heard the sound of drums and trumpets. When he went in, he saw his wife sitting on a high throne of gold and diamonds, with a golden crown upon her head. On each side of she stood six fair maidens, each a head taller than the other. 

After which sentence would you start a new paragraph in the underlined paragraph?

Possible Answers:

It would be best not to split this paragraph into two paragraphs.

"Husband," said she, "say no more about it; instead, go and try! I will be king." 

So the man went away quite sorrowful to think that his wife should want to be king. 

Correct answer:

"Husband," said she, "say no more about it; instead, go and try! I will be king." 

Explanation:

There are two thoughts here. The first is the wife's remark to her husband. The second is his action of going away and speaking to the sea. The latter thought begins immediately after the wife's words. Therefore, you should start the new paragraph there.

Example Question #65 : Writing And Revising Effectively

Adapted from The Sorrows of Young Werther by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (1774; trans. Boylan 1854)

Wilhelm, what is the world to our hearts without love. What is a magic-lantern without light? You have but too kindle the flame within, and the brightest figures shine on the white wall; and, were love only to show us fleeting shadows, we are yet happy, when, like mere children, we behold it, and are transported with the splendid phantoms. I have not been able to see Charlotte today. I was prevented by company from which I could not disengage myself. What was to be done? I sent my servant to her house, that I might at least see somebody today whom had been near her. Oh, the impatience with which I waited for his return! Oh, the joy with which I welcomed him. I should certainly have caught him in my arms and kissed him, if I had not been ashamed.

It is said that the Bonona stone, when placed in the sun, attracts its rays and for a time appears luminous in the dark. So was it with me and this servant. The idea that Charlotte's eyes had dwelt on his countenance, his cheek, his very apparel, endeared it all inestimably to me so that, at that moment, I would not have parted from him for a thousand crowns. His presence made me so happy! Beware of laughing at me, Wilhelm. Can that be a delusion which makes us happy?

Which sentence in the passage's first paragraph should mark the start of a new paragraph and be the first line of this new paragraph?

Possible Answers:

"Oh, the impatience with which I waited for his return!"

"I sent my servant to her house, that I might at least see somebody today whom had been near her."

"I was prevented by company from which I could not disengage myself."

"I have not been able to see Charlotte today."

Correct answer:

"I have not been able to see Charlotte today."

Explanation:

A clear shift of thought occurs when the author states, "I have not been able to see Charlotte today." At this point, he beings talking about something concrete in his life. If this is not put into a new paragraph, the whole first paragraph becomes a bit confusing, making the reader wonder why all of these remarks are together in one flow of thought.

Example Question #2 : Separating, Combining, Or Reordering Paragraphs

Adapted from The Apology by Plato (trans. Jowett)

This inquisition has led to my having many enemies of the worst and most dangerous kind and has given occasion also to many false statements against me. And I am called wise, for my hearers always imagine that I myself possess the wisdom which I find lacking in others. However, O men of Athens, the truth is that god only is wise. By his answer he intends to show that the wisdom of men is worth little or nothing. He is not speaking of Socrates, he is only using my name by way of illustration. It is as though he said, “He, O men, is the wisest, who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is in truth worth nothing.” And so, I go about the world, obedient to the god, searching and making enquiry into the wisdom of any one, whether citizen or stranger, who appears to be wise. If he is not wise, then I show him that he is not wise. My occupation quite absorbs me, and I have no time to give either to any public matter of interest or to any concern of my own. Indeed I am in utter poverty by reason of my devotion to the god.

There is another thing. Young men of the richer classes, who have not much to do, come about me of their own accord. They like to hear my examinations of others and often imitate me, and then proceed to examine others. They quickly discover that there is plenty of people, who think that they know something but really know little or nothing. Then, those who are examined by them instead of being angry with themselves become angry with me. 

“This confounded Socrates,” they say, “this villainous misleader of youth!” And then, if somebody asks them, “What evil does he practice or teach?” they do not know and cannot tell. However, in order that they may not appear to be at a loss, they repeat the ready-made charges which are used against all philosophers: the teaching things up in the clouds and under the earth, having no gods, and making wrong things appear to be right. 

They do not like to confess that their pretence of knowledge has been detected (which is the truth). And as they are numerous and ambitious and energetic, they have filled your ears with they’re loud and inveterate calumnies.

And this, O men of Athens, is the truth and the whole truth. I have concealed nothing; I have dissembled nothing. And yet, I know that my plainness of speech makes them hate me. Still, what is their hatred but a proof that I am speaking the truth? From this have arisen the crowds’ prejudice against me. This is the reason of it, as you will find out either in this or in any future enquiry.

After which sentence in the first paragraph could you begin a new paragraph?

Possible Answers:

By his answer he intends to show that the wisdom of men is worth little or nothing.

He is not speaking of Socrates, he is only using my name by way of illustration. 

It is as though he said, “He, O men, is the wisest, who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is in truth worth nothing.” 

And so, I go about the world, obedient to the god, searching and making enquiry into the wisdom of any one, whether citizen or stranger, who appears to be wise.

Correct answer:

It is as though he said, “He, O men, is the wisest, who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is in truth worth nothing.” 

Explanation:

When the speaker begins to say, "And so, I go about the world," he is beginning a new thought and describing his activity. This is a shift in focus that could merit a new paragraph. Note that the question asks for the sentence after which the break is to occur. Therefore, select the sentence preceding this one.

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