ACT English : Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for ACT English

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Although she studied traditional French cuisine, food critics praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

Possible Answers:

the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations.

food critics praising the master chef for her culinary innovations.

food critics have praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

food critics praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

food critics praised the master chef because of her culinary innovations.

Correct answer:

the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations.

Explanation:

The original text contains a misplaced modifier, making it sound as though the food critics were the ones who studied traditional French cuisine.

Only the answer choice "the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations" avoids the misplaced modifier error because it places the person who did actually study traditional French cuisine—the master chef—immediately after the introductory modifying phrase.

Example Question #271 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Walking down the street, the time is something that Erica lost track of.

Possible Answers:

Walking down the street, the time lost track of Erica.

Walked down the street, the time is something that Erika lost track of.

Walking down the street, Erica lost track of the time.

Walking down the street the time is something that Erika lost track of.

Walking down the street, the time is something that Erika lost track of.

Correct answer:

Walking down the street, Erica lost track of the time.

Explanation:

The sentence as it is written contains a dangling modifier, because it appears that "the time" is "walking down the street." We need to rewrite the sentence so that it is apparent that "Erica" is the one who is "walking down the street." So, the correct answer is "Walking down the street, Erica lost track of the time."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Alighting on the deck, the aircraft carrier shook from the force of the plane.

Possible Answers:

the aircraft carrier shook from the force of the plane.

the aircraft carrier shaking from the force of the plane.

the aircraft carrier shakes from the force of the plane.

the plane shaking the aircraft carrier's force.

the plane shook the aircraft carrier with its force.

Correct answer:

the plane shook the aircraft carrier with its force.

Explanation:

The sentence features a dangling modifier, making it seem like the "aircraft carrier" is the object "alighting," when in fact the plane "alights" on the carrier. To remedy this, the words must be rearranged to make the plane the subject of the sentence. "The plane shook the aircraft carrier with its force," is the only answer choice that does this and is completely grammatically correct.

Example Question #341 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Rounding the corner, the park was right in front of the tourist group.

Possible Answers:

As the tourists rounded the corner, the park being right in front of them.

As the tourists rounded the corner, the park was right in front of them.

Rounding the corner, the park became right in front of the tourist group. 

Rounding the corner, the park was right in front of the tourist group.

Rounding the corner, the park was in right front of the tourist group.

Correct answer:

As the tourists rounded the corner, the park was right in front of them.

Explanation:

The sentence as written contains a dangling modifier, which confusingly makes it read like the park was what rounded the corner. The only answer choice that fixes this issue and is grammatically correct is "As the tourists rounded the corner, the park was right in front of them."

Example Question #22 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Descending the stairs, the young man thought his prom date looked beautiful on the landing.

Possible Answers:

Descending of the stairs

Descended the stairs

As she descended the stairs

Descending the stairs

Descending from the stairs

Correct answer:

As she descended the stairs

Explanation:

The sentence indicates with its final phrase that the "prom date" was the one on the stairs, but is written like the "young boy" is the one "descending." The introductory phrase needs to be restructured to make this distinction clear. The only answer choice that does this is "As she descended the stairs."

Example Question #341 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Under the heavy weight, the rock was crushing the people trapped underneath.

Possible Answers:

the rock was crushing people who were trapped underneath.

the people trapped underneath the rock were being crushed.

the rock crushing the people trapped underneath.

the people being underneath trapping by the rock's crushing.

the rock was crushing the people trapped underneath.

Correct answer:

the people trapped underneath the rock were being crushed.

Explanation:

The sentence is confusingly written, as the modifier clause "Under the heavy weight" reads as though it is describing the rock. Actually the "people trapped underneath" are the ones "Under the heavy weight," and the sentence should be reworded to reflect this and clear up the confusion. The answer choice that does this and becomes clear is "the people trapped underneath the rock were being crushed."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Behind the rock, the bullets could not hit the soldiers.

Possible Answers:

Behind the rock the bullets could not hit the soldiers.

The bullets could not hit the soldiers behind the rock.

Behind the rock, where the bullets could not hit the soldiers.

The soldiers being not hit by bullets behind the rock.

Behind the rock, the bullets could not hit the soldiers.

Correct answer:

The bullets could not hit the soldiers behind the rock.

Explanation:

As the sentence is written, it makes it seem like the bullets are behind the rock instead of the soldiers. The sentence needs to be reworded to clarify the sentence, and make it clear who is hiding where and from what. The answer choice that does this best is "The bullets could not hit the soldiers behind the rock."

Example Question #342 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Walking out the door, the bright sunshine blinded the shoppers.

Possible Answers:

the shoppers blinding the sunshine.

the bright sunshine blinding the shoppers.

the bright sunshine blinds the shoppers.

the shoppers were blinded by the bright sunshine.

the bright sunshine blinded the shoppers.

Correct answer:

the shoppers were blinded by the bright sunshine.

Explanation:

The sentence is written in a manner that makes it appear the sunshine is what is "walking out the door." The underlined portion of the sentence must be reworded to make it clear the shoppers are the ones doing the walking. The answer choice that best fixes this problem is "the shoppers were blinded by the bright sunshine."

Example Question #21 : Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Like his father before him, the army was something the boy always wanted to join.

Possible Answers:

the army was a thing the boy always wanted to join.

the army was something the boy always wanted to join.

the boy always wanted to join the army.

the boy wanted something to join the army.

the army was something the boy wanted always to join.

Correct answer:

the boy always wanted to join the army.

Explanation:

The sentence is written with a dangling modifier. As it is written, it seems that "the army" always wanted to do something "like his father." The wording needs to be rearranged so that it is clear that "the boy" wanted to join the army "like his father" and the sentence's meaning is kept intact. The answer choice that does this the best is "the boy always wanted to join the army."

Example Question #273 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Coming into the restaurant, the big screen television dominated the patrons' view.

Possible Answers:

Coming into the restaurant, the patrons' view dominated the big screen television.

The big screen television dominated the patrons' view when they came into the restaurant.

Coming into the restaurant, the big screen television dominated the patrons' view.

Coming into the restaurant, the big screen television dominating the patrons' view.

Coming into the restaurant as the big screen television dominated the patrons' view.

Correct answer:

The big screen television dominated the patrons' view when they came into the restaurant.

Explanation:

The sentence is written to make it seem like the "big screen television" was what was "coming into the restaurant," as the sentence contains a dangling modifier. The sentence's word order should be switched around to make it clear that the patrons were coming into the restaurant. The only answer choice that does this is "The big screen television dominated the patrons' view when they came into the restaurant."

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