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Example Questions

Example Question #21 : Identifying Sentence Errors

The library, which is made almost entirely of redwood, was built before redwood trees were protected.

Possible Answers:

which

protected

No error

was built

almost entirely

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This sentence is correct as written.

Example Question #22 : Identifying Sentence Errors

The atonal chords and pounding rhythms of Stravinsky’s Rite of Spring provoked riots among the audience the first time the piece was performed.

Possible Answers:

provoked

was performed

No error

among the audience

and pounding rhythms

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This sentence is correct as written.

Example Question #23 : Identifying Sentence Errors

While she had to admit that swimming across the English Channel would be a worthy achievement, Karen decided that climbing Mount Everest would be a more impressive life goal.

Possible Answers:

had to admit that

more impressive

across

would be a

No error

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This sentence is correct as written.

Example Question #21 : Identifying Sentence Errors

The United States has been a country of immigrants since its foundation. This is still true today. The United States allows more people to immigrate to it then any other country. This stream of immigration have resulted in an extremely diverse population with many different cultures and languages. As most public schools in the United States provide a monolingual education, immigrant parents are often unsure of whether or not they should teach their children their heritage language.  

There are many myths surrounding the idea of bilingual education that prevent its widespread implementation in public schools. However, bilingual education has actually been shown to produce higher achievements in both languages. As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills. Because some public school systems have successfully implemented bilingual education, there are still enormous difficulties in terms of resources and support from the U.S. Board of Education.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

surrounding

foundation

Because

All of the underlined words are used correctly.

implementation

Correct answer:

Because

Explanation:

"Because" is used incorrectly in the context of the sentence it appears in. "Because" is used to discuss two ideas that are linked by a relationship of cause and effect. However, in the sentence it appears in, the two ideas ("some public school systems have successfully implemented bilingual education" and "there are still enormous difficulties in terms of resources and support from the U.S. Board of Education") are not related to each other as cause and effect, but rather in despite of the first, the second is still true. So, a word such as "although" should be used in place of "because."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

The United States has been a country of immigrants since its foundation. This is still true today. The United States allows more people to immigrate to it then any other country. This stream of immigration have resulted in an extremely diverse population with many different cultures and languages. As most public schools in the United States provide a monolingual education, immigrant parents are often unsure of whether or not they should teach their children their heritage language.  

There are many myths surrounding the idea of bilingual education that prevent its widespread implementation in public schools. However, bilingual education has actually been shown to produce higher achievements in both languages. As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills. Because some public school systems have successfully implemented bilingual education, there are still enormous difficulties in terms of resources and support from the U.S. Board of Education.

Which of the underlined words needs to be modified?

Possible Answers:

diverse

foundation

achievements

then

implemented

Correct answer:

then

Explanation:

"Then" is an adverb dealing with time, but "than" is used for comparisons. In this case, "than" should be used, because the amount of imigration allowed by the United States is being compared to that of any other country. So, "then" is the underlined word that needs to be modified.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Swift's style was well suited to his thoughts, which are never subtilised by nice disquisitions, decorated by sparkling conceits, elevated by ambitious sentences, or variegated by far-sought learning. He pays no court to the passions; he excites neither surprise nor admiration; he always understands himself, and his readers always understand him: the pursuer of Swift wants little previous knowledge; it will be sufficient that he is acquainted with common words and common things; he is neither required to mount elevations nor to explore profundities; his passage is always on a level, along solid ground, without asperities, without obstruction.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

pursuer

profundities

conceits

ambitious

Correct answer:

pursuer

Explanation:

It is unlikely that a reader of Swift would be called his "pursuer," but the reader might be called a "peruser."

(Passage adapted from "Swift" in Volume III of Lives of the Most Eminent English Poets by Samuel Johnson, 1781)

Example Question #22 : Identifying Sentence Errors

In Swift's works, he has given very different specimens both of sentiment and expression. His Tale of a Tub has little resemblance to his other pieces. It executes a vehemence and rapidity of mind, a copiousness of images, and vivacity of diction, such as he afterwards never possessed, or never exerted. It is of a mode so distinct and peculiar, that it must be considered by itself; what is true of that, is not true of any thing else which he has written.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

peculiar

executes

exerted

specimens

Correct answer:

executes

Explanation:

A work would not "execute a vehemence and rapidity of mind," but it might "express" these features.

(Passage adapted from "Swift" in Volume III of Lives of the Most Eminent English Poets by Samuel Johnson, 1781)

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

In Swift's other works is found an equable tenor of easy language, which rather trickles than flows. His delight was in simplicity. That he has in his works no metaphor, as has been said, is not true; but his few metaphors seem to be received rather by necessity than choice. He studied purity; and though perhaps all his scriptures are not exact, yet it is not often that solecisms can be found; and whoever depends on his authority may generally conclude himself safe. His sentences are never too much dilated or contracted; and it will not be easy to find any embarrassment in the complication of his clauses, any inconsequence in his connections, or abruptness in his transitions.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

abruptness

scriptures

tenor

dilated

Correct answer:

scriptures

Explanation:

The word "scriptures" makes no sense in this context; the writer originally used the similar-sounding word "strictures" here.

(Passage adapted from "Swift" in Volume III of Lives of the Most Eminent English Poets by Samuel Johnson, 1781)

Example Question #11 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Adapted from “Our Amateur Poets, No. III. — William Ellery Channing” in The Complete Works of Edgar Allan Poe — Vol. XI: Literary Criticism by Edgar Allan Poe (1843, ed. 1902)

In speaking of Mr. William Ellery Channing, who has just published a very neat little volume of poems, we feel the necessity of employing the indefinite rather than the definitive article. He is a, and by no means the, William Ellery Channing. He is only the son of the great essayist deceased. He is just such a person, in despite of his clarum et venerabile nomen, as Pindar would have designated by the significant term τις.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

despite

definitive

deceased

neat

Correct answer:

definitive

Explanation:

Instead of "definitive," which means decisive, the writer probably means "definite" here, which fits the context of the writer comparing the indefinite article "a" with the definite article "the."

Example Question #12 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Adapted from “Our Amateur Poets, No. III. — William Ellery Channing” in The Complete Works of Edgar Allan Poe — Vol. XI: Literary Criticism by Edgar Allan Poe (1843, ed. 1902)

We may purvey some general idea of them by two foreign terms not in common use — the Italian pavoneggiarsi, “to strut like a peacock,” and the German word for “sky-rocketing,” schwarmerei. They are more preposterous, in a word, than any poems except those of the author of “Sam Patch;” for we presume we are right (are we not?) in taking it for granted that the author of “Sam Patch” is the very worst of all the wretched poets that ever existed upon earth.

Which of the underlined words is used incorrectly?

Possible Answers:

wretched

purvey

preposterous

granted

Correct answer:

purvey

Explanation:

While the word "purvey" does mean supply, the writer most likely would have used the word "convey," which can mean make an idea able to be understood.

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