SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #12 : Identifying Modifier Word Modified Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

In this city, the strong survive much more frequent than the weak. No error

Possible Answers:

frequent

the strong

survive

No error

the weak.

Correct answer:

frequent

Explanation:

In the sentence above, the word "survive" is being modified by the word "frequent." We know that frequent should be an adverb, rather than an adjective. The best way to correct the sentence above is:

"In this city, the strong survive much more frequently than the weak."

Example Question #13 : Identifying Modifier Word Modified Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Which of the two track stars will be quickest than the other? No error

Possible Answers:

No error

Which of the two

other?

quickest

will be

Correct answer:

quickest

Explanation:

In the sentence above, the phrase "which of the two track stars" is being modified by the word "quickest." Only two things are being compared, so a comparative adjective should be used, rather than a superlative. Superlatives are used when one item is being distinguished from a group of 3 or more items; comparatives are used to directly compare two items. The best way to correct the sentence above is:

"Which of the two track stars will be quicker than the other?"

Example Question #14 : Identifying Modifier Word Modified Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The soldiers may well have been the bravest man in the unit, but that bravery cost him his lifeNo error

Possible Answers:

soldiers

bravest man in the unit

No error

cost him his life

but that

Correct answer:

soldiers

Explanation:

In the sentence above, the word "soldiers" is being modified by the phrase "bravest man in the unit." Therefore, we know that soldiers should be singular. The best way to correct the sentence above is:

"The soldier may well have been the bravest man in the unit, but that bravery cost him his life." 

Example Question #15 : Identifying Modifier Word Modified Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After practicing for hour on end, Sarah finally managed to perform a perfect kickflip on her skateboard. No error

Possible Answers:

her

hour

managed

perform

No error

Correct answer:

hour

Explanation:

The structure of the sentence suggests that Sarah practiced for several hours in a row. The phrase "hours on end" would be correct.

Example Question #16 : Identifying Modifier Word Modified Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Josie ran as quick as the wind; she knew that she needed to gain some distance now, if she wanted a chance to win the race. No error

Possible Answers:

quick

to win

to gain

now,

No error

Correct answer:

quick

Explanation:

The word "quick" is modifying the verb "ran." Any time a verb is modified, it is correct to use an adverb (in this case, "quickly") rather than an adjective. A runner is quick, but that runner runs "quickly."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

All four of Martha’s children became a varsity athlete in high school; she was incredibly proud of her family. No error

Possible Answers:

a varsity athelete

All four

was

proud of

No error

Correct answer:

a varsity athelete

Explanation:

Given that Martha has four children, the number of athletes should be plural. Therefore, “a varsity athlete” should be “varsity athletes."

Example Question #2 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Two out of four teenagers who become addicted to drugs will go on to become a high school dropout. No error

Possible Answers:

out of 

will

who 

No error

a high school dropout

Correct answer:

a high school dropout

Explanation:

Given that this sentence is talking about the fate of “two out of four teenagers,” multiple teenagers are being referred to. Therefore, “a high school dropout” should also be plural, and therefore read, “high school dropouts.”

Example Question #3 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

All of my classmates wanted to become a singer when they grew up, except for me. No error

Possible Answers:

All of 

a singer

No error

except

wanted to

Correct answer:

a singer

Explanation:

There are multiple classmates described in the sentence. Therefore, there should also be multiple (or plural) singers. However, the word here is the singular, “singer,” which is incorrect.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I despise the chores that my mother asks me to do, but the act of pairing socks is by far the most tedious tasksNo error

Possible Answers:

is

but

tasks

asks

No error

Correct answer:

tasks

Explanation:

In the clause "the act of pairing socks is by far the most tedious tasks," "act" and "tasks" are referring to the same thing, so "task" must be singular like "act" is. "Tasks" is plural and is therefore incorrect.

Example Question #5 : Identifying Noun Noun Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Polydactyl cats can have seven toes on each feet, a fact that makes me wonder whether the extra digits make it easier for them to scratch things. No error

Possible Answers:

easier

seven toes

No error

feet

that makes me wonder whether

Correct answer:

feet

Explanation:

The sentence uses the phrase "seven toes on each feet," and this is incorrect because "each" is used to describe a singular noun, but "feet" is plural. Changing "feet" to "foot" corrects this error.

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