SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #1041 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

There are a lot of problems with the new dinosaur movie, it is riddled with factual inaccuracies. No error

Possible Answers:

inaccuracies.

No error

riddled

There are

movie, it

Correct answer:

movie, it

Explanation:

There are several acceptable ways to separate independent clauses, but simply using a single comma by itself is not one of them. To do so creates an error known as the comma splice. The example sentence, by using a comma instead of a period, coordinating conjunction and a comma, or a semicolon, contains such an error.

Example Question #172 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Jordan had a terrifying dream in which he was attacked by piranhas, he decided to skip his swimming lesson the following dayNo error

Possible Answers:

had

in which

No error

piranhas, he

the following day

Correct answer:

piranhas, he

Explanation:

This is an example of a comma splice. The two clauses here are both independent clauses, meaning each could stand on its own as a full sentence. Commas cannot be used to separate such clauses. A semicolon would be appropriate here. Another alternative would be to add a conjunction after the comma, such as "...attacked by piranhas, so he decided..."

Example Question #1042 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Laura wanted to attend her high school's ten-year reunion, it was only the possibility of seeing her ex-boyfriend that made her hesistate. No error

Possible Answers:

attend

No error

her high school's

reunion, it

possibility of

Correct answer:

reunion, it

Explanation:

The error in this sentence is that two independent clauses ("Laura wanted to attend her high school's ten-year reunion" and "it was only the possibility of seeing her ex-boyfriend that made her hesitate") are being joined by a comma, which is an incorrect use of a comma. Since independent clauses could be seperate sentences, there needs to be a stronger form of punctuation than a comma to join them, such a semicolon, a period, or a coordinating conjunction followed by a comma. 

Example Question #1043 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Paul really likes oranges, Chani really likes apples. No error

Possible Answers:

Paul

No error

oranges,

apples.

really

Correct answer:

oranges,

Explanation:

When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as a "comma splice." In the example above, the two independent clauses could be correctly connected by a semicolon or a comma followed by a conjunction (e.g. "and" or "but"). In addition, the two independent clauses could be made into distinct sentences.

Example Question #181 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Stanley already paid the cashier, he cannot get his money back. No error

Possible Answers:

cashier, he

No error

get

already

back

Correct answer:

cashier, he

Explanation:

The sentence given is an example of a comma splice. A comma cannot join together two independent clauses. The two clauses can be made into two separate sentences, or can be joined using a semicolon instead of a comma. 

Example Question #182 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I bought two hundred specialized sheets of paper for the project, John bought some colored pencils. No error

Possible Answers:

colored pencils.

specialized sheets

I bought two

No error

project, John

Correct answer:

project, John

Explanation:

Two independent clauses being joined only by a single comma result in an error known as the "comma splice." In the example above, a period, a comma and a conjunction, or a semicolon would all be appropriate to punctuate the sentence.

Example Question #183 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

My friend Paul is the best baseball player I have ever seen, he has incredible athleticism, a great attitude, and an uncanny ability to be in the right place at the right time. No error

Possible Answers:

a great attitude, and an uncanny ability

No error

best

seen, he

My friend Paul

Correct answer:

seen, he

Explanation:

When two independent clauses are joined only by a single comma, this results in an error known as the "comma splice." Since both of the clauses in the example above are independent, they could stand on their own as full, grammatically complete sentences, a semicolon, period, or comma and a conjunction would be needed to properly punctuate the sentences (or compound sentence).

Example Question #184 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The truth of the matter is that it's not acceptable to treat people that way, you have to behave more generously in the future. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

The truth of the matter

it's

behave more generously in the future

way, you

Correct answer:

way, you

Explanation:

The example sentence attempts to create a compound sentence using only a comma, thus creating a comma splice. In the example above, something more than a comma is needed to separate the two clauses. 

Example Question #185 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Anna, Hannah, and their sister, Susanna, are all my cousins; it’s no wonder we get confused at family reunions. No error

Possible Answers:

sister,

cousins;

No error

Susanna

Hannah,

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This list is punctuated correctly. There should be a comma between each item in the list and an additional comma on either side of “Susanna,” which modifies “their sister.” (If “their sister, Susanna,” was the first or second item in the list, a semicolon would be needed to separate the items for clarity’s sake, but here it’s unnecessary.) In the second half of the sentence, a semicolon correctly separates the two independent clauses without a conjunction.

Example Question #21 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Comma Splices

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although certainly the best known of the early aviators, Orville and Wilbur Wright were not the only inventors pioneering airplane designs, the Montgolfier brothers should also be remembered for their timely rediscovery of the hot-air balloon. No error

Possible Answers:

aviators,

designs,

for their timely

No error

the only inventors pioneering

Correct answer:

designs,

Explanation:

Here we have a comma splice: two independent clauses that are incorrectly separated by a comma. Two independent clauses in the same sentence must be punctuated by either a comma with a conjunction or a semicolon. Correctly punctuated, this sentence would read: “Although certainly the best known of the early aviators, Orville and Wilbur Wright were not the only inventors pioneering airplane designs; the Montgolfier brothers should also be remembered for their timely rediscovery of the hot-air balloon.” The comma after “aviators” is correct, since it’s separating an independent from a dependent clause.

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