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Example Question #31 : Identifying Semicolon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
He ate a large meal at breakfast; since he is so big. No error
No error
since
ate
breakfast;
big.
breakfast;
There should be a comma after breakfast instead of a semicolon. "Since he is so big," is not a complete grammatical clause.
Example Question #32 : Identifying Semicolon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Kristin despises eating green vegetables; however, her mother keeps insisting they are good for her health. No error
however,
No error
vegetables;
keeps
despises
No error
The sentence is correct and the semicolon is correctly positioned, since it separates two independent clauses. A semicolon is an optional stylistic choice here, separating the clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction or a period would be equally correct.
Example Question #33 : Identifying Semicolon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
She had two choices at that moment; give up or keep running. No error
No error
or
choices
had
moment;
moment;
The word "moment" should be followed by a colon, not a semicolon. This is because semicolons should only be used to separate two independent clauses that could stand alone as two different sentences, which is not the case here. A colon here would correctly grammatically signal the beginning of the list.
Example Question #41 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; and I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; and I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; or I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; but I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; though I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however, they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The sentence above incorrectly places the coordinating conjunction "and" after the semicolon. Replacing the semicolon with a comma, or deleting the coordinating conjunction would both grammatically correct this sentence. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, I need to go to the dry cleaners; I also need to go and pick up some flowers for my wife.
Example Question #42 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Emmett is one of the rudest human beings I have ever met; but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the ruder human beings I have ever met; but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the ruder human beings I have ever met, but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the rudest human beings I have ever met, but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the ruder human beings I have ever met but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the rudest human beings I have ever met; but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Emmett is one of the rudest human beings I have ever met, but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however, they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. Commas with a conjunction and a semicolon are both grammatically correct options to join two independent clauses into one compound sentence; whichever you choose is a matter of personal writing style. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, Emmett is one of the rudest human beings I have ever met, but I can't deny that he's a fascinating conversationalist when he wants to be.
Example Question #591 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; but several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; although several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; despite several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; but several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; in spite several people seem to like him.
Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; several people seem to like him.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses. Note though that semicolon must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Francois always struck me as a smarmy chap; several people seem to like him."
Example Question #42 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The old tree had been there for forty years; but now John was thinking of cutting it down. No error
had been
of cutting
years;
was thinking
No error
years;
Semicolons link two independent clauses; the phrase "but now John was thinking of cutting it down" is not an independent clause. The use of "but" makes it dependent on the first clause, and means that a comma is more appropriate. Note that coordinating conjunctions should never follow semicolons.
Example Question #43 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Five states have laws that would apply in this case, in their jurisdictions; Montana, New York, New Hampshire, Colorado, and Kansas. No error
jurisdictions;
case, in
No error
Colorado, and
their
jurisdictions;
When introducing a list, a colon or a comma should be used (eg. "...in their jurisdictions: Montana..."). Semicolons are generally used to link two independent clauses in a sentence.
Example Question #44 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I find it extremely difficult to concentrate with all of the noise; and I worry that I may have to move out of my building. No error
No error
concentrate with
my building.
noise; and
I find it extremely
noise; and
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however, they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The portion of the sentence that needs to be corrected in the sentence above is, "noise; and." The required correction is simply to delete the coordinating conjunction "and."
Example Question #45 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
If you don't stop lying to the police; I'm afraid you're going to find yourself in a world of trouble. No error
world of trouble.
No error
the police;
I'm afraid
If you don't stop
the police;
In the example sentence "If you don't stop lying to the police" acts not as an independent clause, but rather as a dependent introductory clause. Thus, the semicolon must be replaced with a comma in order for this sentence to be grammatically correct.
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