SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Question #51 : Identifying Sentence Errors

The United States has been a country of immigrants since its foundation. This is still true today. The United States allows more people to immigrate to it then any other country. This stream of immigration have resulted in an extremely diverse population with many different cultures and languages. As most public schools in the United States provide a monolingual education, immigrant parents are often unsure of whether or not they should teach their children their heritage language.  

There are many myths surrounding the idea of bilingual education that prevent its widespread implementation in public schools. However, bilingual education has actually been shown to produce higher achievements in both languages. As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills. Because some public school systems have successfully implemented bilingual education, there are still enormous difficulties in terms of resources and support from the U.S. Board of Education.

Which of the following sentences is grammatically incorrect and must be modified?

Possible Answers:

This is still true today.

As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills.

There are many myths surrounding the idea of bilingual education that prevent its implementation in public schools.

However, bilingual education has actually been shown to produce higher achievements in both languages. 

The United States has been a country of immigrants since its foundation.

Correct answer:

As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills.

Explanation:

"As well as enhance problem solving and critical thinking skills" is a sentence fragment because it is missing a subject. "As well as" is not a subject and does not do the action of the verb.

Example Question #31 : Identifying Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Your paper initially seemed very complex, but after I read it. I understood it to be much simpler than I had initially thought.

Possible Answers:

but after I read it; I understood it

but after I read it. I understood it

but after reading it and understanding it

but after I read it, I have understanding that it

but after I read it, I understood it

Correct answer:

but after I read it, I understood it

Explanation:

"After I read it" is not an independent clause, and it is being used as one, because it is forming the second half of a compound sentence. Compound sentences can only be constructed out of independent clauses that could each make sense and be grammatically complete on their own. So, to fix this error, we need to combine the two sentences into one, so that the prepositional phrase "after I read it" is part of a complete independent clause. The answer choice changing the sentence's period out for a semicolon does not solve the grammatical issue at all, so it cannot be correct. The answer choice that introduces the phrase "I have understanding that it" is unnecessarily awkwardly phrased, so it can't be correct either. The answer choice that uses "and" to connect the two sentences might look like a potentially correct answer, because it is combining the two sentences into a compound sentence, but "and understanding" merely extends the prepositional phrase "after I read it" into "after reading it and understanding it to be much simpler than I had initially thought." So, it merely exacerbates our initial problem, because the second part of the newly-created compound sentence has no verb. So, the correct answer is "Your paper initially seemed very complex, but after I read it, I understood it to be much simpler than I had initially thought."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Contrary to popular belief, if one were to compare the hunting prowess of female lions with that of male lions, the females would be the best hunters. No error

Possible Answers:

female lions with male lions

No error

were to compare

best

to popular belief

Correct answer:

best

Explanation:

"The best hunters" is the error here, making this a comparative error. The correct word would be "better" here because the sentence draws a comparison between two groups—females and males. Whenever a comparison is drawn between two items, it is correct to use the "-er" form of the word; this is known as the "comparative" form of the word. Whenever a comparison is drawn between three or more things, you use the "-est" form of the word, known as the "superlative" form. A comparison is used to compare one item to one other item; superlatives are used to distinguish one item from many other items.

Example Question #51 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Knitting may appear complex, but even its most complicated patterns can be created from a combination of just two stitches; knit stitches and purl stitches. No error

Possible Answers:

appear

just two stitches;

complex, but even

No error

can be created

Correct answer:

just two stitches;

Explanation:

This sentence's error lies in the incorrect way in which it uses a semicolon to introduce a list. "Knit stitches and purl stitches" are the "two stitches" that the sentence introduces earlier, so a colon is the most appropriate punctuation mark to use in this instance. The corrected sentence reads, "Knitting may appear complex, but even its most complicated patterns can be created from a combination of just two stitches: knit stitches and purl stitches."

Example Question #53 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Everyone on the team agreed that the best option was to forfeit the game; without their best player; the team didn't have a chance of winningNo error

Possible Answers:

player; the

best option

game; without

No error

chance of winning

Correct answer:

player; the

Explanation:

A comma should be used instead of a semicolon to separate the introductory phrase "without their best player" from the rest of the second independent clause "the team didn't have a chance of winning."

Example Question #52 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

That book over there belongs to Eileen; so we should return it to her before she needs to study for the massive English test next week. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

Eileen;

that

to study

there

Correct answer:

Eileen;

Explanation:

A semicolon is meant to connect two thoughts that are both independent clauses. However, the second clause here is dependent and is connected by the word "so." In this situation, a comma would be appropriate to link that subordinate clause to the first independent clause. So, the corrected sentence would read, "That book over there belongs to Eileen, so we should help return it to her before she needs to study for the massive English test next week."

Example Question #3 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

During Roman times, Julius Caesar was well known not only for his superior strategy on the battlefield; but also for his oratorical abilities. No error.

Possible Answers:

battlefield; but

well known

No error.

also for

was

Correct answer:

battlefield; but

Explanation:

A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses. In this case, the phrase that follows the semicolon is not an independent clause (a complete sentence that can stand on its own), so the use of a semicolon here is incorrect. Changing the semicolon to a comma would correct the sentence's error.

Example Question #4 : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

James's grocery list included the following items; broccoli, frozen yogurt, bread, pork chops, and eggs. No error

Possible Answers:

included

items; broccoli

pork chops, and

No error

the following

Correct answer:

items; broccoli

Explanation:

A colon, not a semicolon, should be used to introduce a list of things. Semicolons are only used to connect two independent clauses, or parts of a combined sentence that could each stand alone as an independent sentence. That isn't the case in this sentence; "broccoli, frozen yogurt, bread, pork chops, and eggs" is not a complete sentence.

Example Question #3 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I was going to go for a run today, however, the stormy weather caused me to postpone my workout. No error

Possible Answers:

today,

me to

however, 

was going

No error

Correct answer:

today,

Explanation:

The sentence has two independent clauses. Each could be its own sentence: "I was going to go for a run today" and "the stormy weather caused me to postpone my workout." They are joined by a conjunctive adverb, "however." (Other conjunctive adverbs include "accordingly," "consequently," "hence," "moreover," "otherwise," "therefore," and "thus.") When two independent clauses are joined by a conjunctive adverb, they require a semicolon after the first clause, not a comma. The corrected sentence would read, "I was going to go for a run today; however, the stormy weather caused me to postpone my workout."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

The martial art of karate is based around two main techniques; kicks and punches. No error

Possible Answers:

is based

techniques;

and

of

No error

Correct answer:

techniques;

Explanation:

The semicolon used after "techniques" is an inappropriate way to introduce a list. To correct this error, we should replace the semicolon with a colon. 

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