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Example Question #141 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a setence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The concerned citizens were all preoccupied with lofty thoughts now that they had become jury.
the had become jury.
ones had become jury.
they will become jury.
they had become jurors.
these had become jury.
they had become jurors.
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "citizens" we know that we are dealing with a group of recruits. Later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "jury" should be the plural, "jurors." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "they had become jurors."
Example Question #142 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a setence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Nine out of every ten students who take Spanish as child will get jobs upon graduating college.
spanish as children
Spanish as children
spanish as child
Spanish as a child
Spanish as child
Spanish as children
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "students" we know that we are dealing with a group of students. Later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "child" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "Spanish as children."
Example Question #143 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The young girls at space camp all hoped to grow up to become an astronaut.
all hoped to grow up to become one astronaut.
all hoped to grow up to become a astronaut.
all hoped to grow up to become an astronaut.
all hoped to grow up to become astronauts.
all hoped to grow up to become the astronaut.
all hoped to grow up to become astronauts.
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "girls" we know that we are dealing with a group of girls. Therefore, later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "astronaut" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "all hoped to grow up to become astronauts."
Example Question #144 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The members of the jury could not make up its mind about the trial; the evidence presented to them had been extraordinarily complex.
could not make up his or her mind about the trial
could not make up their minds about the trial
could not make up its mind about the trial
could not make up their mind about the trial
couldn't make up it's mind about the trial
could not make up their minds about the trial
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "members of the jury" we know that we are dealing with a group of people. Therefore, later in the sentence, the corresponding nouns "its mind" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "could not make up their minds about the trial."
Example Question #145 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The interviewer was thrilled by the candidates' personality and professionalism: undoubtedly, that interviewee was the best person for the job, no doubt about it.
the candidates' personality
the candidates' personalities
the candidates personalities
the candidate's personality
the candidates personality
the candidate's personality
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "candidates'" is later referred to by a singular phrase "that interviewee." Since there is no option to replace the singular noun, we know that the candidate in the inititial sentence is meant to be a singular candidate, and as it is written, it's a plural candidate. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "the candidate's personality."
Example Question #146 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The young men were eager to serve the general, and grateful to be the assistant to such a great man.
grateful to be the assistant to such a great man.
grateful to be the assistants to such a great man.
grateful to be assistant to such a great man.
greatful to be the assistant to such a great man.
grateful to be an assistant to such a great man.
grateful to be the assistants to such a great man.
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "men" we know that we are dealing with a group of men. Later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "assistant" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "grateful to be the assistants to such a great man."
Example Question #147 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
All four of the basketball stars sustained serious injuries, and were not the player they could have been thereafter.
and were not the player they could have been, thereafter.
and were not the player they could have been thereafter.
and was not the player he could have been thereafter.
and was not the player they could have been thereafter.
and were not the players they could have been thereafter.
and were not the players they could have been thereafter.
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "stars" we know that we are dealing with a group of stars. Therefore, later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "player" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "and were not the players they could have been thereafter."
Example Question #148 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
As soon as the children heard the sound of the whistle, they grabbed their basket and ran off to search for egg.
they grabbed their basket and ran on to search for egg
they grabbed their basket and ran off to search for egg
they grabbed their baskets and ran off to search for eggs
they ran off to search for egg and grabbed their basket
they grabbed their basket or ran off to search for egg
they grabbed their baskets and ran off to search for eggs
Because the subject of the sentence ("children") is plural, it is presumed each child has their own basket and is looking for eggs. For this reason, the nouns "basket" and "egg" both need to be plural.
Example Question #149 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Paul really wanted to live up to his fathers legacy: he was set on becoming great knights.
he was set on becoming great knights.
he was set on becoming the great knights.
he was becoming great knights.
he was set on becoming a great knight.
he was set on becoming a great knights.
he was set on becoming a great knight.
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "Paul" we know that we are dealing with an individual. Therefore, later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "knights" should be singular. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "he was set on becoming a great knight."
Note that a colon is correctly used to join two independent clauses, where the second clause explains or clarifies the first.
Example Question #150 : Correcting Agreement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become a great performer: they lacked discipline and faith.
The amateur would grow up to become a great performer:
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become great performers:
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become a great performer,
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become a great performer:
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become a great performer;
The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become great performers:
In the sentence above, because the initial noun used is "amateurs" we know that we are dealing with a plural subject. Therefore, later in the sentence, the corresponding noun "performer" should be plural. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "The amateurs wouldn't grow up to become great performers:"
Several amateurs cannot become one great performer (at least with how technology stands at this juncture of history).
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