PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #311 : Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The typical advice to the screenwriter is to keep an audience engaged alert and interested.

Possible Answers:

to keep an audience engaged alert but interested.

to keep an audience engaged, alert, and interested.

to keep an audience engaged alert and interested.

to keep an audience engaged alert, and interested.

to keep an audience engaged alerted and interested.

Correct answer:

to keep an audience engaged, alert, and interested.

Explanation:

The list that finishes the sentence needs to have its three parts, "engaged" and "alert" and "interested," separated by commas. There are no other corrections that need to happen in the sentence. This makes the correct answer choice "to keep an audience engaged, alert, and interested."

Example Question #12 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The key to having a succesful road trip is bringing plenty of medicine snacks and water.

Possible Answers:

plenty medicine snacks and water.

plenty, of medicine snacks and water.

plenty of medicine snacks and water.

plenty of medicine snacks, and water.

plenty of medicine, snacks, and water.

Correct answer:

plenty of medicine, snacks, and water.

Explanation:

A list like the one presented in the underlined portion of the sentence needs to be separated somehow, usually by commas. The only choice that appropriately separates the three items is "plenty of medicine, snacks, and water," which is the correct answer.

Example Question #801 : Act English

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Much of the time, only the most discerning animal trainer cannot tell the difference between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred horses.

Possible Answers:

between thoroughbreds Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

between, thoroughbreds, Arabians and saddlebred horses.

between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred horses.

between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred, horses.

Correct answer:

between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

Explanation:

The three items in the list of the underlined portion of the sentence, "thoroughbreds" and "Arabians" and "saddlebred horses," are lumped together in one large pile. All such lists need to be separated by commas, to show the separate items clearly. The only answer choice that correctly does this is "between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses."

Example Question #312 : Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The writer was considered washed up, with a style that was outdated stale and unsatisfying.

Possible Answers:

with a style, that was outdated stale and unsatisfying.

with a style that was outdated, stale, and, unsatisfying.

with a style that was outdated stale and unsatisfying.

with a style that was outdated stale, and unsatisfying.

with a style that was outdated, stale, and unsatisfying.

Correct answer:

with a style that was outdated, stale, and unsatisfying.

Explanation:

A list like the one that makes up the object of the underlined phrase must be have its items appropriately separated by commas, which the sentence does not do as it is written. The only answer choice that correctly separates the three items by using commas is "with a style that was outdated, stale, and unsatisfying."

Example Question #803 : Act English

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The study of popular culture involves analyzing many different phenomena, including television advertising, and social media.

Possible Answers:

including, television advertising, and social media.

including television, advertising, and social media.

includes television, advertising, and social media.

includes television advertising and social media.

including television advertising, and social media.

Correct answer:

including television, advertising, and social media.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence includes a list of three items. All such lists must have the items in them separated in some fashion; therefore, the correct answer is "including television, advertising, and social media."

Example Question #482 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Reading writing, and arithmetic have long been considered the most basic building blocks of elementary education.

Possible Answers:

Reading, writing, and arithmetic, have

Reading writing and arithmetic, have

Reading writing and arithmetic have

Reading writing, and arithmetic have

Reading, writing, and arithmetic have

Correct answer:

Reading, writing, and arithmetic have

Explanation:

The list that is the subject of the sentence contains three separate elements, but only appropriately separates two of them. All lists of three or more elements need to have commas between each component. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "Reading, writing, and arithmetic have."

Example Question #201 : Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In many thrilling mystery novels the good guy, actually turns out to be the bad guy.

Possible Answers:

mystery novels the good guy actually, turns out

mystery novels the good guy, actually turns out

mystery novels, the good guy actually turns out

mystery, novels the good guy actually turns out

Correct answer:

mystery novels, the good guy actually turns out

Explanation:

Use a comma to separate the introductory phrase "In many thrilling mystery novels" from the independent clause that in this case makes up the rest of the sentence, "the good guy actually turns out to be the bad guy."

Example Question #31 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The coach always careful with his words intentionally avoided saying anything that a reporter could quote in the newspaper.

Possible Answers:

The coach always careful with his words, intentionally avoided

The coach always careful, with his words, intentionally avoided

The coach always careful with his words intentionally avoided

The coach, always careful with his words intentionally avoided

The coach, always careful with his words, intentionally avoided

Correct answer:

The coach, always careful with his words, intentionally avoided

Explanation:

The phrase "always careful with his words" is an interrupting phrase, one that adds information to the sentence, but remains apart from its structure. All interrupting phrases must be set apart from the rest of the sentence by commas. "The coach, always careful with his words, intentionally avoided" is the only answer choice to appropriately use commas around the interrupting phrase.

Example Question #2 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

The group's leader, a long time activist urged the group to take political action.

Possible Answers:

leader, a long time activist urges

leader a long time activist urged

leader, the long time activist urged

leader, a long time activist, urged

leader a long time activist, urged

Correct answer:

leader, a long time activist, urged

Explanation:

The words "a long time activist" are an interrupting phrase, that is a phrase which interrupts the sentence and is not necessary for proper sentence construction, but does provide information. Such phrases must be set off by commas on either end, so "leader, a long time activist, urged" is the best choice among the answers.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

The teacher annoyed with her class got emotional when she was asked about her day.

Possible Answers:

The teacher, annoyed with her class, got emotional

The teacher annoying with her class got emotional

The teacher annoys her class got emotional

The teacher annoyed with her class got emotional

The teacher annoyed with her class gets emotional

Correct answer:

The teacher, annoyed with her class, got emotional

Explanation:

The phrase "annoyed with her class" is what is known as an interrupting phrase. An interrupting phrase provides information, but is not necessary to the construction of the sentence. All interrupting phrases need to be set apart by commas, making "The teacher, annoyed with her class, got emotional" is the correct answer.

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