ACT English : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for ACT English

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Example Questions

Example Question #6 : Errors Involving Hyphens, Dashes, And Parentheses

The word lithophyte refers to a plant that can grow on bare rock. It comes from the Greek words lithos: meaning “stone” and phyte: meaning “plant”.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

lithos, meaning “stone” and phyte, meaning “plant.”

lithos meaning “stone” and phyte meaning “plant.”

lithos (meaning “stone”) and phyte (meaning “plant”).

NO CHANGE

lithos – meaning “stone” and phyte – meaning “plant.”

Correct answer:

lithos (meaning “stone”) and phyte (meaning “plant”).

Explanation:

Here, we have to distinguish between the most important parts of the second sentence and the less important parts. The most important part of the sentence states that the word lithophyte comes from lithos and phyte. The definitions of those Greek words are less important. The definitions can be thought of as asides, so they should be enclosed in parentheses. Though separating out the definitions using commas or dashes might work, a pause is needed between the part of the sentence about lithos and the part about phyte, which is why the other answers do not work.

Example Question #7 : Errors Involving Hyphens, Dashes, And Parentheses

I wanted to bake an apple pie, but I didn't have some of the ingredients cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter, so I first had to make a trip to the nearby grocery store.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

ingredients. Cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter; so I

ingredients—cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter—so I

NO CHANGE

ingredients, cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter, so I

ingredients—cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter, so I

Correct answer:

ingredients—cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter—so I

Explanation:

In this sentence, “cinnamon, nutmeg, and butter” gives extra information about which ingredients were missing; however, this information isn't necessary for understanding the overall meaning of the sentence, so it can be thought of as an aside and enclosed in dashes. Asides have to begin and end with the same type of punctuation, which is why some of the other answers are not right.

Example Question #8 : Errors Involving Hyphens, Dashes, And Parentheses

The correct use of certain types of punctuation—contrary to what many students, adults, and even college professors believe—is not set in stone, but is actually subject to controversy and evolves over time.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

punctuation—contrary to what many students, adults, and even college professors believe: is not

punctuation contrary to what many students, adults and even college professors believe is not

punctuation, contrary to what many students, adults, and even college professors believe: is not

punctuation: contrary to what many students, adults, and even college professors believe, is not

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

This sentence is correct as it is. The part of the sentence enclosed by dashes, “contrary to what many students, adults, and even college professors believe”, gives extra information that can be cut out of the sentence without affecting the sentence's grammar. Asides like these can be enclosed by dashes or parentheses, but they have to be introduced and end with the same kind of punctuation.

Example Question #1131 : Act English

My father spent ten years as a political refugee in a refugee camp in Thailand. He didn't know whether he would ever be allowed to go back to his homeland. He told me, “In the camp we used to sing songs – old chants, laments about separation, and we prayed to see our own villages and fields again.”

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

songs: old chants, laments about separation and we prayed

songs—old chants, laments about separation and we prayed

NO CHANGE

songs. Old chants, laments about separation, and we prayed

songs—old chants, laments about separation—and we prayed

Correct answer:

songs—old chants, laments about separation—and we prayed

Explanation:

Here, the phrase “old chants, laments about separation” is similar to an appositive. It's a phrase that gives more detail about what types of songs the speaker's father sang in the refugee camp. Though this additional information is nice, it isn't necessary to understand the sentence. You could cut out the phrase so that the sentence read, “In the camp we used to sing songs, and we prayed.” So the “old chants, laments about separation” can be understood as an aside, and set apart with dashes. Asides need to open and close with the same type of punctuation, which is why some of the other answer choices would not work.

Example Question #791 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Because it was raining—the elementary school students had recess inside the classroom. Instead of playing ball or swinging, they colored, played games of pretend, and drew on the whiteboard.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Because it was raining,

Because it was raining;

Because it was raining:

Correct answer:

Because it was raining,

Explanation:

Here, the first part of the sentence, “Because it was raining,” is a dependent clause; it cannot stand by itself as a complete sentence. The second part of the sentence, “The elementary school students had recess inside the classroom” is an independent clause; it can stand by itself as a sentence. Connecting these two types of clauses just requires a comma, not any type of fancier punctuation like a dash or a colon.

Example Question #792 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

My mother never wanted me to call her “mom.” Instead, she preferred "Rebecca," she said that name made her feel more like her own person.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”

Possible Answers:

"Rebecca," she said, that name

 

"Rebecca" she said that name

 

NO CHANGE

"Rebecca"—she said that name

 

Correct answer:

"Rebecca"—she said that name

 

Explanation:

Here, we can break up the second sentence into two independent clauses, “Instead, she preferred 'Rebecca'” and “she said that name made her feel more like her own person." Both of these can be sentences in their own right. Two independent clauses can be joined by a comma followed by a conjunction, a dash, a semicolon, or, in certain cases, a colon. The only one of these pieces of punctuation offered as a possible answer is the dash, so that is the right answer.

Example Question #793 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

In the afternoon, I went to the park to watch the pigeons there for a while. I sat on a bench for the better part of an hour. When I finally got up to head home, by then, it was already getting dark, I saw all of the pigeons take to the air in a great commotion.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

 head home—by then, it was already getting dark— 

head home—by then, it was already getting dark,

head home; by then, it was already getting dark: 

head home: by then, it was already getting dark

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

 head home—by then, it was already getting dark— 

Explanation:

In the underlined part of the sentence, the phrase “by then, it was already getting dark” gives extra descriptive information; however, we don't really need this extra information to understand the sentence as a whole. So, we can punctuate it as an aside, by enclosing it within dashes or parentheses. Asides have to begin and end with the same type of punctuation, so the only right answer is the one that surrounds “by then, it was already getting dark” with two dashes.

Example Question #772 : Punctuation Errors

Despite the car salesman's assurances that the used car had been inspected and showed no problems—my brother still had reservations about its safety.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

showed no problems; my brother

showed no problems: my brother

showed no problems. My brother

showed no problems, my brother

Correct answer:

showed no problems, my brother

Explanation:

Here, the first part of the sentence, “Despite the car salesman's assurances that the used car had been inspected and showed no problems,” is a dependent clause. It cannot stand by itself as a complete sentence. The second part of the sentence, “my brother still had reservations about its safety,” is an independent clause, or a clause that can be a complete sentence by itself. To connect these two types of clauses here, we only need a comma.

Example Question #1135 : Act English

As we grow older, we leave behind certain things that defined us in the past: clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas. And leaving behind these things allows us to grow and change.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

things that defined us in the past—clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas, and leaving

things that defined us in the past: clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas—and leaving

things that defined us in the past, clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas; and leaving

things that defined us in the past—clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas—and leaving

Correct answer:

things that defined us in the past—clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas—and leaving

Explanation:

Grammatically, the first sentence is fine as it is; however, the second sentence, as it is written, is a fragment. When we combine these two sentences together, we have to think about what is the most important information, and what is additional, unnecessary information. Here, you could cut out the phrase “clothes, friends, neighborhoods, ideas”, and instead write “we leave behind certain things that defined us in the past, and leaving behind these things allows us to grow and change.” We can think of the phrase we could cut out as an aside, and enclose it between two dashes. We have to introduce and close an aside using the same sort of punctuation, which is why some of the other answer choices don't work.

Example Question #793 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

One summer when I was little, my uncle took me to an ice cream shop. There were so many flavors of ice cream on the menu. Flavors that I had never even imagined, and it took me almost twenty minutes to decide what to get.

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Possible Answers:

flavors of ice cream on the menu: flavors that I had never imagined. And it took me

flavors of ice cream on the menu—flavors that I had never imagined, and it took me

NO CHANGE

flavors of ice cream on the menu—flavors that I had never imagined—and it took me

flavors of ice cream on the menu, flavors that I had never imagined: and it took me

Correct answer:

flavors of ice cream on the menu—flavors that I had never imagined—and it took me

Explanation:

As it is written, the last sentence here is a fragment, so it needs to be corrected. We should connect the second and third sentences together. But how?

The phrase “Flavors that I had never imagined” continues the idea from the second sentence about how the shop had so many flavors of ice cream; however, “Flavors I had never imagined” provides extra information that isn't really necessary to understanding the sentence. We could cut that phrase out, and write, “There were so many flavors of ice cream on the menu, and it took me.” The best way to understand “Flavors I had never imagined” is to think of it as an aside, which should be enclosed in either parentheses or dashes.

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