ACT English : Correcting Grammatical Errors

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Example Question #74 : Usage Errors

Thomas placed his quill on the parchment, looking toward the mantel upon which, earlier that morning, he saw the painting of the old monastic saint, Benedict of Nursia. To his surprise, the mantel was empty, not having any items on it’s narrow flat surface. As the image had been a gift from his old schoolmaster; he was concerned at the absence of the item.

He asked himself “Where could it have went?” Then, he gathered together his work and decided to ask one of his officemates about the cherished image. Leaving the room, he entered the foyer and turning to the secretary asked about the whereabouts of the others’.

The secretary looked at Thomas’ imposing figure and answered, “A group of the professors departed earlier for a University meeting. However, I cant recall exactly when they departed.” Although Thomas was not known for being passionate, the young secretary could see that he was agitated than usual.

The older man did not wish to worry his younger coworker. Smiling slightly, he said, “Don’t worry, Reginald. I seem to have misplaced my image of Benedict, though I know not how.” He continued by telling the younger man the chronology of events. Suddenly, the detailed recounting jogged the latters’ memory. He forgot an obvious detail that he only now remembered.

Looking at Thomas in embarrassment, Reginald, said, “Earlier this afternoon, I came in to your working area take the painting. Bonaventure had come to visit and asked to borrow it. You were so engrossed by you’re work that I did not want to disturb you. He will be stopping by to see you and I later today, so we can ask him to return it.”

What is the best form of the underlined selection, "He forgot an obvious detail"?

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

He had forgotten an obvious detail

He was forgetting an obvious detail

He forgot an obvious detail,

Correct answer:

He had forgotten an obvious detail

Explanation:

As written, the problem with the sentence is the tense of the verb "forgot." The action in the sentence indicates that ealier Reginald had forgotten something that he remembered only at that time. The voice of narration has placed the general events of the narrative in the past. (While describing the remembering, the author uses "remembered.") In order to place "forgot" further back into the past, it is necessary to use the past perfect form, which uses the past tense of the helper verb "to have" (i.e., here, "had") and the perfect passive participle (i.e., here, "forgotten").

Example Question #332 : Word Usage Errors

Adapted from Sozein ta Phainomena: An Essay Concerning Physical Theory from Plato to Galileo by Pierre Duhem (translated by Matthew Minerd)

What are physical theories’ value? What relation does it have with metaphysical explication? These are questions that are greatly stirred and raised in our days. However, as with other questions, they are in no manner completely new. It is a question that has been posed in all ages. As long as there has been a science of nature, they have been posed. Granted, the form that they assume changes somewhat from one age to another, for they borrow their various appearance from the scientific vocabularies of their times. Nevertheless, one need only dismiss this outer vestment in order to recognize that they remain essentially identical to each other.

The science of nature offers us up until the 17th century at least, very few parties that managed to create theories expressed in a mathematical language. . . . If we leave aside several exceptions, an historical investigation places before our eyes strong evidence of a type science that would indeed be a prediction of modern mathematical physics. This science is astronomy. That is, where we would say, “Physical theory,” the Greek, Muslim, Medieval, and early Renaissance sages would say, “Astronomy.” However, for these earlier thinkers, the other parts of the study of nature did not attain a similar degree of perfection. That is, they did not express the laws of experience in a mathematical manner similar to that found in astronomy. In addition, during this time, the study of the material realities generally were not separated from what we would call today, “metaphysics.”

Thus, you can see why the question that concerns us takes two related, though different forms. Today, we ask, “What are the relations between metaphysics and physical theory?” However, in past days; indeed, for nearly two thousand years; it was formulated instead as, “What are the relations between physics and astronomy?”

What is the tense of the verb “did not attain”?

Possible Answers:

past continuous

present

simple past

past perfect

Correct answer:

simple past

Explanation:

The form "did . . . attain" is a form of the past tense, indicating that something occurred in the past and was finished at that time. This use of the past tense is called the "simple past," since it neither indicates a continuous action nor does it assert that an activity happened before another one in the past (as, for example, in the case of "had attained").

Example Question #75 : Usage Errors

Adapted from “The Fisherman and His Wife" in German Fairy Tales and Popular Stories by Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm (trans. Taylor, ed. 1864)

The next morning, when Dame Ilsabill had awoke, it was broad daylight, and she jogged her husband, the fisherman, with her elbow, and said, "Get up husband and bestir yourself, for we must be king of all the land."

"Wife, wife," said the man, “why should we wish to be king? I will not be king."

"Then I will," said she.

"But, wife," said the fisherman, "how can you be king? The fish cannot make you a king."

“Husband," said she, "say no more about it; instead, go and try! I will be king." So the man went away quite sorrowful to think that his wife should want to be king. This time, the sea looked a dark gray color, and was overspread with curling waves and ridges of foam as he cried out, “O man of the sea! Hearken to me! My wife Ilsabill will have her own will, and hath sent me to beg a boon of thee!"

"Well, what would she have now," said the fish?

"Alas!" said the poor man, 'my wife wants to be king."

"Go home," said the fish, “for she is king already."

Then, the fisherman had went home. As he came close to the palace he saw a troop of soldiers, and heard the sound of drums and trumpets. When he went in, he saw his wife sitting on a high throne of gold and diamonds, with a golden crown upon her head. On each side of she stood six fair maidens, each a head taller than the other. 

What is the best form of the underlined selection, "had awoke"?

Possible Answers:

had awoken

had been awoken

NO CHANGE

awoke

Correct answer:

awoke

Explanation:

There are two errors in the text, only one of which needs to be corrected. As written, the sentence improperly forms the past perfect. The form "awoke" is the past tense of the verb awake, but you need to use the perfect passive participle to form the past perfect. (Here, that would be "had awoken.") However, there is no need to indicate an "early past action" (which is what the past perfect does). The sentence merely states that when—meaning at the same time—she woke, it was daylight.

Example Question #76 : Usage Errors

Adapted from “The Fisherman and His Wife" in German Fairy Tales and Popular Stories by Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm (trans. Taylor, ed. 1864)

The next morning, when Dame Ilsabill had awoke, it was broad daylight, and she jogged her husband, the fisherman, with her elbow, and said, "Get up husband and bestir yourself, for we must be king of all the land."

"Wife, wife," said the man, “why should we wish to be king? I will not be king."

"Then I will," said she.

"But, wife," said the fisherman, "how can you be king? The fish cannot make you a king."

“Husband," said she, "say no more about it; instead, go and try! I will be king." So the man went away quite sorrowful to think that his wife should want to be king. This time, the sea looked a dark gray color, and was overspread with curling waves and ridges of foam as he cried out, “O man of the sea! Hearken to me! My wife Ilsabill will have her own will, and hath sent me to beg a boon of thee!"

"Well, what would she have now," said the fish?

"Alas!" said the poor man, 'my wife wants to be king."

"Go home," said the fish, “for she is king already."

Then, the fisherman had went home. As he came close to the palace he saw a troop of soldiers, and heard the sound of drums and trumpets. When he went in, he saw his wife sitting on a high throne of gold and diamonds, with a golden crown upon her head. On each side of she stood six fair maidens, each a head taller than the other. 

What is the appropriate form for the underlined verb "had went"?

Possible Answers:

had gone

went

goes

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

went

Explanation:

As written, there is a general syntactic error with the underlined verb, namely the use of the past tense "went" with the helping verb "had." This is an attempt to form the past perfect tense in the wrong manner. To form such a composite tense, you must use the perfect passive participle, "gone." However, there is no justification for the use of the past perfect in this sentence. The past perfect is used when you indicate that one action precedes another in the past: e.g. "Alex ate his food after he had prepared it."  Here, the sentence merely makes the simple declaration: "the fishermen went home." Although this does precede the other actions, in the sentence itself, it is merely the statement of a simple fact, not related to any other verbs in the given sentence. (There are no other verbs in the simple sentence.)

Example Question #335 : Word Usage Errors

Adapted from “The Nose Tree” in German Fairy Tales and Popular Stories by Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm (trans. Taylor, ed. 1864)

Then the king made known to all his kingdom, that whomever would heal her of this dreadful disease should be richly rewarded. Many tried, but the princess got no relief. Now the old soldier dressed himself up very sprucely as a doctor, and said he could cure her. Therefore, he chopped up some of the apple, and, to punish her a little more, gave her a dose, saying he would call to-morrow and see her again. The morrow came, and, of course, instead of being better, the nose had been growing on all night as before; and the poor princess was in a dreadful fright. So the doctor then chopped up a very little of the pear and gave it to her. He said that he was sure that it would help, and he would call again the next day. Next day came, and the nose was to be sure a little smaller. However, it was bigger than when the doctor first began to meddle with it.

Then he thought to him, "I must frighten this cunning princess a little more before I am able to get what I want from her." Therefore, he gave her another dose of the apple and said he would call on the morrow. The morrow came, and the nose was ten times bad as before.

"My good lady," said the doctor, "Something works against my medicine and is to strong for it. However, I know by the force of my art that it is this, you have stolen goods about you. I am certain of it. If you do not give them back, I can do nothing for you."

The princess denied very stoutly that she had anything of the kind.

"Very well," said the doctor, "you may do as you please, but I am sure I am correct. You will die if you do not own it." Then he went to the king, and told him how the matter stood.

"Daughter," said he, "send back the cloak, the purse, and the horn, that you stole from the right owners."

Then she ordered her maid to fetch all three and gave them to the doctor, and begged him to give them back to the soldiers. The moment he had them safe, he gave her a whole pear to eat, and the nose came right. And as for the doctor, he put on the cloak, wished the king and all his court a good day and was soon with his two brothers. They lived from that time happily at home in their palace, except when they took an airing to see the world in their coach with their three dapple-grey horses.

Which is the best form of the underlined selection, "first began"?

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

was beginning

had first began

had first begun

Correct answer:

had first begun

Explanation:

Notice the sequence of events in the sentence: (1) First, the soldier dressed as a doctor began to meddle with the nose. Then, (2) it was bigger, even after that meddling. To express the fact that (1) was earlier in the past, you need to use the past perfect tense. This is formed by using "had" with the perfect passive participle "begun." (Note, that this participle is "begun" and not "began.")

Example Question #336 : Word Usage Errors

An adapted selection from The Prince by Niccolò Machiavelli (1532)

Now, if you will consider what was the nature of the government of Darius, you will find it similar to the kingdom of the Turk. Therefore it was only necessarily for Alexander, first to overthrow him in the field, and then to take the country from him. After this victory, Darius being killed, the state remained secure in Alexander’s power, for the reasons noted earlier. If his successors had been united they would have enjoyed it securely and at their ease, for there was no tumults raised in the kingdom except those they provoked themselves. However, it is impossible to hold with such tranquility states constituted like that of France. Hence arose those frequent rebellions against the Roman’s in Spain, France, and Greece, owing to the many principalities there were in these latter states, of which the Romans always held an insecure possession; however, with the power and long continuance of the empire, the memory of them passed away, and the Romans then became secure possessors. When fighting afterwards amongst themselves, each one was able to attach to himself his own parts of the country, according to the authority he had assumed there; and the family of the former lord being exterminated, none other than the Romans were acknowledged.

When these things are remembered, no one will marvel at the ease with which Alexander held the Empire of Asia or at the difficulties that others have had to keep an acquisition. This is not occasioned by the little or abundance of ability in the conqueror but, instead, by the want of uniformity in the subject state.

Which of the following best replaces the underlined selection, "and the family of the former lord being exterminated"?

Possible Answers:

and, after the family of the former lord had been exterminated,

NO CHANGE

and, after the family of the former lord was exterminated,

and, after the family of the former lord was being exterminated,

Correct answer:

and, after the family of the former lord had been exterminated,

Explanation:

The underlined selection is a type of "absolute" expression, though it does not use its participles in a completely correct manner. If we were following the completely proper usages for this kind of expression, we would say, "And, with the family of the former lord having been exterminated." This is very awkward, however. (The general use of absolute expressions can be awkward in English. It is far more common in Latin and some authors import it into English from Latin because of their familiarity with Latin.) The idea expressed here is: (1) first, the family of the former lord is exterminated, and (2) after that, Roman authority is acknowledged. To express this sense of (1) being "further in the past," it is necessary to use the past perfect tense.

Example Question #337 : Word Usage Errors

Adapted from The Discourse on Method by René Descartes (1637; 1899, ed. Eliot)

From my childhood, I have been familiar with letters; and as I was given to believe that by their help a clear and certain knowledge of all that is useful in life might be acquired, I was ardently desirously for instruction in them. But as soon as I had finished the entire course of study, at the close of which it is customarily to be admitted into the order of the learned, I completely changed my opinion. I found myself involved in so many doubts and errors and was convinced that I had not advanced in all my attempts at learning. At every turn, ignorance and unknowing was to be discovered. And yet, I was studying in one of the most celebrated Schools in Europe. I thought there must be learned men in it, at least if such were anywhere to be found. I had been taught all that others learned there. However, not contented with the sciences actually taught us, I had, in addition, read all the books that had fallen into my hands, studying those branches that are judged to be the most curious and rare. I knew the judgment that others had formed of me. I did not find that I was considered inferior to my fellows, although there were among them some whom were already marked out to fill the places of our instructors. And, finally, our era appeared to me as flourishing and fertile with powerful minds as any preceding one. I was thus led to take the liberty of judging of all other men by myself. Furthermore, I concluded that there was no science in existence that was of such a nature as I had previously been given to believe.

Which is the best form of the underlined selection "as soon as I had finished the entire course of study"?

Possible Answers:

as soon as I was finishing the entire course of study

NO CHANGE

as soon as I finished the entire course of study

as soon as I have finished the entire course of study

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

To see the correct answer, simplify the syntax of the sentence: "As soon as I had finished the entire course of study, . . . I completely changed my opinion." There is a temporal sequence indicated here. The author first finished his course of study, then he changed his opinion. (Although it happened immediately after finishing, it did happen after.) To express this temporal sequence in the past, you need to use the past perfect for the verb "finished"—"had finished."

Example Question #337 : Word Usage Errors

Adapted from The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde (1890)

As they entered, they saw Dorian Gray who was seated at the piano his back to them, turning over the pages of a volume of Schumann's "Forest Scenes." "You must lend me these, Basil," he cried. "I want to learn them. They are perfectly charming." "That entirely depends on how you sit to-day, Dorian."

"Oh, I am tired of sitting, and I don't want a life-sized portrait of myself," answered the lad, swinging round on the music-stool in a willful, petulant manner. When he caught sight of Lord Henry, a faint blush colored his cheeks for a moment, and he started up. "I beg your pardon, Basil. I did’nt know you had any one with you."

"This is Lord Henry Wotton, Dorian, an old Oxford friend of mine. I have just been telling him what a capital sitter you were, and now you have spoiled everything."

"You have not spoiled my pleasure in meeting you, Mr. Gray," said Lord Henry, stepping forward and extended his hand. "My aunt has often spoken to me about you. You are one of her favorites, and, I am afraid, one of her victims also."

"I am in Lady Agatha's black books at present," answered Dorian with a funny look of penitence. "I promised to go to a club in Whitechapel with her last Tuesday, and I really forgot all about it. We were to have played a duet together: three duets, I believe. I don't know what she will say to me. I am far too frightened to call."

Which of the following is the best form of the underlined selection, "and now you have spoiled everything"?

Possible Answers:

and, now, you do spoil everything

and now you are spoiling everything

NO CHANGE

and now you had spoiled everything

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

As written, there is no problem with the sentence. Although the speaker says that Dorian has "now" spoiled everything, the sense is, "At this time, it is true that you have [already] spoiled what I told him." The verb is a present perfect, indicating something that Dorian did at a point in the past. (It does not specify exactly when in the past he did it, but we can tell this by the context.)

Example Question #81 : Usage Errors

Adapted from The Varieties of Religious Experience by William James (1902)

In the matter of religions, it is particularly easy distinguishing the too orders of question. Every religious phenomenon has its history and its derivation from natural antecedents. What is nowadays called the higher criticism of the Bible are only a study of the Bible from this existential point of view, neglected to much by the earlier church. Under just what biographic conditions did the sacred writers bring forth their various contributions to the holy volume? What had they exactly in their several individual minds, when they delivered their utterances? These are manifestly questions of historical fact, and one does not see how the answer to it can decide offhand the still further question: of what use should such a volume, with its manner of coming into existence so defined, be to us as a guide to life and a revelation? To answer this other question we must have already in our mind some sort of a general theory as to what the peculiarities in a thing should be which give it value for purposes of revelation; and this theory itself would be what I just called a spiritual judgment. Combining it with our existential judgment, we might indeed deduce another spiritual judgment as to the Bibles’ worth. Thus, if our theory of revelation-value were to affirm that any book, to possess it, must have been composed automatically or not by the free caprice of the writer, or that it must exhibit no scientific and historic errors and express no local or personal passions, the Bible would probably fare ill at our hands. But if, on the other hand, our theory should allow that a book may well be a revelation in spite of errors and passions and deliberate human composition, if only it be a true record of the inner experiences of great-souled persons wrestling with the crises of his fate, than the verdict would be much favorable. You see that the existential facts by itself are insufficient for determining the value; and the best adepts of the higher criticism accordingly never confound the existential with the spiritual problem. With the same conclusions of fact before them, some take one view, and some another, of the Bible's value as a revelation, according as their spiritual judgment as to the foundation of values differ.

What is the best form of the underlined selection, "what biographic conditions did the sacred writers bring forth"?

Possible Answers:

what biographic conditions do the sacred writers bring forth

what biographic conditions does the sacred writers bring forth

what biographic conditions has the sacred writers bring forth

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

Two things can be considered in answering this question. First, the author clearly wishes to speak of the biblical writers in the past tense. He does this in the second question following this first one. Additionally, notice that "does" does not agree with the subject: "the sacred writers." Do not be fooled in sentences like this in which the subject is in an inverted position. This point aside, however, the main matter is the choice of tense.

Example Question #81 : Usage Errors

Which option is the BEST for the underlined portion of the passage?

To begin I should explain how it is that I am a sports-lover but lazy.  I have tried as many sports as have been possible in my life and I have enjoyed all of them.  I had competed in national gymnastics which is probably the most holistically challenging for ten years.  This sport has taken precedence in all of middle and high school for me.  

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

This sport has took precedence

This sport has take precedence

This sport have taken precedence

This sport had taken precedence

Correct answer:

This sport had taken precedence

Explanation:

The sentence is in reference to something that began and ended sometime in the past.  The previous sentence had used the past-perfect with "had competed," so this sentence that is referring to the same time period should retain the same verb tense.

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