SAT Writing : SAT Writing

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #292 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Scientists debate whether the primary reason for the extinction of the prehistoric wooly mammoth has been overhunting by humans or climate changeNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

whether

climate change

reason for

has been 

Correct answer:

has been 

Explanation:

This sentence uses the incorrect tense of the verb “to be.” The corrected sentence reads: Scientists debate whether the primary reason for the extinction of the prehistoric wooly mammoth was overhunting by humans or climate change.

Example Question #42 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Bob agonized over the logic puzzle that Charlie had been giving him, and Charlie took delight in his agony. No error

Possible Answers:

his

and

had been giving

No error

agonized over

Correct answer:

had been giving

Explanation:

This sentence uses the wrong verb tense. “Had been giving” is clunky and unnecessary. The corrected sentence reads: Bob agonized over the logic puzzle that Charlie had given him, and Charlie took delight in his agony.

Example Question #43 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

George was desperately excited to go caroling through the snow, but unfortunately it being July and he would have to waitNo error 

Possible Answers:

No error

would have to wait

being

desperately

through the snow

Correct answer:

being

Explanation:

This sentence uses the wrong form of the verb “to be.” “Was” is a better choice than “being” in this case. The corrected sentence reads: George was desperately excited to go caroling through the snow, but unfortunately it was July and he would have to wait.

Example Question #44 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

She spent the afternoon wondering if having been gone to Scotland during the summer was worth the troubleNo error

Possible Answers:

wondering if

was

having been gone

No error

worth the trouble

Correct answer:

having been gone

Explanation:

This sentence uses a convoluted form of the verb. One way to correct the sentence reads: She spent the afternoon wondering if going to Scotland during the summer was worth the trouble.

 

Example Question #871 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Turning around, Jonathan saw that the entire back wall of the garden fence has been destroyed in the blast. No error

Possible Answers:

that

Turning around

No error

entire back wall

has been destroyed

Correct answer:

has been destroyed

Explanation:

The timeline of verb tenses in this sentence is not logical. The corrected sentence reads, "Turning around, Jonathan saw that the entire back wall of the garden fence had been destroyed in the blast." 

Example Question #872 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The natural conclusion to draw would being that the goldfish jumped out of the tank, stole some pretzels for the road, unlocked the door, and ran away to join the circus. No error

Possible Answers:

natural

and ran away

for the road

No error

would being

Correct answer:

would being

Explanation:

This sentence uses an incorrectly constructed verb (“would being”). The corrected sentence reads, "The natural conclusion to draw would be that the goldfish jumped out of the tank, stole some pretzels for the road, unlocked the door, and ran away to join the circus."

 

Example Question #873 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although Steven does not usually have an appetite, he has ate more tonight than anyone else at the dinner. No error

Possible Answers:

he

than

No error

Although

has ate

Correct answer:

has ate

Explanation:

The phrase "has ate" should be "has eaten." "Eaten" is the proper participle for the present perfect form.

Example Question #874 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Marketers are finding greater success making sales when they phoned people in the morning rather than late in the afternoon. No error

Possible Answers:

when

rather than

greater

phoned

No error

Correct answer:

phoned

Explanation:

The sentence is present tense, so use "phone "instead of "phoned."

Example Question #875 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The undercover agents chose not to apprehend the suspect in the mall that afternoon, but instead apprehended him at the harbor before he is boarding a ship to Morocco. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

is boarding

in the mall

but instead

not

Correct answer:

is boarding

Explanation:

"Is boarding" should be "boarded" because it matches the tense of other verbs in the sentence.

Example Question #876 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Despite a strict ban and severe punishments, the circulation of illegal jokes remains a thriving part of that country's underground cultureNo error

Possible Answers:

remains

of

No error

Despite

culture

Correct answer:

remains

Explanation:

For the timeline of the sentence to make sense, "remain" should be changed to past tense, because it occured before the Soviet Union collapsed. A simple correction would be "remained."

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