SAT Writing : SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While there are advantages to doing freelance work, it is outweighed by the stress of having an inconsistent income. No error

Possible Answers:

inconsistent

are

stress of

it

No error

Correct answer:

it

Explanation:

The underlined word, "it," refers to the "advantages of freelance work," which is plural. Therefore, "it," a singular pronoun, should be changed to the plural pronoun "they."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all

A psychotherapist always needs to be sure that they are meeting the emotional needs of clients by developing a keen awareness of other people's feelings. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

always

of clients

a keen awareness of

they are

Correct answer:

they are

Explanation:

In this sentence, the plural pronoun “they” does not correspond to the singular antecedent “psychotherapist.” To correct the sentence's error, one would need to replace "they" with "he or she."

Example Question #25 : Identifying Pronoun Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Despite an incredible investment of time and energy into the project, Gary was disappointed with their final result. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

despite

their

into

was

Correct answer:

their

Explanation:

In this sentence, “their” does not correspond to the antecedent “Gary.” Since we can reasonably infer that Gary is male, the correct version of this sentence would use the pronoun "his" instead of "their."

Example Question #191 : Psat Writing Skills

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The web designer never received their pay for the work completed on the restaurant’s webpage because the owners had declared bankruptcy. No error

Possible Answers:

never

No error

declared

because

their

Correct answer:

their

Explanation:

In this sentence, “their” does not correspond to the antecedent “web designer.” The correct version of this sentence would use the phrase "his or her" or avoid use of a possessive personal pronoun altogether.

Example Question #192 : Psat Writing Skills

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It is the flight attendant’s responsibility to make sure that they inform all passengers of the necessary safety precautions to takeNo error

Possible Answers:

It is

of the 

to take

they inform

No error

Correct answer:

they inform

Explanation:

In this sentence, the plural pronoun “they” does not correspond to the singular antecedent “flight attendant.” To correct the error, one would need to change "they inform" to "he or she informs."

Example Question #194 : Psat Writing Skills

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Jackie thought that the new traffic circle in the neighborhood was a terrible idea; Franklin thought it tooNo error

Possible Answers:

too

was

it

No error

that

Correct answer:

it

Explanation:

The wrong pronoun is used here after "thought," since we do not have a specific "it" to which to refer. The corrected sentence reads, "Jackie thought that the new traffic circle in the neighborhood was a terrible idea; Franklin thought so too."

Example Question #731 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

A new player might take some time to internalize all of the complicated rules of the game, but they will become an expert with some practice. No error

Possible Answers:

but

take some time

complicated

No error

they

Correct answer:

they

Explanation:

Here, the pronoun “they” does not agree in number with its antecedent, “a new player.” The pronoun is plural and the antecedent is singular. The corrected sentence might read: "A new player might take some time to internalize all of the complicated rules of the game, but he or she will become an expert with some practice."

Example Question #2 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When guests sleep in my room, they can have trouble sleeping through the night because you can hear the highway outside my window. No error

Possible Answers:

outside

you

No error 

through 

they can 

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

In this sentence, the people who have trouble sleeping are the "guests." Therefore, in order to maintain continuity within the sentence, "you" should not be used, as "you" does not refer to the "guests." The plural third-person pronoun "they" should be used instead.

Example Question #13 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Any leader who inspires their constituents must do so by cultivating a sense of national pride and maintaining peace with neighboring states. No error

Possible Answers:

do so

with

No error

maintaining

their

Correct answer:

their

Explanation:

The possessive pronoun "their" in this sentence is meant to refer to the noun "leader." Because"their" is plural whereas "leader" is singular, the pronoun should be singular as well—"his or her" instead of "their."

The answer choice "do so" is correct because it simply replaces a verb phrase mentioned earlier in the sentence—"inspire their constituents."

The answer choice "maintaining" is correct because it preserves the parallel structure started by "cultivating."

The answer choice "with" is correct because to say "peace with" something or someone is the proper use of the idiom. 

Example Question #12 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The members of the cleaning crew made the event enjoyable and safe for all, and it deserves our thanks. No error

Possible Answers:

enjoyable and safe

No error

it deserves

of

made

Correct answer:

it deserves

Explanation:

In this sentence, it is easy to think that "it" refers to "cleaning crew," but since "cleaning crew" appears as the object of the preposition "of the cleaning crew" in the subject "the members of the cleaning crew," the plural noun "members" is actually the referent of the singular pronoun "it." To correct the sentence's error, "it" should be changed to "they," which agrees with plural antecedents. The corrected sentence reads, "The members of the cleaning crew made the event enjoyable and safe for all, and they deserve our thanks."

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