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Example Questions

Example Question #11 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Brody: needs to be kinder to his classmates, they are very disappointed in his demeanor. No error

Possible Answers:

Brody:

kinder

No error

classmates, they

disappointed

Correct answer:

Brody:

Explanation:

You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own. As such, the colon in the sentence above is incorrect and should be deleted. The colon in the example sentence comes in the middle of a clause, and thus is obviously incorrect.

Example Question #12 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It has been incredibly rainy in Chicago lately: I'm worried that there might be flooding. No error

Possible Answers:

lately:

No error

flooding.

It has been incredibly

Chicago

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own (an independent clause, in other words). As such, the sentence above is correct as written. As a rule of thumb, you should not use a colon if you could not put a period in its place, delete everything after it, and still have a full sentence.

Example Question #13 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Nobody knows if Leon is going to make it to the show tonight: he bought a ticket but hasn't been picking up his phone all afternoon. No error

Possible Answers:

tonight:

hasn't been 

is going to

Nobody knows

No error

Correct answer:

tonight:

Explanation:

Punctuation is the issue here. A colon is used to introduce a list, which it does not do here. The appropriate punctuation to use here would be a semicolon, which is used to separate two independent clauses (such as these).

Example Question #14 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It’s getting late, and we still need to review the proposal if we want: the committee to understand it’s full potential. No error

Possible Answers:

late

want:

it’s full potential

No error

It’s getting

Correct answer:

it’s full potential

Explanation:

In this sentence, the colon is placed after want, in the middle of a clause. Colons should come after an independent clause, never in the middle of a dependent or independent clause.

Example Question #15 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I’m wondering if: we should introduce the unit on photosynthesis, the chapter on cellular respiration, or the monocot experiment. No error

Possible Answers:

monocot

if:

No error

respiration,

the unit on photosynthesis

Correct answer:

if:

Explanation:

Here, no colon is necessary. Although the sentence is presenting a list, the part preceding the list is not a complete sentence, so the colon should not be used.

Example Question #16 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When you behave this badly in class: it reflects poorly on the entire school. NO ERROR

Possible Answers:

NO ERROR

When you

reflects

class:

entire school.

Correct answer:

class:

Explanation:

Colons may be used to separate clauses in sentences, but only where you would also be able to use a period. You cannot use a period in the place of the colon in the sentence above, so that colon is erroneous. The sentence should read, "When you behave this badly in class, it reflects poorly on the entire school."

Example Question #17 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following; a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper. NO ERROR

 

Possible Answers:

a posterboard, and a paper.

complete

following;

projects,

NO ERROR

Correct answer:

following;

Explanation:

Colons are used prior to lists of things in sentences, rather than semi-colons; therefore, the semi-colon in the sentence above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following: a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper."

 

Example Question #18 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I'd like to take you to: the movies or the park today. NO ERROR

 

Possible Answers:

movies

NO ERROR

I'd like 

to:

today.

Correct answer:

to:

Explanation:

Colons may be used prior to lists of things in sentences; however, this is only the case if there are three or more items in the list. As the list in the sentence above has only two items (the movies and the park), the colon above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "I'd like to take you to the movies or the park today."

Example Question #19 : Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Stop being to rude to: Tommy he is a very nice young man. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

to:

Stop being

he is

nice young man.

Correct answer:

to:

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list in a sentence, and the second is to join two independent clauses of a sentence, as long as the second clause explains or expands on the first clause. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used, after an independent clause, and before a second independent clause that explains, or directly expands on the first clause. The colon in the above sentence is incorrectly placed. The best way to correct the sentence above is:

"Stop being to rude to Tommy: he is a very nice young man."

Example Question #123 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

There are only three things that my wife hates more than snakes, birds, bears, and her mother. No error

Possible Answers:

snakes,

my wife

There are only

No error

bears, and her mother.

Correct answer:

snakes,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of items a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence, where the second clause explains, expands on, or clarifies the first clause. Colons cannot be used to introduce a list when the last word of the first clause is a verb, rather a comma is required. In the sentence above, however, the last word of the first clause is a noun, so a colon is the best way to introduce the list.

The corrected sentence reads: "There are only three things that my wife hates more than snakes, birds, bears, and her mother."

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