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Example Question #11 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Brody: needs to be kinder to his classmates, they are very disappointed in his demeanor. No error
Brody:
kinder
No error
classmates, they
disappointed
Brody:
You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own. As such, the colon in the sentence above is incorrect and should be deleted. The colon in the example sentence comes in the middle of a clause, and thus is obviously incorrect.
Example Question #12 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
It has been incredibly rainy in Chicago lately: I'm worried that there might be flooding. No error
lately:
No error
flooding.
It has been incredibly
Chicago
No error
You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own (an independent clause, in other words). As such, the sentence above is correct as written. As a rule of thumb, you should not use a colon if you could not put a period in its place, delete everything after it, and still have a full sentence.
Example Question #13 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Nobody knows if Leon is going to make it to the show tonight: he bought a ticket but hasn't been picking up his phone all afternoon. No error
tonight:
hasn't been
is going to
Nobody knows
No error
tonight:
Punctuation is the issue here. A colon is used to introduce a list, which it does not do here. The appropriate punctuation to use here would be a semicolon, which is used to separate two independent clauses (such as these).
Example Question #14 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
It’s getting late, and we still need to review the proposal if we want: the committee to understand it’s full potential. No error
late
want:
it’s full potential
No error
It’s getting
it’s full potential
In this sentence, the colon is placed after want, in the middle of a clause. Colons should come after an independent clause, never in the middle of a dependent or independent clause.
Example Question #15 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I’m wondering if: we should introduce the unit on photosynthesis, the chapter on cellular respiration, or the monocot experiment. No error
monocot
if:
No error
respiration,
the unit on photosynthesis
if:
Here, no colon is necessary. Although the sentence is presenting a list, the part preceding the list is not a complete sentence, so the colon should not be used.
Example Question #16 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
When you behave this badly in class: it reflects poorly on the entire school. NO ERROR
NO ERROR
When you
reflects
class:
entire school.
class:
Colons may be used to separate clauses in sentences, but only where you would also be able to use a period. You cannot use a period in the place of the colon in the sentence above, so that colon is erroneous. The sentence should read, "When you behave this badly in class, it reflects poorly on the entire school."
Example Question #17 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following; a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper. NO ERROR
a posterboard, and a paper.
complete
following;
projects,
NO ERROR
following;
Colons are used prior to lists of things in sentences, rather than semi-colons; therefore, the semi-colon in the sentence above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following: a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper."
Example Question #18 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I'd like to take you to: the movies or the park today. NO ERROR
movies
NO ERROR
I'd like
to:
today.
to:
Colons may be used prior to lists of things in sentences; however, this is only the case if there are three or more items in the list. As the list in the sentence above has only two items (the movies and the park), the colon above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "I'd like to take you to the movies or the park today."
Example Question #19 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Stop being to rude to: Tommy he is a very nice young man. No error
No error
to:
Stop being
he is
nice young man.
to:
Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list in a sentence, and the second is to join two independent clauses of a sentence, as long as the second clause explains or expands on the first clause. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used, after an independent clause, and before a second independent clause that explains, or directly expands on the first clause. The colon in the above sentence is incorrectly placed. The best way to correct the sentence above is:
"Stop being to rude to Tommy: he is a very nice young man."
Example Question #123 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
There are only three things that my wife hates more than snakes, birds, bears, and her mother. No error
snakes,
my wife
There are only
No error
bears, and her mother.
snakes,
Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of items a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence, where the second clause explains, expands on, or clarifies the first clause. Colons cannot be used to introduce a list when the last word of the first clause is a verb, rather a comma is required. In the sentence above, however, the last word of the first clause is a noun, so a colon is the best way to introduce the list.
The corrected sentence reads: "There are only three things that my wife hates more than snakes, birds, bears, and her mother."
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