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Example Question #71 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
"Oh boy;" exclaimed the child. "I wonder what will happen now?" No error
"I wonder
child
"Oh boy;"
now?"
No error
"Oh boy;"
Semicolons are primarily used to separate independent clauses. It is always incorrect to use a semicolon to separate a dependent clause, interrupting, or introductory clause. The example sentence could be fixed by replacing the semicolon with a comma.
Example Question #72 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The man wore a long, black coat; he looked quite ominous in the moonlight. No error
ominous
No error
black coat;
moonlight.
The man
No error
Semicolons are primarily used to separate independent clauses. The semicolon in the example sentence is used correctly, and there are no other errors. The sentence is correct as written.
Example Question #73 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Even though he already finished his homework; Bob studied for another hour to prepare for his upcoming test. No error
No error
upcoming test
Even though
homework; Bob
to prepare
homework; Bob
A semicolon is not appropriate here because semicolons can only be used to separate two complete, but related sentences. To separate a dependent clause (in this case a dependent introductory clause) from a main clause a comma is needed.
Example Question #74 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Joanna, repulsed, turned down the offer to eat ostrich meat; she had grown out of her vegetarianism, but this was a bit too extreme for her. No error
Joanna, repulsed,
too
No error
had grown
meat;
No error
There is no error here. The semicolon appropriately separates two independent clauses (grammatically complete sentences that could stand on their own). The commas around the adjective "repulsed" are appropriate as well. "Too" is the correct spelling, and "had grown" is the appropriate tense to use given the past tense already established by the main verb "turned down."
Example Question #75 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error.
Due to the unresponsiveness of the school board and its inability to make decisions in a speedy manner; Sarah's mother decided to take action on her own. No error
its
speedy
No error
her
manner;
manner;
This question requires knowledge of when to use semicolons. Semicolons are used to link two independent clauses together, i.e. two thoughts that could be seperate sentences but have closely linked ideas. In this case, "Due to the unresponsiveness of the school board and its inability to make decisions in a speedy manner" is a sentence fragment and could not stand on its own—it is not a complete thought without including the information in the second half of the sentence. A revised sentence would look like this: "Due to the unresponsiveness of the school board and its inability to make decisions in a speedy manner, Sarah's mother decided to take action on her own."
Example Question #76 : Identifying Sentence Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The man walked into the store; bought his groceries, and went back home. NO ERROR
groceries,
store; bought
back home.
The man
NO ERROR
store; bought
Introductory or interrupting phrases, i.e. phrases that are subordinate and add information to a sentence but are not necessary to the sentence being complete, must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. Using a semi-colon for such a purpose is erroenous. In the sentence above "store; bought" should read "store, bought."
Example Question #571 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I really enjoy eating out with most of my friends; but I don't enjoy spending time with Emmett. NO ERROR
friends;
NO ERROR
Emmett.
really
with most
friends;
It is possible to separate two independent clauses with a semi-colon. It is also possible to separate two independent clauses with a comma and a conjunction, but you can't mix and match the two methods. The sentence above should read, "I really enjoy eating out with most of my friends, but I don't enjoy spending time with Emmett."
Example Question #572 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The old man was extremely tired; he had undergone one of the most arduous ordeals of his long life. NO ERROR
his long life.
The old man
undergone
tired;
NO ERROR
NO ERROR
The sentence above consists of two independent clauses. One way to join two such clauses is to use a semi-colon. The sentence above is correct as it is written.
Example Question #573 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The ceremony began; she lit the candle and passed it to Natasha. No error
passed
lit
No error
The ceremony
began;
No error
"The ceremony began" and "she lit the candle and passed it to Natasha" alone are both independent clauses. A semicolon or a comma with a conjunction can be used to connect the two independent clauses into one sentence. The rest of the sentence is correct as written.
Example Question #574 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
As she was packing for college, Jenna made a list of items to take that included the following things; alarm clock, trash can, and pillows. No error
things;
to take
was
made
No error
things;
When introducing a list of items following an independent clause a colon should be used, not a semicolon. Semicolons combine two independent clauses, or two sentences that could each stand alone. This is not the case here since "alarm clock, trash can, and pillows" cannot be its own sentence.
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