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Example Question #101 : Correcting Other Errors And Recognizing Correct Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Children frequently want toys they have seen advertised on their favorite television shows.
they seen advertised
the advertising they saw
they saw advertising
they have seen advertised
they have seeing advertised
they have seen advertised
The underlined portion of the sentence, while slightly awkwardly worded, is perfectly correct grammatically. All of the other answer choices have either an incorrect verb tense or a construction that muddles the meaning of the sentence.
Example Question #2841 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Although I had not wanted to attend the jazz concert, I was soon covered in goose bumps as I listened to the beautiful music.
Because I had not wanted to attend the concert
Although I had not wanted to attend the concert
If I had not wanted to attend the concert
Unless I had not wanted to attend the concert
After I had not wanted to attend the concert
Although I had not wanted to attend the concert
The sentence is best in its original form.
Example Question #2842 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The most difficult aspect of going to school and work is managing my time effectively.
managing my time effectively
the effective management of my time
I must manage my time effectively
I have to manage my time effectively
the management of my time in an effective way
managing my time effectively
The answer is correct the way it is because the verb that links the sentence, is, should be a noun phrase that is representative of, the most difficult aspect. The answer is also not wordy.
Example Question #2843 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The older employees grew increasingly uncomfortably with the company's new hires, all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
the companies new hires, all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
the company's new hires, all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
the company's new hires all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
the company's new hires, all of who had advanced degrees and more training.
the company's new hires', all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
the company's new hires, all of whom had advanced degrees and more training.
The sentence is perfectly correct as written, with the possesive in "company's" correctly used, the dependent clause set apart from a comma, and the proper usage of "whom." The correct answer choice is to leave the sentence as it is written.
Example Question #2844 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Rivers were once the key transportation method in civilization, but the paving of roads created concrete rivers across land masses.
the roads paving
the road paving
the paving roads
the paving road
the paving of roads
the paving of roads
The underlined portion of the sentence features a gerund, a present verb form that can be used as a noun. Thus, the phrase "the paving of roads" can appropriately be a subject in the phrase, and the sentence is correct as written.
Example Question #2845 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The frequency with which he received fan mail became overwhelming for his assistant.
The frequency with which he received fan mail became overwhelmed for his assistant.
The frequency with which he received fan mail became overwhelming at his assistant.
The frequency with which he received fan mail became overwhelming for his assistant.
The frequency of which he received fan mail became overwhelming for his assistant.
The frequency with which he having received fan mail became overwhelming for his assistant.
The frequency with which he received fan mail became overwhelming for his assistant.
While the sentence as written might sound slightly awkward, there is nothing particularly wrong with it. Further, all of the answer choices that do change something either make the sentence grammatically incorrect or change its meaning. The best answer choice is to leave the sentence unchanged.
Example Question #116 : Recognizing Sentences That Contain No Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Under the old laws, such dissent would have been quickly stamped out.
Under the old laws, which
Under the old laws such
Under the old laws, such
Under the old law which
Under old laws, which
Under the old laws, such
The sentence is completely correct as written. The introductory phrase "Under the old laws" is appropriately set off with a comma, and the use of "such" is the only word that makes the sentence complete.
Example Question #117 : Recognizing Sentences That Contain No Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Gus was surprised that the pizza had taken so long to get to his house.
had taken so long in getting
had taken so long getting
had took so long to get
had took so long in getting
had taken so long to get
had taken so long to get
The answer is correct the way it is because taken is the correct use of the word, take, in the past tense. The answer is also not wordy.
Example Question #118 : Recognizing Sentences That Contain No Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility of every individual to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility. of every individual, to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility of every individual to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government it is the ultimate responsibility of every individual to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility of every individual, to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility, of every individual to engage in the political system.
In a democratic government, it is the ultimate responsibility of every individual to engage in the political system.
The sentence is correct as written. All of the other answer choices make a comma error that either is entirely incorrect or unnecessarily confusing.
Example Question #118 : Recognizing Sentences That Contain No Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The senior, a school leader, made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The senior, a school leader, made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The senior a school leader made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The senior, a school leader, made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students needs.
The senior a school leader, made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The senior, a school leader, making an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The senior, a school leader, made an impassioned plea on behalf of the students' needs.
The sentence is perfectly correct as written, and needs nothing done to improve it. Additionally, every other answer choice makes the sentence incorrect grammatically. The best choice is to leave the sentence as it is written.
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