SAT Writing : Improving Sentences

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Example Questions

Example Question #191 : Comma Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The President initially vetoed the bill, in order to force Congress to revise it; he felt significant changes in the first clause would create more benefits for the working middle classNo error

Possible Answers:

bill, in

No error

middle class

initially

revise it; he felt

Correct answer:

bill, in

Explanation:

A comma is not needed between independent and dependent clauses when the independent clause comes first: "The President initially vetoed the bill in order . . ."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

He typically worked late with the only exception being Fridays.

Possible Answers:

He typically worked late with the only exception being Fridays.

He typically worked late, with the only exception being Fridays.

He typically worked late with the only exception, being Fridays.

He typically worked, late with the only exception being Fridays.

He, typically, worked late with the only exception being Fridays.

Correct answer:

He typically worked late, with the only exception being Fridays.

Explanation:

The phrase "with the only exception being Fridays" is a dependent clause, and needs to be clearly distinguished from the main clause of the sentence. The best way to do this is by setting a comma between the two parts. The only answer choice that correctly places a comma in the sentence is "He typically worked late, with the only exception being Fridays."

Example Question #6 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The former bandleader still dreamed about conducting an ensemble despite having none to conduct.

Possible Answers:

The former bandleader, still dreamed about conducting an ensemble, despite having none to conduct.

The former bandleader still dreams about conducting an ensemble despite having none to conduct.

The former bandleader still dreamed about conducting an ensemble, despite having none to conduct.

The former bandleader still dreamed about conducting an ensemble despite having none to conduct.

The former bandleader still dreamed around conducting an ensemble despite having none to conduct.

Correct answer:

The former bandleader still dreamed about conducting an ensemble, despite having none to conduct.

Explanation:

The phrase "despite having none to conduct" is a dependent clause, a clause that cannot stand as a complete sentence on its own, but provides extra explanation to the body of the sentence. A dependent clause always needs to be set apart from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The only answer choice that does this is "The former bandleader still dreamed about conducting an ensemble despite having none to conduct."

Example Question #3994 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason which stressed their underlings.

Possible Answers:

The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason which stressed their underlings.

The managers decided to make a change, for no particular reason which stressed their underlings.

The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason which stressed, their underlings.

The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason, which stressed their underlings.

The managers, decided to make a change, for no particular reason which stressed their underlings.

Correct answer:

The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason, which stressed their underlings.

Explanation:

The phrase "which stressed their underlings" is a dependent clause, or a clause that relies on the main body of the sentence for its full meaning. Any dependent clause must be set apart from the main body of the sentence by a comma. The answer choice that appropriately uses such a comma is "The managers decided to make a change for no particular reason, which stressed their underlings."

Example Question #311 : Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The rise of violence throughout the decade has been the subject of speculation, by scholars.

Possible Answers:

speculation by, scholars.

speculation, of scholars.

speculation by scholar's.

speculation, by scholars.

speculation by scholars.

Correct answer:

speculation by scholars.

Explanation:

The phrase underlined at the end of the sentence is one whole and complete phrase. Thus, the use of a comma anywhere in the phrase is grammatically incorrect. "Speculation by scholars" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The budding writer was confident in her ability to write plays and poems but she wasn't sure she would be able to write a novel.

Possible Answers:

sure she

budding

but she

No error

a novel

Correct answer:

but she

Explanation:

Since "but she wasn't sure she would be able to write a novel" is a dependent clause (composed of a conjunction, a subject, and a verb), there needs to be a comma before the conjunction "but" in order to seperate it from the independent clause.

Example Question #791 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

In the intervening years, the old man rarely talked to his children as the pain was too much for him to bear.

Possible Answers:

rarely talking to his children as pain was bearing too much for him.

rarely talking to his children, as the pain was too much for him to bear.

rarely talked to his children, as the pain too much for him to bear.

rarely talked to his children as the pain was too much for him to bear.

rarely talked to his children, as the pain was too much for him to bear.

Correct answer:

rarely talked to his children, as the pain was too much for him to bear.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence contains a small punctuation problem. Specifically, the phrase "as the pain was too much to bear," is a phrase that explains the sentence, but is not necessary to its construction. All such phrases need a comma to separate them from the body of the sentence. "Rarely talked to his children as the pain was too much for him to bear," is the best answer choice.

Example Question #15 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

When you talk to your mother like, that you bring shame on the whole family.

Possible Answers:

When you talk to your mother like that you bring shame on the whole, family.

When you talk to your mother like, that you bring shame on the whole family.

When, you talk to your mother like that, you bring shame on the whole family.

When you talk to your mother like that, you bring shame on the whole family.

When you talk to your mother like that you bring shame on, the whole family.

Correct answer:

When you talk to your mother like that, you bring shame on the whole family.

Explanation:

A dependent clause, or a clause which cannot stand on its own, must be separated from the main clause in a sentence by a comma. The full dependent clause in the example sentence is the introductory phrase "When you talk to your mother like that," not "when you talk to your mother like." Thus, the comma attempting to separate the introductory clause in the sentence above actually creates a comma splice error. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "When you talk to your mother like that, you bring shame on the whole family."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas For Dependent Clauses

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

He's always bothering his classmates it's just what he does.

Possible Answers:

He's always bothering, his classmates it's just what he does.

He's always bothering his classmates it's, just, what he does.

He's always bothering, his classmates, it's just what he does.

He's always bothering his classmates, it's just what he does.

He's always bothering his classmates it's just what he does.

Correct answer:

He's always bothering his classmates, it's just what he does.

Explanation:

A dependent clause, or a clause which cannot stand on its own, must be separated from the independent clause in a sentence by a comma. In the example sentence "it's just what he does" is a dependent clause that explains the main clause, and thus must be separated from the main clause with a comma.

Example Question #581 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The actor was quite exhausted and ready to go home, as his performance had been incredibly long.

Possible Answers:

The actor was quite exhausted and ready to go home as, his performance, had been incredibly long.

The actor was quite exhausted and ready to go home. As his performance had been incredibly long.

The actor, was quite exhausted and ready to go home as his performance had been incredibly long.

The actor was, quite, exhausted and ready to go home, as his performance had been incredibly long.

The actor was quite exhausted and ready to go home, as his performance had been incredibly long.

Correct answer:

The actor was quite exhausted and ready to go home, as his performance had been incredibly long.

Explanation:

The example sentence is a compound sentence, one that joins two complete thoughts together to show their connection to one another. Here, the conjunction "as" must be preceded by a comma. The correct answer choice is the one which reproduces the example sentence as written.

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