SAT Writing : Correcting Word Usage Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #45 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

William is undoubtedly the strongest member of the squad, but Richard is most honorable than him.

Possible Answers:

and Richard is most honorable than him.

but Richard is most honorable than him.

or Richard is more honorable than him.

but Richard is the most honorable than him.

but Richard is more honorable than him.

Correct answer:

but Richard is more honorable than him.

Explanation:

When you are comparing one thing to only one other thing, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Superlatives distinguish one item from many others in one particular aspect. Comparatives directly compare one item to only one other item. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "but Richard is more honorable than him."

Note that since the second clause provides information that contradicts the sentiment of the first clause "but" rather than "or" is the correct conjunction.

Example Question #691 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Chicago is a most beautiful city, but New York has a lot going for it.

Possible Answers:

Chicago is a most beautiful city;

Chicago is a most beautiful city,

Chicago is the most beautiful city,

Chicago is a more beautiful city;

Chicago is a more beautiful city,

Correct answer:

Chicago is a more beautiful city,

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Chicago is a more beautiful city,"

Since the two clauses are connected into a compound sentence with a comma and a coordinating conjunction, the comparison between Chicago and New York is grammatically necessary. Note that it is incorrect to follow a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction.

Example Question #47 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

Possible Answers:

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, he is most difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, he is more difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry; because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is most difficult to deal with than John.

Correct answer:

I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In this instance only "Barry" and "John" were mentioned as items of comparison, so the comparative, rather than the superlative construction is required. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I hate dealing with Barry, because he is more difficult to deal with than John."

Example Question #692 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Of all her offspring, Romeo made Lady Montague the prouder.

Possible Answers:

Of all her offspring, Romeo made Lady Montague the prouder.

Of all her offspring; Romeo made Lady Montague the prouder.

Of all her offspring, Romeo made Lady Montague the proudest.

Of all her offspring; Romeo made Lady Montague the proudest.

Of all her offspring, but Romeo made Lady Montague the proudest.

Correct answer:

Of all her offspring, Romeo made Lady Montague the proudest.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The phrase "Of all" is usually a very reliable indicator that a superlative construction will be needed, if you wish to distinguish one particular item from that group. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Of all her offspring, Romeo made Lady Montague the proudest."

Example Question #91 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I have the harder time playing tennis, of all sports it is by far the most difficult for me.

Possible Answers:

I have the hardest time playing tennis,

I have the hardest time playing tennis:

I have the hardest time playing tennis;

I had the harder time playing tennis,

I have the harder time playing tennis,

Correct answer:

I have the hardest time playing tennis,

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In this case, the superlative construction is needed (as it usually is when the phrase "of all" makes an appearance), so the best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I have the hardest time playing tennis,"

Example Question #50 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the better emperor.

Possible Answers:

Of all the eligible candidates; Paulus would make the better emperor.

Of all the eligible candidates: Paulus would make the better emperor.

Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the best emperor.

Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the worse emperor.

Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the better emperor.

Correct answer:

Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the best emperor.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since the word "all" is used, we can assume there are more than two "eligible candidates." The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Of all the eligible candidates, Paulus would make the best emperor."

Example Question #51 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

Possible Answers:

It's often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions; but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, and I don't know if I believe that.

Correct answer:

It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since there are two, and only two, specific kinds of animals mentioned, the correct option is to use the comparative construction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that."

Note that a comma and a coordinating conjunction correctly combine these two independent clauses into a compound sentence.

Example Question #52 : Correcting Comparative And Superlative Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kind man I have ever met.

Possible Answers:

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company, he is the most kind man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the most kindest man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kind man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kinder man I have ever met.

Correct answer:

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since there is no specific point of comparison named in this sentence, we can assume that Father Bill is being distinguished from all other people. The superlative construction is needed. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met."

 

Example Question #92 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

Possible Answers:

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legends of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is ones of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying story I have ever heard.

Correct answer:

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since "the legend of the Pied Piper" is being distinguished from the indefinite (but likely much larger than two) number of stories the writer has "ever heard." The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard."

Example Question #93 : Correcting Adjective And Adverb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, and he will win their inevitable struggle.

Possible Answers:

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, but he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, and he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, then he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

Correct answer:

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since two specific people are being directly compared, the best way to correct the example sentence is, "I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle."

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